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Uncharted vs. El Matador
EmSeeD Date: Tuesday, 14/Sep/10, 6:38 AM | Message # 16

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you guys wanna cut it to two verses and vote or just forget it?

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El_Matador Date: Tuesday, 14/Sep/10, 11:00 AM | Message # 17

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LMAO! Damn, I'm sorry I completely forgot about that battle! Shame on a nikka lol I'm sorry.
Em-seed cut it to 2-verses battle.


MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger

EmSeeD Date: Tuesday, 14/Sep/10, 6:27 PM | Message # 18

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Round 1:

Uncharted

Quote (Uncharted)
have ya vocal cords split like you swallowed knives/
whats up?, nigga im in the sky, but wit down to earth rhymes/
universal verses take into the universe, givin yo face high fives/
like i already won this battle, i finish him off like mortal kombat/
sub zero flow, scorpio attraction will have ya IQ subtracted/
i produced, wrote, directed while i sit back and watch yall actin/
el matador, i fuck raps up like how you fuck bitches till yo dick is sore/
100 points per bar, better than your average fucking an average horror/

i thought this part of your verse was good, i liked the line about 'giving your face hi fives'

Quote (Uncharted)
when the sun rise, the beast come out of me/
then i catch my pray and eat it, while facing the east/
you are not relevant, not current, lyrically your low density/
thats why i'll have el matador lost at in the middle of the sea/
fishin for emcees, caught by hooks and tangled by lines/

i can see what you were trying to do but i don't think the punchlines came off that well for me, maybe if you switched the lines around, maybe you could change it to something like "your flow wouldn't be current if you were in the middle of the sea" instead or "you could be, lost in the sea, but your flow still ain't current"

El Matador

Quote (El_Matador)
Hip-hop is not a house, hip-hop's a brothel full of sluts
I don't pay, I got pay for sellin' their butts
If the beast come out of you when the sun shine bright
Then bitch come out of you when moon shine white
So it seems we've got polar night all the time
My puns shake grounds
Shaking off crowns, bussin' rounds
And leaving scars and wounds
Apocalyptic sounds pop your ear drums like Dolby Surround
Haunting you like Cerber, blood-hungry hound
Study deadly techniques complex and profound
Before I send you six feet deep Ima put a pound in your mouth
Uncharted, 14 years old and already is a Chi-Town disgrace
I start to spit and destroy the stage bringin' back Chernobyl's taste
When I done my mic ends up in container for radioactive waste

i thought El Matador's verse was pretty good and he flipped the lines pretty well, so i give round 1 to him

Round 2:

Quote (Uncharted)
ya mic was dipped in radioactive waste, leaving ya flow disfigured/
you know my shit was good yet imma chi town disgrace, go figure/
let me paint a picture, while i'll use your face as an canvas/
drawing me as an shark while eating this mermaid in atlantis/
listen to this el matador, you aint too bright/
the female dog(bitch) maybe in YOU when moon shine bright/
but this werewolf will have you lyrically sliced and diced at midnight/
howling victory as soon as that moon hits the middle of the sky/
i maybe 14 but 14 times my rhyme ability can produce more than pi/
why, is your name el matador when you cant withstand my bull form?/
how many big L's are you gonna take when facing the children of the corn?/
14 year old ressurected hip hop killin el matador, esscence re born/
X'd out this emcee having his little fans and crews mourn/
But you having me x'd out is like trying to censor porn/
scratched up deadly technics(techniques), havin yo crap perplexed/
rep a few punchline pounds in your mouth when my mic flex/

some good attempts at flips,

Quote (uncharted)
why, is your name el matador when you cant withstand my bull form?/
this was a good idea but i think there was an opportunity to maybe use a punchline involving "bull" or "bullshit" instead

Quote (El_Matador)
This verse will say "goodbye"
And leave you on a frying pan, watch you burn and cry
Yeah, you won't die dry
You can drink your tears of defeat runnin' from your eye
And I'ma tell one more thing, iight?
Moon does not shine bright, that's why we call night "night" lol
Go back to school, fool, your brain needs some heavy training
Werewolf? You look like one, ask barber for heavy shaving
I roll with sadistic, linguistic-twisted shizznit that will leave you harassed
You howl because I made you stick this weak diss up in your crab-ass
I am the Matador - and I can't withstand your Bull-Shit
Your kindergarten against my cruel elite?
Watch me drop jewel spit
With indestructible delivery like a warship
To Chi-Town, your verse was a disgrace bomb
Shit was so weak, I could win this battle just doing one facepalm

started off slow but then got good halfway with the shaving line, the bull-shit line was a good flip, idk about the facepalm though, could provide the next guy to flip or something and idk how you can win a battle by facepalming yourself :D this round was the closest i have to call this round a draw, it seemed like el matador may have rushed his 2nd round or held back a bit. but overall el matador gets my vote

round 1: el matador
round 2: tie

vote: el matador


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Treach Date: Wednesday, 15/Sep/10, 10:43 AM | Message # 19

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El Mat killed him*

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Now you gotta have some sex appeal to get a record deal"
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Message edited by Treach - Wednesday, 15/Sep/10, 12:50 PM
EmSeeD Date: Wednesday, 15/Sep/10, 11:19 PM | Message # 20

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bump

2 - 0 to el matador


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El_Matador Date: Thursday, 16/Sep/10, 10:15 PM | Message # 21

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BUMP FUCKAS!

MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger

abanks47 Date: Monday, 20/Sep/10, 9:51 PM | Message # 22

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matador

A WELL DRESSED SKELETON SLOWLY CUTS YOUR THROAT.

"I Have No Fear Whatsoever of Anybody or Anything" -Malcolm X

“those who consider themselves the most adamant adherents of “real” hip-hop can also be the least knowledgeable.” –Adilifu Nama; an excert from his perception of Nas’s “Genesis”

Adam Date: Monday, 20/Sep/10, 10:22 PM | Message # 23

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the bull




I JUST EXPLODED INTO RAINBOWS AND LOLLIPOPS!
EmSeeD Date: Monday, 20/Sep/10, 10:40 PM | Message # 24

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the bull wins

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Adam Date: Monday, 20/Sep/10, 10:45 PM | Message # 25

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[img]http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_72SQM3H_Wpw/SiBJnXm0qdI/AAAAAAAAAb0/BPkrp2Zzi6s/s400/bull%2Bfighter%2Bgored.jpg[/img]




I JUST EXPLODED INTO RAINBOWS AND LOLLIPOPS!
El_Matador Date: Monday, 20/Sep/10, 11:06 PM | Message # 26

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Quote (Adam)
[img]http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_72SQM3H_Wpw/SiBJnXm0qdI/AAAAAAAAAb0/BPkrp2Zzi6s/s400/bull%2Bfighter%2Bgored.jpg[/img]

LMAO! that's BULL-SHIT

btw thanks for the battle Uncharted


MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger

Adam Date: Monday, 20/Sep/10, 11:08 PM | Message # 27

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How come my picture failed :(




I JUST EXPLODED INTO RAINBOWS AND LOLLIPOPS!
El_Matador Date: Monday, 20/Sep/10, 11:09 PM | Message # 28

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because your link is too long

MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger

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