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The Watcher vs Pnoble
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| TheWatcher |
Date: Saturday, 28/Mar/09, 4:54 PM | Message # 1 |
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He hasn't actually accepted and if he doesn't then I hope one of you heads will just delete this, I just don't have anywhere to store it. I felt like practising with battling a bit, I think Pnoble is a great battler btw so I'm not looking to win necessarily, it was more of a .. Okay I see this person, I'm going to try writing something. Constructive criticism would be nice if ya'll have the time to. I generally just sit don't and write for 4 minutes tops, though I generally have some idea of a single bar or w/e before I start. Rules being: 2 verses - 12 bars each.. If you feel like changing them I guess we could. 1st verse: Pensmoke already crushed you, reason? You haven't got much to,
Keep livin, Go ahead, grab a doll, show me how he touched you,
Now you're running around like you won the lotto,
Bitch I'll cut your left testicle off and shove it into a pepsi bottle
Shake it up and feed it to your daughter, grabbed her in the corner,
Just to support her, she won't be suckin dick after this much cause I caught her,
Anyway I'm not sure who told you you could test these,
emcees, dude must've played you like a chess-piece,
My style's pure, I've got the stat-ure to knock your,
face into a box of sense, I hope you dig-my-cure,
The only game you've got is the dude in your sig-na-ture,
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| PNobleDaLyricist |
Date: Saturday, 28/Mar/09, 5:50 PM | Message # 2 |
Emcees
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*yawns* im tired of wack niggas tryna battle someone afta a lost
so ima fuck yo career up wit lyrical intercourse/
and 4 dat stupid pepsi line, u must b on coke
u was scared 2 battle me b4 dat battle wit pensmoke/
i'll spit chess at yo chest if u wanna relate
u have no queens u a bishop cuz u neva go straight/
faggot, i'll hit yo rook wit a hook, knock out yo jaw
think n that u a king til i surround u wit my pawns/
den switch da game up, like checkers i'll jump yo king
go n around yo team like da game was Chinese/
i got yo life in my hands and ima shake it like craps
but yo flow is like that when its drop n da S/ its w/e Added (28/Mar/09, 5:50 Pm)
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Quote (PNobleDaLyricist) im tired of wack niggas tryna battle someone afta a lost im not say n i lost in dat battle(yet, unless da vote is ova me) dats y i said "a" loss
Mainground  RHHF rap 16-7-0 69%(if u round its 70% doe) tournaments won =1 tournament record: 4-3 exhibition record: 12-4
Message edited by PNobleDaLyricist - Saturday, 28/Mar/09, 5:55 PM
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| TheWatcher |
Date: Saturday, 28/Mar/09, 6:03 PM | Message # 3 |
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Heads
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Bah, you changed your sig  Anyway I'll do the rest sometime tomorrow, have an annoying ass headache at the moment
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| PNobleDaLyricist |
Date: Saturday, 28/Mar/09, 6:05 PM | Message # 4 |
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Emcees
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ok...
Mainground RHHF rap 16-7-0 69%(if u round its 70% doe) tournaments won =1 tournament record: 4-3 exhibition record: 12-4
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| TheWatcher |
Date: Saturday, 28/Mar/09, 6:43 PM | Message # 5 |
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Heads
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Maintain the player image, claim that you love to fuck,
But don't front like you love pussy, I know you love the cock,
And don't act like you didn't lose, it's done and you did
That shh is ridiculous man, like Michael didn't fuck those kids
You've got my life in your hands? Come on man,
The only thing you've got there is your dick when you ain't getting no clam,
And as for the lyrical intercourse, I think I'll pass,
I'd rather not catch lyrical aids from your lyrical ass,
And seeing as you're editing shit I use in my lines ya fell,
Why don't you go ahead and delete your rhymes as well,
So use that 'lyrical shit' to put up some defence,
Your whole shit sounds like Common without sense, Decided to have a go at it anyway w/e
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| PNobleDaLyricist |
Date: Saturday, 28/Mar/09, 9:38 PM | Message # 6 |
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Emcees
Posts: 1398
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im destroying you critically manipulating yo similies
instantly viciously, pissing on yo credibility/
u hold n on da mic spit n wreckless like u no me
but when u try 2 move the crowd u stand still like a trophy/
freeze n in da battle, but u not eminem
come back at me i'll turn a monster 2 a gremilin/
Mortal Kombat flow, come at me and i'll finish him
put n beats on his chest like percussion instruments/
im common witout sense? den u reed witout dollas
y'all broke ass niggas get pop'd like collars/
since yo squad aint laid back ima have 2 lay ya down
turn y'all 2 deer and make yo block into a hunting ground/ if u want a 3rd verse u can get it
Mainground RHHF rap 16-7-0 69%(if u round its 70% doe) tournaments won =1 tournament record: 4-3 exhibition record: 12-4
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Sunday, 29/Mar/09, 1:36 AM | Message # 7 |
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watchers 1st verse was pretty damn good but then pnoble came back and was really good too, that 1st round was really hard to judge but i'll only just give that round to pnoble second round i think pnoble won that one so my vote goes to pnoble.
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| PNobleDaLyricist |
Date: Sunday, 29/Mar/09, 3:04 PM | Message # 8 |
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Emcees
Posts: 1398
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1-0 me
Mainground RHHF rap 16-7-0 69%(if u round its 70% doe) tournaments won =1 tournament record: 4-3 exhibition record: 12-4
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Sunday, 29/Mar/09, 3:05 PM | Message # 9 |
Heads
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Noble
Sick With It
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| PNobleDaLyricist |
Date: Sunday, 29/Mar/09, 3:10 PM | Message # 10 |
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Emcees
Posts: 1398
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2-0 me
Mainground RHHF rap 16-7-0 69%(if u round its 70% doe) tournaments won =1 tournament record: 4-3 exhibition record: 12-4
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| TheWatcher |
Date: Sunday, 29/Mar/09, 3:46 PM | Message # 11 |
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Heads
Posts: 941
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Should send one of those 'Vote!11!11' pms out to finish it.
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| PNobleDaLyricist |
Date: Thursday, 02/Apr/09, 10:51 PM | Message # 12 |
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Emcees
Posts: 1398
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i dont no how 2 do dat Added (02/Apr/09, 10:51 Pm)
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well...
Mainground RHHF rap 16-7-0 69%(if u round its 70% doe) tournaments won =1 tournament record: 4-3 exhibition record: 12-4
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| PNobleDaLyricist |
Date: Friday, 03/Apr/09, 10:46 PM | Message # 13 |
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Emcees
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3-0 Added (03/Apr/09, 10:46 Pm)
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no one else vote n so i think i should say i win
Mainground RHHF rap 16-7-0 69%(if u round its 70% doe) tournaments won =1 tournament record: 4-3 exhibition record: 12-4
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