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Spring Tourney Semi Final Battle #2: Render215 vs Mak
MAK_The_Lucid_Tongue Date: Tuesday, 26/May/09, 2:00 PM | Message # 16

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Nice verse... Glad to see you had a productive weekend putting that together happy

No need to sew it on cuz the leaf's embedded in my heart
I'll stomp thru' your city with the kryllie(krylon) and 'spit' all over your art
Son, you a disgrace to the whole motherfuckin' pennsilvania
My city loves me cuz my pen's ill and spill blood like transilvania
Your lips drip of pussy spit, whole flow pink... straight laybia
Lyrically fuckin' you in the ass today so in a way u might say I'm date rapin' ya
I like how you said you'll never catch us smokin' on the same blunt
True talk, that's cuz I only smoke Philly's... What city you say you from?
And For those loonies and toonies my goonies'll pull toolies
If truly you knew me you wouldn't try to fool me with stool speech
Ya, You a shit talkin' imposter plus confused by the rasta
That ain't me in my sig but still you'll dred when i lock ya...
In the site of my scope, calmly cock back and pop ya
Come to your wake, laugh in ur moms face then spit on the grave where I drop ya
This ain't animal rap its canibal rap, believe the Tongue will taste victory
After my planned attack to blam this cat and eat this pussy weak emcee
I'm a motherfuckin' veteran this kid is just a lame roo-kie to me
I'll come to your hood, defeat you, cassidy, beenie and freeway and make history
And God forbid that these judges mistakenly hand a loss to me
If they do I hope when they see the truth they can render an apology.........


"UNTIL THEY STOP ME, BURY, MURDER ME OR DROP ME, I GOT...THUG LUV FOR MY NATIONWIDE POSSE"

Message edited by MAK_The_Lucid_Tongue - Tuesday, 26/May/09, 2:03 PM
Render215 Date: Tuesday, 26/May/09, 2:06 PM | Message # 17

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sorry man.. i write my raps on the spot... anybody i battled will attest to that one...

Thats why I'm always original with it... So, Yeah... No writtens on my part...


"People said his brain was infected by Devils..."
MAK_The_Lucid_Tongue Date: Tuesday, 26/May/09, 2:20 PM | Message # 18

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Quote (Render215)
sorry man.. i write my raps on the spot... anybody i battled will attest to that one...
Thats why I'm always original with it... So, Yeah... No writtens on my part...

So What?!?! Me too....Do it!!!.........defend yourself with a verse, I dont wanna hear all that shit^^^...... let's just finish this Bro'... i hate when the threads get filled with convo, U know?!?!


"UNTIL THEY STOP ME, BURY, MURDER ME OR DROP ME, I GOT...THUG LUV FOR MY NATIONWIDE POSSE"

11thPlague Date: Tuesday, 26/May/09, 3:54 PM | Message # 19

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For real im waiting on that shit
Render215 Date: Tuesday, 26/May/09, 6:42 PM | Message # 20

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LOL... Chill out MAK.. It's not like I'm leaving 4 the weekend or anything... I was at work fool... But I'll still school you..

I used to puff a Phillie Per Diem, Until i figured it out,
U can't roll enough weed in them.. It's Big El's I'm about,
Runnin' your mouth, I'll burn a quarter sized hole in your couch,
I'm writing you off, What on God's Earth are u writing about?
U can try to diss me all day, but your raps is still gay,
When it was your turn to bust, the dumb-head-dread ran away,
expeditious retreat with a white flag, Surrender to Sir Render,
What the blood clot, quit rapping; throw that hand in a blender
Or just throw in the towel, by now i thought you'd be better,
I am the true B-Boy Render, grit down to every shaded letter,
Every new season, whatever weather, I'm the ill trend setter,
With a flow that's wetter, Feel like I'm battling Helen Keller,
I know you can't see me, tossed you out the window like a CD,
I pointed that out earlier, before i smoked you like a bidi,
You write lyrics like a Rock Ballad, a flow, you are without it,
Do i need to continue, MAK winning against Rend? I highly doubt it,
I just rearranged my flow's viscosity, with a light speed velocity,
Turn your cabbage to coleslaw, Your accusations won't abolish me,
And Next round you cannot follow me, I'm an oddity, an anomaly,
You're probably just realizing, that I AM WHAT YOU OUGHT TO BE.....

Blap.

cat


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Aristotle Date: Tuesday, 26/May/09, 6:50 PM | Message # 21

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This battle was pure fire!!

By far one of the best on this site so far

ima have to break each verse down before i vote...



