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Uncharted vs. Prozac
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| prozac26 |
Date: Saturday, 28/Feb/09, 10:35 PM | Message # 1 |
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aight Added (28/Feb/09, 10:35 Pm)
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first round - 8 bars
second round - 12 bars
third round - 16 bars
 Nalin' Palin
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| Uncharted |
Date: Sunday, 01/Mar/09, 3:17 PM | Message # 2 |
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whoa i didnt know u made a forum already for this battle i get at u later...
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| Uncharted |
Date: Monday, 02/Mar/09, 7:02 PM | Message # 3 |
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Emcees
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nevermind i go first Added (02/Mar/09, 7:02 Pm)
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The odds of me stopping is one and a million, like a milliepede/
Wanted posters of me on wall cause I’m on a lyrical killing spree/
I’m ready to heat this nigga up like hot iron /
Turn this female into my house feline/
I chop words up so quick its like im chopping a atom’s ion/
I blow a whole rpg up his abdomen/
Kill him slowly , by shoot him with a whole bunch of pathogens/
Mentally paralyze him and burn off his melanin/
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Message edited by Uncharted - Monday, 02/Mar/09, 8:46 PM
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| eboyd |
Date: Monday, 02/Mar/09, 7:38 PM | Message # 4 |
Heads
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Nice first verse Uncharted
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| Uncharted |
Date: Monday, 02/Mar/09, 7:50 PM | Message # 5 |
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Quote (eboyd) Nice first verse Uncharted
THANKS 
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Message edited by Uncharted - Monday, 02/Mar/09, 7:51 PM
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| Uncharted |
Date: Tuesday, 03/Mar/09, 7:27 PM | Message # 6 |
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Emcees
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Quote (prozac26) You call yourself Uncharted for a reason/
Reason being, I’m the king in this habitat like a lion/
Tryin’, but failing every single attempt, but successful at dyin’/
My brute force of the lyrical content will leave your jaw pried wide open/
The bitch you eyein’, not worth it, you homo, ain’t gonna happen, sorry to leave you heart-broken/
You stopped, dropped dead, so those odds work against you anyway/
Your silly similes, played out, used up just like your girl back in the day/
I’ll cook you up properly, unlike the cooks at Swiss Chalet/ my lyrics cuts deeper than the white meat
that last verse was nuthin but some tight sleet
my vocabulary could miss by 1 foot and can grain yo teeth
watch what u say before ya homies report u stolen
while i stuff these rhyme vitamins in yo mouth that fuck up your colon
I dont have cook something up like Swiss Chalet,
i tear niggas lungs out alive day by day, like its nothing
so any time now u can stop the frontin
not even close to the king of the jungle
u facing against the origanal one,it might end up in a easy rumble...
might even end off by a weak ass mumble,cant avoid or delete my universal force
im come and get me with my unlimited renegade,that even the illest emcees cant even recognize or contemplate
so the next weak shit u post dont try to abbreviate
or i come harder and it will be impossible for me to be considerate
your demise will come more tragic than the german's WWII prevail
after this battle, u should tell everyone about the young emcee from hell
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| Uncharted |
Date: Friday, 06/Mar/09, 8:06 PM | Message # 7 |
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Emcees
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This is bullshit it freezed on me
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| prozac26 |
Date: Friday, 06/Mar/09, 8:29 PM | Message # 8 |
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Quote (Uncharted) This is bullshit it freezed on me
Is that your third verse?
Nalin' Palin
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| Uncharted |
Date: Friday, 06/Mar/09, 8:44 PM | Message # 9 |
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Emcees
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I am the…lyrical murderer trifecta/
That last shit u wrote was sweeter than nectar/
I eat the flesh from the insides of the feds like cannibal lector/
The words I create in my is to m enemies kryptonite/
Get your whole family and pray that u wont become a crip tonight/
Ear bar I spit are on the highest heights/
The Sun that destroys the night/
This dude don’t sound like he’s trying to spit /
Sounds like he’s trying to spray/
Ask most of the emcees in this group about your mediocre shit/
They say its aight ok or just flat out gay/
So Prozac, when u come in my way, don’t play…ok?/
Or i'll put yo weak ass heart on a lunch try...Anyway/
When I blow all yo vacuoles and smash yo head against the microphone/
Its gonna more unforgettable than Mr. Nat King Cole/
Your already in hell because your soul was already sold/
I keep niggas frozen/
They call me the MC² rhyme erosion/
I cremate every single wack rapper that step against me that’s chosen/
I’m not known most normal intellectuals, Time for daily check up/
Your state of mind is unacceptable/
People say im am the definition of your life’s declare/
Compare me to biggie duets?, If I wanted to see any of your wack shit,
I could of just bump chamillionaire/
Like nas,everyone is the question and the answer/
U the question, im the answer/
I thougt im battling an actual emcee, but im battling one of souljia boy's dancers/
I kill rappers like u 10/10 in a 20/20 vision/
If want to see crazy vocabulary in a unusual enviroment,then listen/
the skills r more deadlier than the colfax lynchings/
i like said before darkest rhyming i still glisten/
I put salmonella up yo ass like spanich,im finish/Added (06/Mar/09, 8:44 Pm)
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Quote (prozac26) Is that your third verse
nope but that one is ^^^^
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| Uncharted |
Date: Friday, 06/Mar/09, 9:03 PM | Message # 10 |
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I was just pissed of because the computer freezed after i just finished my verse.
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| PNobleDaLyricist |
Date: Thursday, 12/Mar/09, 10:46 PM | Message # 11 |
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This shit was raw as hell i say tie lol
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| eboyd |
Date: Thursday, 12/Mar/09, 10:55 PM | Message # 12 |
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Heads
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Quote (Uncharted) colfax lynchings/ was this more the type of link you were looking for?
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| 11thPlague |
Date: Thursday, 12/Mar/09, 11:04 PM | Message # 13 |
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Removed
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prozac got it
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| eboyd |
Date: Thursday, 12/Mar/09, 11:06 PM | Message # 14 |
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Heads
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Quote (11thPlague) prozac got it i was confused reading Uncharted's rhymes. i think you kind of messed up some of the grammar and some lines were out of sync because of it. both need to work on making their lines more practical for a real song. i agree though. prozac wins.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Friday, 13/Mar/09, 2:44 AM | Message # 15 |
Heads
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uncharted won the first round but prozac won the otheres, prozacs last verse was the best i've ever seen him write. i wasn't really feeling the horrorcore style uncharted used in the last two verses, i don't think horrorcore is really suited for battles, you should just try dissing the other guy rather than horrorcore.
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