Doc Death Vs. The Nemesis

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Doc Death Vs. The Nemesis ((Text Battle))

Doc Death Vs. The Nemesis

eboyd

Date: Saturday, 11/Oct/08, 3:43 PM | Message # 1

Heads

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rules:

first verse =8 or less bars
second verse =10 or less
third verse = 13 or less
4th = 16 or less
5th = unlimited

loser gets their guts removed with a spoon and spread across the 405 freeway South in LA just before the Sepulveda exit.

the little bitch goes first.

my new theme song

erikboyd60@hotmail.com

"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

-T.S. Eliot

battle record:

7-0-0

AgentX

Date: Monday, 13/Oct/08, 3:45 AM | Message # 2

Rappers

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as i grab the scalpel and the stethoscope, this certificate of death i wrote/
aiming straight for your throat, rip out your tonsils and leave Adam's Apple broke/
then i write a murder note and i'm gone/
i make you want to commit suicide with my genasydal song/
as i destroy this man who can't settle on a name for himself/
i come in at Mach 1 and i'm straight bombing stealth/
so you can call me Theodore Kaczynski, make you into minced meat/
and i'm the commodore of this poetic flight, call me Robert Pinsky.

prepare to be X'd out!

Agent X on MySpace

Deadly-Sin

Date: Monday, 13/Oct/08, 6:21 AM | Message # 3

Removed

I see your trying to hard to get a point across
cause now i know that i got your mind lost in
outta space il erace ya face into a place
where not even death it self can relate
to survive you aint gonna strive to this battle
your gonna die like innocent animals at a farm cattle
so just put ya mother fucking mind at ease
you spitting shit only thing you got is an STD disease

Agent X

Date: Monday, 13/Oct/08, 12:29 PM | Message # 4

Watchers

my abundant raps keep you running laps and make you shut your trap/
you're spitting redundant crap. STD disease? i'm taking you off the map/
i'm busting caps and leaving gaps, hitting hard like Warren Sapp/
take it personal Kadachy, call this a lyrical bitch slap/
this is a revolution, your raps need to go through a vernacular evolution/
each line you spit is plain and simple noise pollution/
for my rhymes i should be locked inside a mental institution/
you'll win only in collusion, i'm causing molecular diffusion/
leaving your brain in destitution mentally fucked like prostitution/
for my lyrical explosion, no there is no resolution.

Deadly-Sin

Date: Monday, 13/Oct/08, 12:35 PM | Message # 5

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whats the salutation you need
to face this optical illusion my rhyme style change like
evolution lyricaly fusion with the revolution leaving
ya blind from your own lyrical pollution
ll have you lost in this resolution shock ya temple
with electruction il have you in dilution come to
confucian quit stressing this is redemption known
as the absolution, i got ya fucking soul scared
with Mental confusion jumping the conclusion
will leave ya body a bloody execution!

This may sound like biting, but i wrote this on wordpad, it was gonna be for thr cipher
i had no idea you had used one the same,i only used it cause i cant be fucked typing.

Agent X

Date: Monday, 13/Oct/08, 12:50 PM | Message # 6

Watchers

whatever bitch, i'm still going to rip your ass. i'll write my next verse soon.

Deadly-Sin

Date: Monday, 13/Oct/08, 1:08 PM | Message # 7

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Quote (Agent X)

whatever bitch, i'm still going to rip your ass. i'll write my next verse soon

im gonna have to do this later tomorow im recording in the studio on tuesday plus
i have b-boying before hand, and right now i cant be fucked thinking of words
oh and erik boyd is much cooler then u

DUDE!!, someone already voted!!!! i went to "view results" and agent.x had 1 vote
so to make this a little more fair i gave myself a vote!!!

Lord_Meth

Date: Monday, 13/Oct/08, 8:52 PM | Message # 8