Came out dope man! Like you said to me when you emailed you made a few mistakes, but you can easily fix them by punching in where you messed up. Even the pros do that. Anyone who is seasoned in this shit and says he's never punched in is a damn liar. As you get better you will find yourself punching in less and less too. You should stop fucking around now and do a real recording of this lol! my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
Oh for sure! Thanks bro! Yeah, I'd be more than willing to lay a verse down over a C Town Hood beat. Send me an email and we'll talk more. I'll be back in LA and ready to record after next Friday.
By tag you mean that muffled "G Ammo Beats - echo"
yeah
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You should stop fucking around now and do a real recording of this lol!
what do you mean by real recording? btw if i send you the accapella would you be able to clean the quality? coz the quality is gonna be alright but not the best
check this one out, i recorded the song i wrote "Robots" to a beat of CTownHoodProductions, i think its pretty good for the most part but there's some lines where its off beat so i'll have to sort that out.
I think I like that other G-Ammo beat you used for this more. We all know that each of our end is near; the question is do we accept the end of our living existence, or do we accept our existence as dead men...
It's still good. We all know that each of our end is near; the question is do we accept the end of our living existence, or do we accept our existence as dead men...
Lol EmSeeD, that's what I mean. A higher quality recording. I'll be in LA for a month starting next Friday so yeah, I'll try to get it finished. my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
"Demon Haunted World" (aka "My Secular Mind") (Inspired By Sagan)
The quality isn't the best. Doing this in my dorm room requires me to keep my voice down so I can't really let loose, and as a result I think there is little lack of emotion here but it's just a test anyway. The lyrics aren't always the clearest so:
Verse 1 In a demon haunted world what do we find in my secular mind Never gave a fuck about religion Not an inkling of a smidgeon
An invention might I mention Designed to split this world and divide every side of unspeakable variety There’s nowhere to hide in this despicable society
Who’s diet be beloved lies of piety of trickable dubiety Despite the anxiety inside of me I savor my sobriety among the drunken blind
Quietly we stalk through the fog of life and time An intoxicated walk down our only line to see concocting bribery of truth in our mind
Tryna lure my mind from me its time to be a man of another kind And face the world’s worst most wasteful mighty piracy Who ride the sea in privacy to rob our minds of vibrancy
Justifying piously this holy primacy So solely by compliancy we swallow this faith By God justifying every move that we make
An indisputable excuse For a suitable misuse What loose screws produce In the name of the divine This shit ain’t nothing new Through perpetual pastime
We strangled knowledge blue For intellectual flatline Losing knowledge due Like the tumor of time A situation’s on our hands Of maximum importance
But society as a whole Is in a state of rigor-mortis So how can we handle A solution for this Deconstruct the walls That fear and ignorance has built
You start to think now Or watch us sink into the silt To let your very mind wilt So for a secondary time Comes the necessary line Keep it secular in mind
Chorus 1 We all look to the sky In search for an answer Let the answers rise As we rid our minds cancer For it eats away our drive to achieve something more
Eroding everything we could know at the core As we tremble and shake We risk everything at stake But make no mistake it’s all been seen before
History repeats itself Misery galore as we’re hurled Through a whirl of our mystery and lore Let the truth be told and behold The demon haunted world
We all know that each of our end is near; the question is do we accept the end of our living existence, or do we accept our existence as dead men...
wow man that's good, you got great delivery, and the lyrics too,
It pisses me off though because I never get a chance to really let loose because of where I'm at.
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what does the numbers next to the bars mean?
Oh yeah I forgot to remove the numbers, the numbers is just the syllable count. We all know that each of our end is near; the question is do we accept the end of our living existence, or do we accept our existence as dead men...
and your voice sounds fucking creepy, would be perfect for some disturbing slow horrorcore like Gravediggaz's "1-800 Homicide". I've never knew that you can rap like that, you need to hit the professional record studio and record some bangers. MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger
