anywayz wat do u think about this verse
its written for this beat

look past the ego/
deep into the soul/
of a kid whos story is bout to unfold/
grew up in a lovin home/
both parents, 3 sistas, and a pad over his dome/
smart ass kid, bright and fuken bold/
horrible at skool thou/ didnt like being told/
wat to do, and how to do it/
sick skills, but for skool, he was like "screw it"/
never fit wit the crowd, always outkasted/
thought it wouldnt last, but oh it lasted/
never could get passed it/ so he finally had it/
wit the hate/ and picked up a mic/
-n that was his fate/ to strike dudes wit the speed of light/
in his hand/ knockin off dudes that couldnt stay stand/
-in, chokin, no blockin, so they got owned like pattin manning/
having fun bein the last one standin and laughin/
created a buzz to his name like static/
wizard with the mic, causin magic/
too much hate tho/
it took a toll/
on him/ lights dim/ darkness swallowin/
leadin his own parade to the top, but no one behinmd him/
geez/ nobody but him jus walkin, down these lonely streets/.

is that a good start??

don't tell me about it LOL and i was just jocking whit Joker he's still a poosay tough

well nice lyrics but if you want to recored this try rhyming slow on it and whit a low pitch

Added (12/Nov/09, 10:11 Pm)
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haha isnt it fun man
like when someone calls me a terrorist
i jus say "yea, and your house is next!!"
lmao.

LOL not always tough it depends on the beat you lay your flow pattern after the beat so it can fit oh and Assalamualaikum Lyric welcome to RHHF

leadin his own parade to the top, but no one behind him/
geez/ nobody but him jus walkin, down these lonely streets/.

^^^^^
that shit is ill. I feel like puttin it this way (if you dont mind me editing it)

It took a toll on him
Lights dim
Sea of darkness swallowin him
He can swim but it strikes from within
All alone in place where he wanted to begin
They don't believe in him
He wished them death for being so mean
Now it's rising to the top, burned to many degrees
But no one to talk to, just echoes of his sneeze
No one behind him, just a cold breeze
All alone, walkin' down these Lonely Streets

And you should take him to sing the hook. He's the most faithful and coolest guy I ever met on the net, we talk about everything. Plus, he's an amazing singer and he'll definitely be down to record some deep stuff

http://www.myspace.com/rahphunk

Cos this hook on my man G Ammo beat aint that great. lol

LMFAO that was a punchline right now

that is pretty sick
can i add it to the verse?? lol

sure, go ahead. just mention me in credits, like

Producer: G-Ammo
Writers: LLyric, El Matador

aite fashow.

here check this rhyme
this is wat ima spit wit u on that mixtape maybe.

u dudes cant step to this/
bitch/ fuck wit a terrorist/
u ass wont even stay exist/
-in anymore/ kick down ya door/
pull ur ass off that dirty whore/
than put ya six feet deepa than ya floor/
alive tho/ die slow/
better than me?, u jus got buried alive wit ur hoe /
i strike fast wit the speed of light/
in my hand, fuck a mic stand, its gonna be a show tonite/
its like im handin' dudes presents when we clash mics/
BOOM!! u no longer in the present, body ignites/
ur in the past now and im soarin in the future wit my lyrics/
time travelin', secrets unravellin', changin' LLyRiC's spirit/
can u hear it?, key in the ignition, cars named ambition,
and ima steer it/
to the top/ cant be stopped/
not even from a 9 mila' glock/
cuhz i gots an a.k./ okay/ it'll make an athiest pray/
to allah/ cuhz once u hear me go allalalalahh!!/
u know im bout to spray, now can u feel the rath of god/
shit ima god wit this m.i.c/
remember the name, double L-y-R-i-C/
Let Loose your Real inner Creativity/
lyrical creativity to creatively murder my enemy/
as i run throu, takin out fake mcs/
blast!!/
recycle ur dead body, cuhz im TAKIN OUT THE TRASH/.

is it chill??

its not chill, cos its hardcore dope shit, I gotta look for the right beat in my instrumental library

I just wrote a horrorcore verse. I want to make a track called "Centre Of Insanity". What yall think?

Centre of insanity, souls wanderin' in the darkness
Abyss of vanity, you can find 'em in provoked stress
Mind caress, emotional express and quantum of solace
To possess bitches when they asked out said “no way”
To possess blades tasked for slay
Nightmares, dismay, woke up in another day
All in cold sweat, my mission is still incomplete
I saw that silhouette, it told me to want it
I want meat, I caught that bitch on the backstreet
I gotta subsist, when I'm hungry I'm getting' pissed
But first I took chrome saw to play like a dentist
Then I kissed, I tasted blood from her lips
I wanted to wash whole my body in blood
I opened body with panache, I caused guts flood
It was like a art, I rubbed my body in blood, my dick was hard
It was a true love cos she gave me her heart
It so much pain, everyday I'm insane
Grain of bane burning up in my veins
My desire is the human, my food is the humanity
All those sinners who are full of vanity
Steppin on the crackin' ice on the ledge of sanity
I'm a pawn trapped in the centre of insanity

^^^ that hard

my new theme song



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