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METH vs. MENACE
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Thursday, 29/Jan/09, 8:43 PM | Message # 16 |
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Quote (Menace) why so late ?? i could write my verse right now and ok if u want to concentrate take your time but me personally i give them on the ground from the top of my head but only the raps the poetry takes much more time
Yea I understand that but LMAO I got something special under my sleeve for u and Lethaface
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 9:08 PM | Message # 17 |
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Oh nevermind with the huge concpet verse Im gonna just go off the head
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 9:38 PM | Message # 18 |
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Quote (Menace) You try to be smart but you fail
Imma fucking destroy you on a logarithmic scale
Imma light and puff in your face a coffin nail
Cause i know you are pussy cause you drink sperm whale
Your kids gonna remember me and speak about my heroic tale
Cause you a born loser not an alpha male
Come on we all know you been fucked in jail
Yeah we know your boyfriend is on the top priority mail
Don't run take a deep breath and exhale
Don't worry your boyfriend gonna fuck under your tail
Come on we all know who gonna win so just bail
My English vocab is so rich like i graduated from Yale
Man I'm getting bored of you so I'm getting my scotch gale
You can't compete whit my writing style cause i write in braille
I'm a giant beside you cause you a little quail
Go drink sucker a horses stale
With a vice grip around the mic, I make the crowd scream for air
When I drop a hardcore punchline, niggaz go crazy like Ben Wallaces hair
Menace aint there nomore cuz he got beamed out of existence
Quit thinking off of a Logarithmic scale, and be the atheist u r be realistic
Ill shatter ya hopes like the US did Japan and rain atomic bombs on the mic
Menace's ears fall off cuz they cant believe wat they heard, I live up to the hype
Im a novice but still, I got skills to make u feel like ur in a low class
Ill devestate ya heart more than the death of ur mother in the 911 plane crash
I dispise Mcs who be feelin themselves a bit toooo much
thinking u confindent enough to battle me but u too soft to be the diamond in the rough
U blow more than a tornado and suck more than a tropical cyclone
Battlin me is like removing jewels from a mummy, shouldve left me alone
Ill rip the jacker better than Biz and blow Menace into another dimension like the Wiz
There Ill torment him for eternity and pop his lungs like soda pop fizz
Im built for action and dissing not slowing down and ceasing up
Ill kick Menace's dead corpse around and stepped on it as if it was a dog pup
I show no remorse, chase u until u get tired and then ur forced
To surrender ur freedom to me, then Ill put u on my plantation to work
Whip u for no reason and fuck ya wife and many daughters
Kill ya sons using a croquet mallet and let u watch to witness the slaughter (croquet mallet..?!?! LMAO!!)
So Menace let this be a reminder to watch u who beef wit
Cuz u'll never kno which ocean yo wifes body might wash up in LMAO oh man I just wanna tell u how great and fun its been battlin with u Menace LMAO
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| eboyd |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 9:57 PM | Message # 19 |
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Lol! That verse was written in such a way that the flow was on some Kool Moe Dee shit! It was like Kool Moe Dee writing a horrorcore verse!!! LMFAO!
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 10:01 PM | Message # 20 |
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Quote (eboyd) Lol! That verse was written in such a way that the flow was on some Kool Moe Dee shit! It was like Kool Moe Dee writing a horrorcore verse!!! LMFAO!
..hehe..is that good..?
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| eboyd |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 10:10 PM | Message # 21 |
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Well, on one hand, I like Kool Moe Dee, and he was the first big battle rapper (slayed LL but LL won on looks), but on the other, Moe Dee's flow and delivery always give off a joky style which wouldn't be taken serious in horrorcore.
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 10:12 PM | Message # 22 |
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Quote (eboyd) Moe Dee's flow and delivery always give off a joky style which wouldn't be taken serious in horrorcore.
WEll yea I feel wat u mean now I wasnt going for a DIRECT tag at horrorcore but more of a Luda/Horrorcore type
I made my punchlines like that intentially for laughs and shit (if they were even funny)
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| Menace |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 10:19 PM | Message # 23 |
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ok and by the way I'm not a "atheist" I'm an agnostic its a huge difference  and this battle was the fun i started liking this Yo I will shatter your God into pieces
I will cut yaal heads off cause my power increases
I'm a beast from another dimension I will kill your family and niece's
Shatter your dreams and steal your soul
Your so rotten your home is the center for disease control
Don't make me angry cause i will kill all your church roll
Man your so smelly i think you live in the toilet bowl
You ain't hardcore so change the role
Imma strip you naked and hang you on a public pole
You think I'm a rookie?? nah whit you imma hit the goal
Your so gay and old dated u still use ancient kohl
You use make up just too look pretty for your boyfriend Bob Dole
Is even fore told in a Ancient Egyptian scroll
That you fucked up the back door
Imma wreck more havoc then the peloponnesian war
You will be my prisoner from the battlefield and i will torture you till you implore
Make you a gay bars local professional whore
Make you see a unending gore
Just prepare for what is more
In front of the Anti Christ you will stand before
HAHA you can't stand beside me so make your way out the door
Cause you might feel a deep pain in your core
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 10:22 PM | Message # 24 |
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Quote (Menace) Yo I will shatter your God into pieces
I will cut yaal heads off cause power my increases
I'm a beast from another dimension I will kill your family and niece's
Shatter your dreams and steal your soul
Your so rotten your home is the center for disease control
Don't make me angry cause i will kill all your church roll
Man your so smelly i think you live in the toilet bowl
You ain't hardcore so change the role
Imma strip you naked and hang you on a public pole
You think I'm a rookie?? nah whit you imma hit the goal
Your so gay and old dated u still use ancient kohl
You use make up just too look pretty for your boyfriend Bob Dole
Is even fore told in a Ancient Egyptian scroll
That you fucked up the back door
Imma wreck more havoc then the peloponnesian war
You will be prisoner from the battlefield and i will torture you till you implore
Make you a gay bars local professional whore
Make you see a unending gore
Just prepare for what is more
You front of the Anti Christ you will stand before
HAHA you can't stand beside me so make your way out the door
Cause you might feel a deep pain in your core
that was a good ass verse LMAO!! Ok the voting is open now!!
SO VOTE FUCK HEADS OR DIE!!!!!!
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| Menace |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 10:28 PM | Message # 25 |
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Quote (Lord_Meth) that was a good ass verse LMAO!! lol u think ?? i think that was my most garbage shit i ever wrote tough this the beginning but i gave my best
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 10:31 PM | Message # 26 |
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Quote (Menace) lol u think ?? i think that was my most garbage shit i ever wrote tough this the beginning but i gave my best
That was IMO ur best verse because u started to use wat u kno in that verse and u know history and u should start to use that into ur verses
after u do that ull be like Vinnie Paz and start hitting were it hurts And one more tip of advice try changing ur rhyming syllables cuz at the end of ur bars u kept on rhyming off of that one word and it kinda played down ur bars one after another
so throw some rhyming variety in there, I kno that wont be hard for u cuz u know more words than any of us on this site
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| Menace |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 10:38 PM | Message # 27 |
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Quote (Lord_Meth) And one more tip of advice try changing ur rhyming syllables cuz at the end of ur bars u kept on rhyming off of that one word and it kinda played down ur bars one after another
so throw some rhyming variety in there, I kno that wont be hard for u cuz u know more words than any of us on this site actually that's my problem when i start to rhyme i like rhyme till the end on one word like bang bang bang this could be a side effect from the spoken word i usually write
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 10:39 PM | Message # 28 |
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Quote (Menace) actually that's my problem when i start to rhyme i like rhyme till the end on one world like bang bang bang this could be a side effect from the spoken word i usually write
LMAO probably thats why but thats ur biggest problem right now and other than that, all u gotta do is work on the word play and then u'll be wreckin MCs like it aint nothing
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 11:40 PM | Message # 29 |
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both your guys last verses were your best verse's, meth you should write your verses like that all the time it was one of your best so far imo. this battle had some pretty funny lines in it too lol. but i have to give this one to meth. btw menace you did good you should start trying to rhyme double syllables thats what i usually try to do but sometimes its not needed and can take away from the meaning of your verse. but you should definitely start trying out double syllable rhyming coz imo that's what seperates an okay rapper from a dope one.
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 11:43 PM | Message # 30 |
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Quote (Em_SeeD) double syllable rhyming coz imo that's what seperates an okay rapper from a dope one.
truth Im still practicing using them I havent tried on the site yet because I want to perfect them on paper before I put them in battles
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