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Lord Meth vs. BoBo
mistaflo Date: Thursday, 25/Jun/09, 10:04 PM | Message # 16

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You seemed to have improve....LMAO!!! Fuck it, who am I kidding!
You'll still get ripped and slashed like vegetables in my kitchen
What is your mission, a Comedian? We only laugh at your wackness
Your funny in a bad way, you must want to get your ass kicked
The way I rip niggas is classic, leave niggas blue like Mavericks
You hungry aint ya? Ill slice your stomach in half like Gastric-
-Bypass the embarrassment and forfeit immediately
Matter of fact dont quit just right now cuz it'll be cowardly
Your making no sense (cents) like a drunk hobo with a cup
Too many dicks on your mind, explains why your so eager to get fucked
I cant counter your verses cuz they look played on they own
Its like a 5th grader re-wrote them while you were away from home
Your scatter-brain thoughts are too unfocused to hit me on point
I got all worked up for nothing, like a cheap slut you disappoint
Aye yo Menace! this yo boy? You better get him before his last verse
Or protect him like the Pope, either way hes walking in a glass hearse

BEST verse you have ever written. hall of fame worthy. excellent.


The 16 YEAR OLD EXCELLENCY!!

i getta shape up...with a handful of figures
i "wReck-Tangledand" unprepared emcees with triggers
i rap circles round this square it aint fair when i spit!
beating me? you nuts! like pubic hair on my dick! -Mista flo

BobO Date: Friday, 26/Jun/09, 5:44 AM | Message # 17

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Debating and relating and your lyrics kind'a boring,
If you put those on a beat, you'll start crying "why it ain't workin'?"
Later in the morning in your storage eatin' porridge,
In your lonely sleazy corner you'll be waitin' the performer,
Oh yes I'm the comedian, no wonder you recognise me cuz' you're my teammate,
Feel free to clown yourself embarrassing me with no humor taste,
Nigga look deep in the mirror so you can regret you pulled the trigger,
Stop kickin' weak rap and start wearin' the fool's cap,
You're not match for my speed trap,
Well if I'm makin'no sense you DO make no defence,

You skittish motherfucker clean your skin with skim-milk,
Then abort your skinflint critics and become a skinner,
Even an alien sees you don't have imagination start,
Those punchlines are not heavy enough to make the amusement part,
Those verses are for nurses, this is only bullshit art,
Don't have the power to make a smile at ya' crappy lines in fact,
I understand your gammy mind so I accept your rap,
So you're the lord and I'm the speedy slaughter,
Pillow fight you and drown you in your bath water,
Then I will inject you with ink to make sure you're a goner


Don't miss the chainchancetrain cuz' your brain might regret his traces

Message edited by BobO - Friday, 26/Jun/09, 5:47 AM
Lord_Meth Date: Friday, 26/Jun/09, 12:18 PM | Message # 18

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Ill have my verse up later today
Im on a laptop right now and I aint got enough time to write my verse


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BobO Date: Friday, 26/Jun/09, 3:37 PM | Message # 19

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key' man I'll wait

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Lord_Meth Date: Sunday, 28/Jun/09, 1:13 PM | Message # 20

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Quote (BobO)
Debating and relating and your lyrics kind'a boring,
If you put those on a beat, you'll start crying "why it ain't workin'?"
Later in the morning in your storage eatin' porridge,
In your lonely sleazy corner you'll be waitin' the performer,
Oh yes I'm the comedian, no wonder you recognise me cuz' you're my teammate,
Feel free to clown yourself embarrassing me with no humor taste,
Nigga look deep in the mirror so you can regret you pulled the trigger,
Stop kickin' weak rap and start wearin' the fool's cap,
You're not match for my speed trap,
Well if I'm makin'no sense you DO make no defence,
You skittish motherfucker clean your skin with skim-milk,
Then abort your skinflint critics and become a skinner,
Even an alien sees you don't have imagination start,
Those punchlines are not heavy enough to make the amusement part,
Those verses are for nurses, this is only bullshit art,
Don't have the power to make a smile at ya' crappy lines in fact,
I understand your gammy mind so I accept your rap,
So you're the lord and I'm the speedy slaughter,
Pillow fight you and drown you in your bath water,
Then I will inject you with ink to make sure you're a goner

okay heres my last verse and to put the nail in the coffin

This is it, no way in hell this battle should be a toss up
To sway the undecided voters, Ima get mean and boss up
U insist I make no defense, thats bull, Im like Mutumbo to you
I pin your verses to the fense, hit you so hard you crumbled in two

Pnoble may have got me but Im still the one and only Truth
You a fag like Liberace, one dick aint enough, u prefer the Duece
My beast is foaming at the mouth like Moose, I shred niggas like you
Im untouchable, you couldnt touch me even if we was stuck by glue

Thats the good honest truth, I aint fucking around anymore with you
You a true mess, you look like an ape walking around an afro of pubes
Thats not news, in grade school you were always the one to get abused
You went out for the football team but got raped without K.Y. Lube

SO WATS TRUE?!?!? You cant see that Im iller than you!!?!?!!?
I could be in my death bed with a closed bowel and still shit on you!!!!

LMAO!!!!!

Okay Im clowning, BoBo getting offened
He hasnt felt so much embarrassment since his ass got back-handed
You candy ass rappers get ate, just an appetizer for my hunger
You walked in a noose on purpose and for that, your getting hung longer

I could stop right now cuz I think I have this wrapped up in a bag
If I kept going any longer, you'll fear me too much like I was your dad
Im back now bitches, goodbye retirement, wat a drag..... sad
Ill end this battle with a swig of Vodka and a foot placed deep within your ass

Im done

good battle BoBo

yall can vote now


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Uncharted Date: Sunday, 28/Jun/09, 4:07 PM | Message # 21

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meth got this one, bobo had too many suspect lines

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EmSeeD Date: Sunday, 28/Jun/09, 6:39 PM | Message # 22

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good battle by both guys,

but i give it to meth, i'm glad he's using more punchlines now, very nice battle meth.


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Aristotle Date: Sunday, 28/Jun/09, 8:00 PM | Message # 23

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Meth got this

Stay up BobO



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CTownHoodProductions Date: Sunday, 28/Jun/09, 11:57 PM | Message # 24

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meth

G-Flex Tha Vet and NtG Duo

"Straight from Thieveland, better known as Cleveland"

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BobO Date: Monday, 29/Jun/09, 4:22 AM | Message # 25

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tell me what should I improve....what's missing in my verses...without considering the first line dry

thx


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Message edited by BobO - Monday, 29/Jun/09, 4:22 AM
Uncharted Date: Monday, 29/Jun/09, 4:24 AM | Message # 26

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be more consistent and stop it with the attempts of homo suspect lines, there bad.And u need more sense in your lines

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BobO Date: Monday, 29/Jun/09, 4:29 AM | Message # 27

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I don't get it....consistence..

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Uncharted Date: Monday, 29/Jun/09, 4:33 AM | Message # 28

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I don't get it....consistence..

u have your good moments then have these lines that r just off and sometimes homo

Added (29/Jun/09, 4:33 Am)
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i used to have the same problem


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BobO Date: Monday, 29/Jun/09, 4:36 AM | Message # 29

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aha...ok thanks a lot...I will consider

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EmSeeD Date: Monday, 29/Jun/09, 4:51 AM | Message # 30

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tell me what should I improve....what's missing in my verses...without considering the first line dry

thx

just come up with more word play and punch lines, the rhymes were good and the flow was really good just need more word play


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