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Forum » RHHF Artists/Battlers » Battle Archive » Montana213 vs. AruNavi ((Text Battle))
Montana213 vs. AruNavi
who won?
1. Montana213 [ 5 ] [62.50%]
2. AruNavi [ 3 ] [37.50%]
Answers total: 8
Montana213 Date: Sunday, 05/Oct/08, 6:02 PM | Message # 1

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The rules are
1st verse 8 bars or less
2nd verse 16 bars or less
3rd verse unlimited

arunavi u go first since im higher on the rankings


Can't turn back my eyes on the prize
I got nothing to lose
everybody gotta die
say good-bye to the bad guy

AruNavi Date: Monday, 06/Oct/08, 3:29 PM | Message # 2

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Montana I'ma show you how an MC becomes a handler
Hit you quick then duck swipe with antlers swift like panthers
Rip this fool and make the crowd go he's chocking
Think you can beat me LP please tell me what is he smocking?
I spit with no gimmicks your image I'ma invent it
Then let you stand for yourself like you sinned Adam and Even it
So like Naruto Best believe in it rip this jacker and slice the place
Make sure he gets the taste of a loss and let his examples be the Scars on his Face

His name is scar face
LP smokes mad weed lmao Pzz


my girl friend

I am probably RHH4 asshole of the site lmao

THE PUREST MC=ME ARU NAVI My brother=Menace Uncharted
My wife=Chinita the Beautiful
My rival=LaPen
My niggas=Eboyd Kiba Pen LaPen Lord Meth P Noble NtG Render 11thPlauge

i woulda done rubber matches if i new u was gone bite Aru Navi/

AHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH i love this line

how did i bite aru navi? just curious...
uz every verse he did in dat battle, he tried flipping my verse every single time...it was work n until i won lol but yea u basically tried 2 flip da 1st verse like him
Aru Navi says-"Cause I beez da shitz." West Coast King Style

Montana213 Date: Monday, 06/Oct/08, 6:05 PM | Message # 3

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arunavi learn how to spell you uneducated fuck/
batllin with anyone is bad but with me is just pushin ya luck/
im chocking and im smocking?/
with those rhymes not me, you is who ur mocking/
why you keep callin me LP man you a fucking bitch/
ill beat you brutally and throw your dead body in a ditch/
months before anyones notices your missing/
son ill give you this one chance to stop dissing/


Can't turn back my eyes on the prize
I got nothing to lose
everybody gotta die
say good-bye to the bad guy

AruNavi Date: Monday, 06/Oct/08, 7:25 PM | Message # 4

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first off i was calling u LP. i was saying it in a reference to LP.

Let's read the mini me dissing me the God the supreme
Killing these with my infantry gently caressing these
People who are feeling me in the mid west been stressed
You don't want to battle 8 bars is my warm up yours was less
You compared to me is Nas to Benzino and nothing less at best
So honestly I'm paid in full after I end you your girl giving me breasts
Let her taste my nuts feel the power of my thrusts
Your of out luck cause she is loving my touch and when I bust
I made all hell break lose you fools thinking you can battle with Godd
Your perception is misleading you fining for your first true love
Notice it ain't hip-hop though she my bitch but I never let her go so stop
You not a thug you a suburban turban wearing curving for hugs
Smocking and mocking yeah those two rhyme nice job
You not anything so if anything find a new job Steve cause your apples i robbed
So stop the antics tryna make folks frantic on this Atlantic
To pacific nigga dissin who I'm not whack I'm one of a kind rare like Atlantis


my girl friend

I am probably RHH4 asshole of the site lmao

THE PUREST MC=ME ARU NAVI My brother=Menace Uncharted
My wife=Chinita the Beautiful
My rival=LaPen
My niggas=Eboyd Kiba Pen LaPen Lord Meth P Noble NtG Render 11thPlauge

i woulda done rubber matches if i new u was gone bite Aru Navi/

AHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH i love this line

how did i bite aru navi? just curious...
uz every verse he did in dat battle, he tried flipping my verse every single time...it was work n until i won lol but yea u basically tried 2 flip da 1st verse like him
Aru Navi says-"Cause I beez da shitz." West Coast King Style

Montana213 Date: Monday, 06/Oct/08, 9:29 PM | Message # 5

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first off ill start by saying dont call me mini me/
how can i be when i stand in at 6 foot 3/
can you please tell me what a surburban turban is?/
i dare you to come fight me son im as raw as biz/
ask about me son and people will say "youll get knocked the fuck out"/
if i were to fight you we'd only need a 1 round bout/
the only thing rare about you is that you the worst in the world/
the world which i own and ill knock you off like i knocked your girl/
and makin a word rhyme 3 times in a sentence dont make you good/
you must think this is good, could should hood would/
thats what you sound like son you is fucking lame/
you aint gonna beat me bro for too long i been in the game/
ill hit you in the membrain and make you insane/
ill fuck you up so bad you wont even be able to use ur brain/
battling you is nothing but a pain/
in the ass but by the end of this battle your ass will be grass/


