maybe you should turn the beat up a bit

OK, i just got a chance to actually hear it (lol!). you REALLY need to get your energy up. it's dope, especially the lyrics, and it's not meant to be extreme energy, but there's supposed to be a specific energy for every track. you should set the stage for emotions, not the beat. feel the emotion and speak it like you would in real life. this person hurt your feelings, right? well, let them know!!! would you mumble if you were confronting someone in real life? "*in a mumbling, quiet voice* hey, that was some bullshit you did." how would this person respond to this? "yeah, yeah, shut up." she (i'm guessing it's a girl?) won't respect it in such a low voice. let her know! you feel me? just some constructive crit. hope it's helpful.