So you're a hip hop hobbyist? tell it to my lobbyist,
and you can get filed under 'no skill' its obvious.
You can't dismantle when demolished, you even acknowledged,
I render style significance, scholar, pay me homage..
Approaching me with a drollish scheme is a hopeless dream,
Your rhyming efficiency resembles that of a broke machine.
Magnificence, I emanate it. Your 'sly as fox prose' is constipated..
If you're looking for your rhyme book, I fried it up and then I ate it....

"People said his brain was infected by Devils..."

I actually didn't mean to.... when i looked back at your verse after i posted i was surprised.. bc i usually don't do that...

I think i did it in a different context, so there should be no problems...

Ok, pal, let's do this...

"People said his brain was infected by Devils..."

woooo

I been getting all my audio equipment and loops ready... So before i get disqualified... Here is my Verse...

I'm off to the club... Peace..

I'm gonna brief the whole forum, rock a non-stop flow to inform them,
My opposite opponent, twist him into submission wit my formal decorum.
I'm a lyrical cyclone, i mad muster, battling cat, and dog gone gat buster,
You're a water pistol, full of shit like a toilet tissue, u lack luster..
You can eat a whole bag of dicks, that resemble eight wireless microphones,
I'll eat pensmoke and get more sick, he's kickin at my stomach wit bass and prose,
reverse polarity thought approach, I dodged the local magnet school,
I'll slice you precise with a fillet knife, so fast, the blood spilt blue,
You tried to rise like a balloon, but got popped, drop you like an anvil on toons,
You can't handle me dude, I'll laugh at ya', my spectacular vernacular,
You got a curve pitchin' me verses, i'll smack 'em right the hell back at ya'
So where did Pensmoke's verses end up? by now I'd estimate half way past NASA..

deep space.

"People said his brain was infected by Devils..."

I'll have my Final RPG round and extra mag in my sidearm ready to drop for Pensmoke when i wake up later on today...

Added (09/May/09, 6:06 Pm)
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no matter what i choose to interface, I'm still the one u dread 2 face,
calloussly carve you up, and proceed to sit down in your place,
I could use Wax spiinnin on plates, DATS, text, CD's or Tapes.
competition like you i leave Earthless, Chokin', floatin' in Space,
I may have had my first taste, but I can not, will not diminish,
Because after this scrimage, I've got a tournament I'm plannin' to finish,
Now you wanna call the battle, Pensmoke? What is your pen broke?
It'll take more than pen stabbing, zen jabbing punchlines
to hunt down my rhymes, I may not outrank you but I can still flank you,
word 4 word you must have dropped a grenade somewhere on your own frontlines
So don't try and set my limits,That whole 3rd verse was all a gimmick
Try to step and diss me, you will get played infinite, this game i'm in it,
With a style so old it's not dummified, it's mummified,and i'm a humble guy,
but you should hide, beneath that brim Gilligan, and that old haircut, LMAO, you should die..
Drop a quarter in that ass, that avatar is immaculate, you are not allowed shine,
All that's left of Pensmoke is the tragically sketched chalked up outline..

"People said his brain was infected by Devils..."

1st round - render
2nd round - render
3rd round - pensmoke

render only just. Both of you were so dope and Pensmoke did have a great flow and some great punchlines, but render had some good dissing lines too.

btw that about his avatar was pretty clever, though i still gave that round to pensmoke coz he had some awesome lines in his verse