Nah bro you fucked it up, the lighting and perspective of the balcony along to the stairwell does not corresspond in the slightest to the vertical plane of the the towers facade, assumining the horizontal plane of the balcony is constant.
In short the primary shadow of the underside of the balcony does not adjust in the secondary once it meets the tower walls vertical plane.
It is unnatural.
If the horizontal plane of the balcony declines in inference of stairwell to the front of the tower adjoining the side feature it then raises issues of the eyes alignment to that feature.
Is it from someone observing standing at ground level or directly alligned to the balcony?
Once again though no adjustment is made for displacement of shadow along the vertical plane.
Either the depth of a horizontal balcony is fucked up, which the shadowing corressponds to or the declination lacking in detail to support it aesthetically or architecturally/structurally.Depth and perspective of shadow from horizontal to vertical is ill concieved and innaccurate in relation to the light source and object.
It is a simple tower and an elementry mistake.
Not trying to diss, i like it, just an honest observation.

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