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Haiku with humor
8Diagrams Date: Saturday, 24/Jan/09, 10:47 PM | Message # 1

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 It's almost like a limerick if you think about it
"One, Two, Three, Four, Five
Six, Seven, Eight, Nine, Ten, Eleven
Twelve, Thirteen, Fourteen"
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eboyd Date: Saturday, 24/Jan/09, 11:54 PM | Message # 2

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 Lol! But that was 5-9-5. Haikus are 5-7-5. Close though.

We should make this a humorous haiku making thread! Here's mine:

Nate's penis is small
Because he is an Asian
I'm sorry for him.

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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

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NtG Date: Sunday, 25/Jan/09, 1:09 AM | Message # 3

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Quote (eboyd)
t's almost like a limerick if you think about it
"One, Two, Three, Four, Five
Six, Seven, Eight, Nine, Ten, Eleven
Twelve, Thirteen, Fourteen"

damn! i wrote something identical to that in the poem thread before i even looked here.

i got mine off of a TV show on the channel called G4 idk where you got yours from

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NtG Date: Sunday, 25/Jan/09, 1:15 AM | Message # 4

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Nate's penis is small
Because he is an Asian
I'm sorry for him.

wouldnt it be like this??:

Nate Have small penis
because he asian
i sorry for him.

broken english, the way foreign japanese people speak it.

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eboyd Date: Sunday, 25/Jan/09, 1:27 AM | Message # 5

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 Maybe, but it has to be 7 syllables in the middle, unless you are implying he can't count either.
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erikboyd60@hotmail.com

"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

-T.S. Eliot

battle record:

7-0-0

Lord_Meth Date: Sunday, 25/Jan/09, 12:33 PM | Message # 6

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 My Life Is On Bitch
Cant no punk ass stop my shit
Haiku Poems suck
Sick With It
Lord_Meth Date: Sunday, 25/Jan/09, 12:45 PM | Message # 7

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Angelina J
You haven't even been born yet
But I look forward

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Sick With It
Lord_Meth Date: Sunday, 25/Jan/09, 12:47 PM | Message # 8

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 I kno
Sick With It
EmSeeD Date: Sunday, 25/Jan/09, 9:23 PM | Message # 9

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Boner-Jamz-11 Date: Monday, 26/Jan/09, 7:16 PM | Message # 10

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Quote (8DiagramsOfDeath)
"One, Two, Three, Four, Five
Six, Seven, Eight, Nine, Ten, Eleven
Twelve, Thirteen, Fourteen"

i dont get it
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