| ritesofpasage |
Date: Tuesday, 07/Sep/10, 11:33 PM | Message # 1 |
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the science of breathe life begins with one depth
Ends with one left in between we run and rest
Become the best chest puffed up with pride
Hit rock bottom all air's out lungs just concave and die
Lungs rise like the tides pulled by new moons
The thought to consume somewhere soon reflecting light
To breathe in the sights the freshness of life
to leave in the peace lungs ride dreams to sleep
just to have kept and always keep the gates to the deep
Breathe heats and laughter breathes love
breathe breathe breathe never can breathe enough
Check out my melody faithfulness is the fidelity of my soundtrack to that of the heavenlies.....
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| ilikebacon3000 |
Date: Wednesday, 08/Sep/10, 2:53 AM | Message # 2 |
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i dig this ALOT dude
it reminds me of real freestyle shit, when someone is just spilling their thought, you know?
Life's a bitch and I'm just along for the ride.
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| ritesofpasage |
Date: Thursday, 09/Sep/10, 5:43 PM | Message # 3 |
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thx I am trying to work on my poetry and get good enough to perform some
Check out my melody faithfulness is the fidelity of my soundtrack to that of the heavenlies.....
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