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poem/rap/letter/middle finger......o_0 EHHH
Mystic-Rymes Date: Monday, 08/Nov/10, 9:25 PM | Message # 1

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i know this aint the shizz like Eboyd but a gurl gotta try, right.

Thought it would be better if i called it quits first
Not knowing it would turn my hole life into a curse
Agony ripped though me from the memory of his face
Tears felt like acid pouring down with no sign of grace
Heart acking because of the decisions that i made
Feels like im dying with no assitance from aid
Trying to make it easy so my life wunt burst
Wanting to reverse the start cause my heart felt the worst
i'd hipnitise him with ma beautiful brown eyes
Only wantd the best for me even when i told lies
Im not that proud of all the things that i've done
So he needed to Punish Me just like Big Pun
We both hurt each other the worse that we ever could
Not wanting to breakup but deep down wishing we would
Its makes me think twice about the decisions that i made
So many things that my attention didnt pay
To the fine print at the bottem of this page
Wondering if heaven was something that was in a cage
Cause you have me locked up really tight
Got me trying to break free with all of my might
Fighting to break these shakels from its chain
He has me felling something more than pain.
Now Trying to turn back the hands of time
Its like trying to buy a house without any dimes
This verse is a story from someone in my past
Now i know its not hard for a real relationship to last

Added (08/Nov/10, 9:25 PM)
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It was the dark night creeping up to th foot of my bed
Not knowing if it was real or if it was all in my head
Fed up with trying to hide awy from th shaddowing dark
Learking around corners without having a beating heart
Feeling the cold breeze rushing frm under the door
Sending chillz up my spine and freezing ma core
To find what looks like a person that dwels within the night
Standing still infront of me with no sight of light
Feeling sori 4 him coz his face is looking so grim
Repping the fact that i wasnt affaid of all his sinz
And without reason he wld end up taking my soul
Now fighting 4 my life sems to be my numbr1 goal
so with this mic in my hand im gonna slaughter you alive
after tonight il have you wishing that you never arrived.

mystic rymes gives virtual heads:D
no comments from porn infested mindz lol

it means thumbs up...


xoxox

Message edited by Mystic-Rymes - Monday, 08/Nov/10, 9:33 PM
eboyd Date: Monday, 08/Nov/10, 10:30 PM | Message # 2

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this is quite good. this seems like it is meant to be a rhyme. you should get a beat and record it. i'd like to see how it sounds.

my new theme song



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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

-T.S. Eliot

battle record:

7-0-0

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