this curse that i've patterned
in circles like saturn
it hurts i try rappin
a verse
to slide it back in reverse
despite lackin the words
trapped'n that ain't the first
time its happened
immerse into
the pad and the pen
i stab my pen to the pad
let it enter the scab
with the momentum i grab,
it slowly opens the wounds,
my blood flows with the tune
so i soak it into
the vast cloaks of the past
i know they're hope i'll last
at the end of the day
but i struggled so hard
just to spend it away
on the same mistakes
i make
i swore i take a chance today
i watch it rot in fear and laze
with treasures on which i passed
i'll never learn faster
regardless of the class
i crumble and i shake
my mental state won't cooperate
so repeat it over
and when your feet are closer
to the next step
and you're receiving closure
don't forget
theres another chapter ahead yet
so prepare or get
flattened and strap in for the worst
in this curse that i've pattern
in circles like saturn
i rehearse
but i've forgotten the words
i'll never say to your face

heres the second verse which was written ages ago to a different beat so it doesn't flow as well

my blinded state
i hibernate,
and write away
i'll wait try to wake up
when i see a brighter day but,
how long will that take up
so frustated tryna stay creative
i write some bars then escape it,
now they say i'm non associative
and rude attitude
always in a bad mood
you weren't the first to try and hate it,
my minds sleeping in a cocoon
through the worst times
i try to elevate it
never crime related
they're the ones that follow me
tryna get ahead instead
they end decapitated in a hollow sleep
coz its a sleepy hallow
when you're tryna see tomorrow
through an empty bottle
its just hibernation food,
till i finally make some moves

Lol, thanks.
Well, you get yourself about 60 of those and paste them all around

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thanks for the feedback

Have you listen to Japanese Hip hop? That shit is hard to do

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