Can't turn back my eyes on the prize
I got nothing to lose
everybody gotta die
say good-bye to the bad guy

AruNavi Date: Tuesday, 07/Oct/08, 4:24 PM | Message # 6

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This nigga battle me and like L will get the Big Picture
Like who is iller whose meaner and see his life get clearer
Cause all I needed was on mic and one rhyme and one ballot
He got dropped out the voting no misquoting cause this faggot
A maggot you keep fining off me and my energy(sarah palin in the debate continued talking about energy on every topic)
Like you Sarah Palin you not cut for this industry
See I'ma come in with the upset Texas vs USC
This dude thinking to bench me please I'm not reggie(reggie bush got benched in that game)
No hate but don't ever try to judge it views from the public
My last post here and they gonna hop on like they did LP and love it
So how badly do you want me to win hit you so hard you got breasts cancer
Docs need me for the answer but I just murdered you hannah montana
Coming up to the Colgate and coordinate my subject to sound shitty
Like Alabama name being read on the fucking TV you feel me? (Alabama U name on ESPN is bama)
On the real b I come harder than the strength it takes to bust nuts
Never rush I spit in five min and time is up and see whats up
What do you think this is a mid west state no one cares about
So how we gonna like you and I'm only being fair so announce
Me KING like Obama and watch my hate lead go farther
Fucking 8 balls in the wreck hall thinking you go hard please why bother
You some shit I'm the beast only dude 0-2 who they still crown a beast
Complexity no one is next to me sit down tiger and go rest your weak knee(referring his knee to his skills tiger woods)
Before I drop you to no where like Jay-Z and Mobb Deep( we all know jay won that battle with him and prodigy)
I eat this nigga like good food think of me as Hannibal
The fucking cannibal mike tyson your ass get it am I understandable
I'm an animal so watch me Ether this bitch spray him around
And watch the heat go through take him out his environment
Like a fish place him in the open and make sounds
So the eagles can get this trick you a joke think of early retirement
Cause Death is Certain so this is a early curtain(royce)
Pulling your curt tail and know your pride is hurting
I beat this nigga hard and below the belt get the welts so come hate
I want to feel your anguish and make you sing The Great Escape(song from Gwen)
Got me thinking you Gwen Stefani but its No Doubt that(her old group)
You a whack cat whack shit cause nigga I got my snap back
Rubbermand Man naw more like Tim Allen and break shit(his old show home improvement)
Then fix it call me Dr. Mario and I got the vitamins so lets hit
And let's go when you old you gonna hate me as time grows
Like John Thompson and UNC Georgetown I can see it on your face your blown
Call me Michael and you can be the big bad Reggie
No wait I'ma kill you like I'm spike leeing up in this place so don't test me
Me losing that shit is not happening so keep fasting
And remember what I said lay in bed and stop rapping


my girl friend

I am probably RHH4 asshole of the site lmao

THE PUREST MC=ME ARU NAVI My brother=Menace Uncharted
My wife=Chinita the Beautiful
My rival=LaPen
My niggas=Eboyd Kiba Pen LaPen Lord Meth P Noble NtG Render 11thPlauge

i woulda done rubber matches if i new u was gone bite Aru Navi/

AHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH i love this line

how did i bite aru navi? just curious...
uz every verse he did in dat battle, he tried flipping my verse every single time...it was work n until i won lol but yea u basically tried 2 flip da 1st verse like him
Aru Navi says-"Cause I beez da shitz." West Coast King Style

Montana213 Date: Tuesday, 07/Oct/08, 9:59 PM | Message # 7

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arunavi, why you fucking with me/
we already established im a real emcee/
and you nothin but wack/
hit me with your best lyrical attack/
so i can reverse them back at you and make them hit you harder/
in football the position you'd play would be a kicker/
nigga stop your bickerin and try the 50 yarder/
and you miss just like you did in this battle/
i havent even heard one line from you that has made me rattle/
even ray charles can see that theres no way you can win/
the only thing that your rhymes did to me was make me grin/
because i know that this was an easy win/
the first 25% of this is done are you ready for more bitch/

There once was a little boy named arunavi who got his ass kicked in and out of every battle he had/
when people you used to battle him they thought it was sad and they got mad/
because they wasted there time on a mother fucking punk/
who time after time puts out nothing but junk/
so one time a boy named john got mad, murdered him and threw his body in the trunk/
he told arunavi that if he didnt make up a rhyme he was dead/
arunavi made one that was shit so he got shot in the head/
the next day arunavis funeral came/
but no one showed up cause they thought he was a lame/
the only one who went was john so he could piss on his grave/
but he was fucked up from last night when he went to a rave/
so he also dug up his dead body and he blew it up/
no one was sad not even his mom said "what the fuck"
the day when he died was the happiest day
verse 2 is now done verse 3 take it away

