I like the flow. It picks up and get's better as the track goes on. The start sounds a little choppy. like u sounded a little scared 2 just GO IN. take the track by the horns man. and also you can work on the diction a little more. it's a little hard 2 make out some words. but those are really minor things. other wise. flow is nice. def gets better as the track goes on. the beat suits u. u are really smooth sounding. i like the beat choice. keep working and writing man
my girl friend I am probably RHH4 asshole of the site lmao THE PUREST MC=ME ARU NAVI My brother=Menace Uncharted
My wife=Chinita the Beautiful
My rival=LaPen
My niggas=Eboyd Kiba Pen LaPen Lord Meth P Noble NtG Render 11thPlauge i woulda done rubber matches if i new u was gone bite Aru Navi/ AHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH i love this line how did i bite aru navi? just curious...
uz every verse he did in dat battle, he tried flipping my verse every single time...it was work n until i won lol but yea u basically tried 2 flip da 1st verse like him
Aru Navi says-"Cause I beez da shitz." West Coast King Style
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