He hasn't actually accepted and if he doesn't then I hope one of you heads will just delete this, I just don't have anywhere to store it. I felt like practising with battling a bit, I think Pnoble is a great battler btw so I'm not looking to win necessarily, it was more of a .. Okay I see this person, I'm going to try writing something. Constructive criticism would be nice if ya'll have the time to. I generally just sit don't and write for 4 minutes tops, though I generally have some idea of a single bar or w/e before I start.
Rules being: 2 verses - 12 bars each.. If you feel like changing them I guess we could.
1st verse:
Pensmoke already crushed you, reason? You haven't got much to,
Keep livin, Go ahead, grab a doll, show me how he touched you,
Now you're running around like you won the lotto,
Bitch I'll cut your left testicle off and shove it into a pepsi bottle
Shake it up and feed it to your daughter, grabbed her in the corner,
Just to support her, she won't be suckin dick after this much cause I caught her,
Anyway I'm not sure who told you you could test these,
emcees, dude must've played you like a chess-piece,
My style's pure, I've got the stat-ure to knock your,
face into a box of sense, I hope you dig-my-cure,
The only game you've got is the dude in your sig-na-ture,