Go ahead and be spike lee but im bruce lee/
arunavi you blind motherfucker open your eyes so you can see/
that you got no potential you a wasted effort, quit now while your still alive/
im sorry bro but to win you just dont got the drive/
dont be mad ior sad you cant help it that your bad/
your probly only bad cause you were sexually abused by your dad/
i shine in your hood i shine in my hood/
the only reason you dont shine is cause you no good/
they always say that its all good in the hood/
thats true except the fact that the hood you is from is no good/
lyrically im on a new plateau you cant touch me/
1 2 3 and A B C nigga you still cant fuck with me/

25 % more to go youll be fine dont start to cry/
live up your life cause by the end of this battle youll die/
ur third verse was shit ur 2nd was horrible but your verse 1 makes you sound like a fucking maricon/
you fucking cockroach, your just a capo but little did you know im the don/
just like in carlitos way im on a rise to power/
just like jimmy the gent i say everything twice, im on a rids to power/
my rhymes are as pure as Colombian cocaine/
feel bad for arunavi i notice hes in pain/
him getting his ass kicked so bad is driving him insane/
im as raw as a raw hide bone im the big dog/
you'll croak in the middle of the night just like a frog/
i got one more thing toi say before he dies/
ask me again and we can battle again.... plies/


Can't turn back my eyes on the prize
I got nothing to lose
everybody gotta die
say good-bye to the bad guy

EmSeeD Date: Tuesday, 07/Oct/08, 10:29 PM | Message # 8

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this is really hard to call, if there was an option to vote draw. i would vote draw.

AruNavi - your verses have good flow and decent rhyming. but unfortunatley you didn't have any punch lines or word play's that attacked john. except for the line "you hannah montana", i think you should have made for references like this than you would have been a clear winner.

Montana213 - your verses attacked arunavi more and was better in terms of disses but not as much in rhymes. also in the first two verses you were simply flipping arunavi's lines and not really coming up with your own. but thats exactly what i was doing on here too when i first started. i think montana is gonna be pretty good if he keeps going, he's only gonna get better and better. montana's last verse was his best and i would have voted for him if it didn't have this part:

Quote (Montana213)
the only reason you dont shine is cause you no good/
they always say that its all good in the hood/
thats true except the fact that the hood you is from is no good/

kind of made me realise you were using the same words throughout the verse
maybe you guys should check out these kind of sites to use them to make references as disses etc.
http://www.urbandictionary.com and try and diss people by refering to their username or sig etc. i learnt that by reading eboyd and kiba's rhymes.

at the moment idk who to vote for so im gonna think about it some more


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EmSeeD Date: Tuesday, 07/Oct/08, 10:35 PM | Message # 9

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ok i voted arunavi, last verse won it for me. had better rhymes.

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Kiba Date: Tuesday, 07/Oct/08, 10:49 PM | Message # 10

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Quote (EmSeed)
the only reason you dont shine is cause you no good/
they always say that its all good in the hood/
thats true except the fact that the hood you is from is no good/

For me thats ok as long as you use it smarlty and make a point wit it
and iv done things kind of like that b4 too, so for me that those lines where good...

Yeah real close battle this one but i feel Montana wins
caz he came through more hard... sory i cant really make a explanation
cause time is of the essence for me right now,Good battle Peace


I looked at the moon so full and so bright
And then at the fireplace with its flickering light
And realised why this world will never be right

Montana213 Date: Tuesday, 07/Oct/08, 10:59 PM | Message # 11

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1-1 so far?

Can't turn back my eyes on the prize
I got nothing to lose
everybody gotta die
say good-bye to the bad guy

Montana213 Date: Tuesday, 07/Oct/08, 11:01 PM | Message # 12

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and kiba vote in the poll so its easier to keep track of

Can't turn back my eyes on the prize
I got nothing to lose
everybody gotta die
say good-bye to the bad guy

AruNavi Date: Wednesday, 08/Oct/08, 6:14 AM | Message # 13

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montana is NICE lol.

my girl friend

I am probably RHH4 asshole of the site lmao

THE PUREST MC=ME ARU NAVI My brother=Menace Uncharted
My wife=Chinita the Beautiful
My rival=LaPen
My niggas=Eboyd Kiba Pen LaPen Lord Meth P Noble NtG Render 11thPlauge

i woulda done rubber matches if i new u was gone bite Aru Navi/

AHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH i love this line

how did i bite aru navi? just curious...
uz every verse he did in dat battle, he tried flipping my verse every single time...it was work n until i won lol but yea u basically tried 2 flip da 1st verse like him
Aru Navi says-"Cause I beez da shitz." West Coast King Style

Montana213 Date: Wednesday, 08/Oct/08, 6:13 PM | Message # 14

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lol tnx

Can't turn back my eyes on the prize
I got nothing to lose
everybody gotta die
say good-bye to the bad guy

Kiba Date: Thursday, 09/Oct/08, 10:38 PM | Message # 15

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so whats up here? seems like no one else is gona vote......so Montana wins or wait longer?

I looked at the moon so full and so bright
And then at the fireplace with its flickering light
And realised why this world will never be right

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