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Agent X vs. Prozac (Tie Breaker)
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| prozac26 |
Date: Tuesday, 05/May/09, 7:32 PM | Message # 46 |
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Quote (EmSeeD) man i wish i could vote coz i know who i'd vote for oh well
mind telling us?
 Nalin' Palin
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| eboyd |
Date: Tuesday, 05/May/09, 7:34 PM | Message # 47 |
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Quote (Joker13) real talk i have both of them you mean you can't decide? Quote (prozac26) mind telling us? that's what i asked him in PM.  he hasn't responded yet though 
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
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| eboyd |
Date: Tuesday, 05/May/09, 7:37 PM | Message # 48 |
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care to explain a reason why?
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
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| eboyd |
Date: Tuesday, 05/May/09, 8:23 PM | Message # 49 |
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Lol! It's not like that Joker. I'm not even batlling here, remember just wanted to know. Prozac, yes, technically.
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
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| eboyd |
Date: Tuesday, 05/May/09, 11:53 PM | Message # 50 |
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Bump! I_Guy, J-Breakz, we need your votes!
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Wednesday, 06/May/09, 0:02 AM | Message # 51 |
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i'll send J-Breakz and I_Guy a message
http://chirbit.com/emseed
http://youtube.com/siwooot
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| eboyd |
Date: Wednesday, 06/May/09, 0:07 AM | Message # 52 |
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Cool. Hey, I'ma get at you by email.
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erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Wednesday, 06/May/09, 0:08 AM | Message # 53 |
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okay hang on though coz my computer's slow
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| I_Guy |
Date: Wednesday, 06/May/09, 0:12 AM | Message # 54 |
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Quote (Prozac) Prozac:
I’d like to take this opportunity to clear up a misconception/
Regardless of what he writes, X’s lyrics lack depth perception
First couple lines pretty good, pretty staight forward. Quote (Prozac) Consider this, I can’t attempt a “Takeover” when there’s nothing to take/
It’s already mine, that should be easy to understand, just like a “piece of cake”
First line = cool, second line is kind of contrived. Quote (Prozac) And after the ruckus is brought, this Agent gets fucked like Suzette
At first I thought this was the line that stood out the most. But then I realized where it came from. Major discredit.  Quote (Prozac) Make you change your manners when I drop upon you this lyrical etiquette
Not feeling the rhyme scheme. Quote (Prozac) I see right through you, as if I was staring through a window
This again is contrived. Quote (Prozac) And use “Ether” to light up the indo/
And you will die by the mic, since I’m killing you with it/
Dimwit, rhymes so deep they need to be back-lit
Pretty alright. Quote (Prozac) When I spit my verses, they leave a bad taste in my mouth/
So sick, make your career go into a life-long drought
Off meter a bit. Quote (Prozac) X’s not genuine, like a fake superhero, created by Marvel/
Marvellous, this mercenary has brought you all my lyrical revival/
Rivalry this ain’t, so I’m taking this light/
And don’t be mad at me because your father only loved you at night
Okay ideas, but wasn't feeling Marvel and revival together. And again it was pretty off meter. Pretty good overall, could have been worked on a bit more though. Quote (Agent X) Agent X:
Nice last verse, kid. it was your meanest/
Too bad you bit your best punchline from the Genius/
It's fiendish how biting cats always gotta pretend/
I'll chew up your weak bars and spit them again/
I'll never defend such fraudulence in my lifetime/
I suggest, if you want to win, you call a lifeline/
You say your rhymes leave a bad taste. Well son/
That's because your shitty verses leave skid marks on your tongue
First great line. ^ Quote (Agent X) Yes, I share my name with a character from a comic book/
But now you claim I'm fake? OK, let's take a look:/
You stole the concept for that line from 8 D/
So who in this battle is truly a fake MC?/
Laying Prozac six feet deep in the dirt/
exposing his fraudulence like a wet t-shirt/
In the end you had to succumb to personal blows. That's what's the saddest/
So I'll diss you in that vein. Your mom is twice the man your dad is.
Second great line. ^ That's all it really took. Liked it. Stayed in meter, made sense, and rhymed well. Fair wordplay. ....And so I go with AX.
We all know that each of our end is near; the question is do we accept the end of our living existence, or do we accept our existence as dead men...
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Wednesday, 06/May/09, 1:18 AM | Message # 55 |
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agent x. prozac says too much in his lines n it throws off the punch. but it waz a close 1. I waz gonna vote prozac for a sec.
livin life like some cheesy movie
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| eboyd |
Date: Wednesday, 06/May/09, 1:20 AM | Message # 56 |
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cool. alright, this one goes into the history books. thanks J-Breakz!
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
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| AgentX |
Date: Wednesday, 06/May/09, 1:21 AM | Message # 57 |
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 Added (06/May/09, 1:21 Am)
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btw, Prozac, good battle.... bitch.
prepare to be X'd out! Agent X on MySpace 
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| eboyd |
Date: Wednesday, 06/May/09, 1:22 AM | Message # 58 |
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Quote (AgentX) btw, Prozac, good battle.... bitch. stfu x
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
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| 11thPlague |
Date: Wednesday, 06/May/09, 10:02 AM | Message # 59 |
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Quote (prozac26) cool. alright, this one goes into the history books. thanks J-Breakz!
What A surprise E gets what he wants 
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| ill |
Date: Wednesday, 06/May/09, 10:38 AM | Message # 60 |
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the first one wasnt even a tie?
The World Is Yours
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