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11thPlague Date: Tuesday, 26/May/09, 10:36 PM | Message # 22

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Quote (MAK_The_Lucid_Tongue)
o need to sew it on cuz the leaf's embedded in my heart
I'll stomp thru' your city with the kryllie(krylon) and 'spit' all over your art
Son, you a disgrace to the whole motherfuckin' pennsilvania
My city loves me cuz my pen's ill and spill blood like transilvania
Your lips drip of pussy spit, whole flow pink... straight laybia
Lyrically fuckin' you in the ass today so in a way u might say I'm date rapin' ya
I like how you said you'll never catch us smokin' on the same blunt
True talk, that's cuz I only smoke Philly's... What city you say you from?
And For those loonies and toonies my goonies'll pull toolies
If truly you knew me you wouldn't try to fool me with stool speech
Ya, You a shit talkin' imposter plus confused by the rasta
That ain't me in my sig but still you'll dred when i lock ya...
In the site of my scope, calmly cock back and pop ya
Come to your wake, laugh in ur moms face then spit on the grave where I drop ya
This ain't animal rap its canibal rap, believe the Tongue will taste victory
After my planned attack to blam this cat and eat this pussy weak emcee
I'm a motherfuckin' veteran this kid is just a lame roo-kie to me
I'll come to your hood, defeat you, cassidy, beenie and freeway and make history
And God forbid that these judges mistakenly hand a loss to me
If they do I hope when they see the truth they can render an apology.........

Quote (Render215)
I used to puff a Phillie Per Diem, Until i figured it out,
U can't roll enough weed in them.. It's Big El's I'm about,
Runnin' your mouth, I'll burn a quarter sized hole in your couch,
I'm writing you off, What on God's Earth are u writing about?
U can try to diss me all day, but your raps is still gay,
When it was your turn to bust, the dumb-head-dread ran away,
expeditious retreat with a white flag, Surrender to Sir Render,
What the blood clot, quit rapping; throw that hand in a blender
Or just throw in the towel, by now i thought you'd be better,
I am the true B-Boy Render, grit down to every shaded letter,
Every new season, whatever weather, I'm the ill trend setter,
With a flow that's wetter, Feel like I'm battling Helen Keller,
I know you can't see me, tossed you out the window like a CD,
I pointed that out earlier, before i smoked you like a bidi,
You write lyrics like a Rock Ballad, a flow, you are without it,
Do i need to continue, MAK winning against Rend? I highly doubt it,
I just rearranged my flow's viscosity, with a light speed velocity,
Turn your cabbage to coleslaw, Your accusations won't abolish me,
And Next round you cannot follow me, I'm an oddity, an anomaly,
You're probably just realizing, that I AM WHAT YOU OUGHT TO BE.....

DAMN!!!!!!!

EmSeeD Date: Wednesday, 27/May/09, 5:01 AM | Message # 23

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i give the first round to Mak coz he had some clever punchlines,
i gave second round to render,

the last round was really close and both were so dope i had to read both a few times but i'll only just vote for Mak. Great battle though.


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11thPlague Date: Wednesday, 27/May/09, 8:45 AM | Message # 24

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I go with render
Lord Meth Date: Wednesday, 27/May/09, 1:01 PM | Message # 25

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i vote Render cuz he stayed consistent and brought some really dope lines
MAK_The_Lucid_Tongue Date: Wednesday, 27/May/09, 2:39 PM | Message # 26

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stayed consistent

What's that mean? 'consistently' weak with the punches?!?!? happy - just playin'....... Nice battle! vote up people so this tourney can get to the final and FINALLY be over with. wacko


"UNTIL THEY STOP ME, BURY, MURDER ME OR DROP ME, I GOT...THUG LUV FOR MY NATIONWIDE POSSE"

Render215 Date: Wednesday, 27/May/09, 4:25 PM | Message # 27

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What's that mean? 'consistently' weak with the punches?!?!?

Do we have to go another round??? lmao


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mistaflo Date: Wednesday, 27/May/09, 4:27 PM | Message # 28

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haha yeah render i feel u dealt the damage...

The 16 YEAR OLD EXCELLENCY!!

i getta shape up...with a handful of figures
i "wReck-Tangledand" unprepared emcees with triggers
i rap circles round this square it aint fair when i spit!
beating me? you nuts! like pubic hair on my dick! -Mista flo

Aristotle Date: Wednesday, 27/May/09, 4:32 PM | Message # 29

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Mak took the first round
especially with that last bar

Render got the next two rounds tho IMO
both finished strong, punches were ill

overall amazing battle... no diss to any of the other battlers in this tourny but this should of been for the title

Vote: Render

Peace...



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EmSeeD Date: Wednesday, 27/May/09, 9:18 PM | Message # 30

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4-1 to render so far

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