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| eboyd |
Date: Friday, 16/Jan/09, 4:02 AM | Message # 1 |
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Do you have a verse, track, etc., that is almost ready to be put on a beat but needs a little bit of editing advice? Write your verse here and people will review it for you and give advice on how you can fix it and make it better.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 23/Jan/09, 10:51 PM | Message # 16 |
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Quote (Em_SeeD) i didn't really like this line, why would you split someones lip just to seal it back again?
LMAO Im just now realizing how dumb some of the verses I write are LMAO
but Im starting to get more serious when I write
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| eboyd |
Date: Friday, 23/Jan/09, 10:54 PM | Message # 17 |
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Quote (Em_SeeD) lol not to me fuck that! you see, i look at it like this. art is not for sale and i make art by that premise. if someone wants to rip off my art, it's not like he's stealing from me because my art is priceless. sure a good poem, verse, beat, etc. has meaning to me, but if someone takes it and runs with it i feel as though it just means he saw potential in it.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Friday, 23/Jan/09, 11:00 PM | Message # 18 |
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Quote (eboyd) you see, i look at it like this. art is not for sale and i make art by that premise. if someone wants to rip off my art, it's not like he's stealing from me because my art is priceless. sure a good poem, verse, beat, etc. has meaning to me, but if someone takes it and runs with it i feel as though it just means he saw potential in it. yeah but i don't want people getting credit for it, what if Lil Wayne stole your rhymes and everyone said see that proves Lil Wayne is the best rapper alive, just listen to how deep his doomed seed poem is
http://chirbit.com/emseed
http://youtube.com/siwooot
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 23/Jan/09, 11:00 PM | Message # 19 |
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Quote (Em_SeeD) yeah but i don't want people getting credit for it, what if Lil Wayne stole your rhymes and everyone said see that proves Lil Wayne is the best rapper alive, just listen to how deep his doomed seed poem is
but we arent that popular for anyone famous to come and steal our rhymes
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| NtG |
Date: Friday, 23/Jan/09, 11:02 PM | Message # 20 |
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Quote (Lord_Meth) but we arent that popular for anyone famous to come and steal our rhymes
Cam'Ron stole one of Boon Doc's beats when Boonie wasnt that popular... 
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 23/Jan/09, 11:04 PM | Message # 21 |
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Quote (NtG) Cam'Ron stole one of Boon Doc's beats when Boonie wasnt that popular...
But if we were to take this into court because say....Dr. Dre stole Erik's verse in the battle with Lethaface..
wat can the charges be? Plagarism? I thought it cant be plagarism if it is copywriten?
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| eboyd |
Date: Friday, 23/Jan/09, 11:05 PM | Message # 22 |
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Quote (Em_SeeD) yeah but i don't want people getting credit for it, what if Lil Wayne stole your rhymes and everyone said see that proves Lil Wayne is the best rapper alive, just listen to how deep his doomed seed poem is i would just laugh my ass off! that would be hilarious! imagine Weezy spitting my poem. that would be FUCKING FUNNY!! 
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| eboyd |
Date: Friday, 23/Jan/09, 11:07 PM | Message # 23 |
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Quote (Lord_Meth) copywriten? none of the shit on the site is copywritten. maybe we can do something to where all verses written on the site are copywritten by their authors.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| NtG |
Date: Friday, 23/Jan/09, 11:08 PM | Message # 24 |
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i have been told that once you make anything, it immediately becomes copyrighted. But people still insist on purchasing copyrights in order to make sure that no one steals their ideas.
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 23/Jan/09, 11:09 PM | Message # 25 |
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Quote (eboyd) none of the shit on the site is copywritten. maybe we can do something to where all verses written on the site are copywritten by their authors.
theres this one game forum I went to and I was trying to copy and print some cheats and when I highlighted the words it said "The text on this website are protected by law" or something like that
thats wat we need
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| NtG |
Date: Friday, 23/Jan/09, 11:11 PM | Message # 26 |
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Quote (Lord_Meth)
theres this one game forum I went to and I was trying to copy and print some cheats and when I highlighted the words it said "The text on this website are protected by law" or something like that that wasnt a cheat site, that was a gay porn site. Nice attempt at a cover up, we all know what you were really doing.
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| eboyd |
Date: Friday, 23/Jan/09, 11:15 PM | Message # 27 |
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Quote (Lord_Meth) theres this one game forum I went to and I was trying to copy and print some cheats and when I highlighted the words it said "The text on this website are protected by law" or something like that
thats wat we need yes. and guess what Meth, since you found it you get to do the research and find out about how they did that. go back to the site and try to ask the mods. see if they can help you. if not, just look up stuff on Google. i need you to find a few different places we can do that and post them in the OGs/Heads forum. try to get it by next week.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 23/Jan/09, 11:16 PM | Message # 28 |
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Quote (NtG) that wasnt a cheat site, that was a gay porn site. Nice attempt at a cover up, we all know what you were really doing.
see why u bring something like up and I was being serious
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 23/Jan/09, 11:16 PM | Message # 29 |
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Quote (eboyd) yes. and guess what Meth, since you found it you get to do the research and find out about how they did that. go back to the site and try to ask the mods. see if they can help you. if not, just look up stuff on Google. i need you to find a few different places we can do that and post them in the OGs/Heads forum. try to get it by next week.
Ill try but it wont be easy
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| Deadly-Sin |
Date: Friday, 30/Jan/09, 7:34 AM | Message # 30 |
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My verse from cipher. With every direction i step iv kept an intellect.
never lost respect for the real who minds
have over come the reality check. proteck
yourself from what they got planned an evil
idea to demolish this land a man with nuclear
weapons in his hand the hour glass breaks
and out poars the sand they strap you down
with moving images until your souls been torn
think the world is pritty as a rose until you feel its
thorn its comming to the last dawn the final card
has been drawn an army is spawn of pure evil.
add the equal theres a million brainwashed people.
the madmans mind has been mutalated even
liquidated hated cross faded homes raided.
blood on the pavement. new borns
put into enslavement theres tears on the faces
been controlled by a facist god make no move
just nod not every road is yellow like the wizard
of oz, theres a darkness that blinds the eyes
light into the insight making us all hate
and fight no need for an arm nah
they give out guns and knifes to fight for our
lifes but were still been torcherd and slain
if you stutter they think its slang, they get you
and turn you insane with images to bring
pain to your brain your lifes been drain
like water down the sink mindless zombi
eyes wide open cant even blink, your thoughts
have been put chains so you cant think on your own
to feet it goes rushing around my mind everytime
i sleep i wake up and watch the horror repeat. (After re-reading it. i think this is my best work on the cipher so far, but still needs fixing up.)
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