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Uncharted vs. ritesofpasage
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| Uncharted |
Date: Sunday, 28/Jun/09, 4:20 PM | Message # 1 |
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8 bars
16 bars
unlimited bars u go first since this your first time
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| ritesofpasage |
Date: Monday, 29/Jun/09, 7:08 PM | Message # 2 |
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Walk amiss not knowing that your hits upside your head/
Get your diss dissed then your disc slipped after I flow up on this thread/
Nothing new under the sun just my shine got you blind nuff said/
And these bars will leave you rusted when I bust it you need to dust it/
I let the blood lube it when I thrust it put you to sleep with no fussing/
Cousin I'm cut from a different line you just the inbreed husband/
Trying to be married to the game tie the true knot to your name/
When I put your wack raps and mind maps to the flame/
Check out my melody faithfulness is the fidelity of my soundtrack to that of the heavenlies.....
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| Uncharted |
Date: Monday, 29/Jun/09, 8:20 PM | Message # 3 |
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Quote (ritesofpasage) Walk amiss not knowing that your hits upside your head/
Get your diss dissed then your disc slipped after I flow up on this thread/
Nothing new under the sun just my shine got you blind nuff said/
And these bars will leave you rusted when I bust it you need to dust it/
I let the blood lube it when I thrust it put you to sleep with no fussing/
Cousin I'm cut from a different line you just the inbreed husband/
Trying to be married to the game tie the true knot to your name/
When I put your wack raps and mind maps to the flame/
im like god but a different version rappers be used up like detergent
everybody knows everytime i battle each person my wordplay nourish
im like the beginning of christainity, i seen wack mc's, then my lyrics flourished
beat this dude up like he's horrorish, this dude gon know my words r gory and horror-ish
so take a look at my horror shit, make niggas revolve and slam em like chick norris
i make you more repetitive than a chorus, u know uncharted neva give up
Ritesofpassage knows i have the right to leave his dead body looking tragic
Having his rhyme tied in a charlie horse and strech em like Mr. Fantastic first horrorish means a prostitute, yall will find out the smile for yourselves and second horrorish means nasty
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Message edited by Uncharted - Monday, 29/Jun/09, 8:22 PM
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| ritesofpasage |
Date: Tuesday, 30/Jun/09, 8:02 AM | Message # 4 |
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Like a virgin I'm loving the urges to hurt this pussy
Never uncertain of my damage when I put my work in
Known to get to murkin in all swamp lands mushy
Blaspheme just push me to strike you down like lightening
Doesn't matter if you high as a kite you not a god or a titan
Just a hype man bastard child of the unenlightened
No one wants to sign him because his circle the hand around his dick fighting
And his writing needs footnotes and extra commentary
On this bullshit I let go it's freestyle and always voluntary
But he drop the movie plugs for the monetary
You not Tyler Perry you got no creative in his genes
And you not an undiscovered talent just the wrong path nawmean
You not a fiend how you even claim an emcee
Why not even a line of dope find itself on your team
I grew up on the scene from the true family of kings
And it's all outta pocket how I repeat the damn thing
Check out my melody faithfulness is the fidelity of my soundtrack to that of the heavenlies.....
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| Uncharted |
Date: Tuesday, 30/Jun/09, 2:26 PM | Message # 5 |
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Quote (ritesofpasage) Like a virgin I'm loving the urges to hurt this pussy
Never uncertain of my damage when I put my work in
Known to get to murkin in all swamp lands mushy
Blaspheme just push me to strike you down like lightening
Doesn't matter if you high as a kite you not a god or a titan
Just a hype man bastard child of the unenlightened
No one wants to sign him because his circle the hand around his dick fighting
And his writing needs footnotes and extra commentary
On this bullshit I let go it's freestyle and always voluntary
But he drop the movie plugs for the monetary
You not Tyler Perry you got no creative in his genes
And you not an undiscovered talent just the wrong path nawmean
You not a fiend how you even claim an emcee
Why not even a line of dope find itself on your team
I grew up on the scene from the true family of kings
And it's all outta pocket how I repeat the damn thing
Like a virigin urging for pussy? this nigga must be homo
Compare me to a dude that does shows?
if thats true, then my last verse was just the promo
u didnt even flip the script, u nothin but lyrical monotone
give u some punchlines for charity, with each of yo verses left alone
u nothin but a typical mc saying nothing but jibberish on the microphone
I put yo boring voice in a helium, in my man-made colisuem
Even if mines burns down like rome's, everyone know im still defeatin him
I aint ice cube, but i eat yo ass up like bacon when i blow like north korean nukes
Giving this nigga silent treatment all the way down to his african roots
Im uncharted, you know i can be on any path, rappers cant figure out my craft
Facing me i change yo name to the "wrong passage", cause you r facing me wrath
My lines hit hard on rappers who do gay lyrics, so expect some bloody tears
nawmean?, u suppose to rep the africa, using west coast slang? get the fuck out of here
So u do that, cause your death of your rapping is coming near, the sound of it u can hear
Like i said to all my oppenents u gonna end up in fear, and no one else can make it more clear
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| ill |
Date: Tuesday, 30/Jun/09, 5:16 PM | Message # 6 |
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Quote (Uncharted) Like a virigin urging for pussy? this nigga must be homo i dont get this? this is a nice battle tho
The World Is Yours
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| ritesofpasage |
Date: Tuesday, 30/Jun/09, 6:54 PM | Message # 7 |
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You's a bitch see uncharted wanted me to go first
Knew I'd shit on this faggot and leave behind droppings on his whole verse
But it's over so I'ma roll over a new leaf
To display the carcass of this faggot and teach him the definition of beef
I had the rite to do deeds sorry I left your moms
I know this long distance call doesn't ease your calm
But be strong don't worry dog I'ma put you down
I know the world's been confusing so I'ma let you out
And don't you pout watch your mouth
And don't you doubt I'll kill a grave robber if I ever again catch you out
So now you better tell even the maggots to rat you out
Cuz there's only one king that wear the crown can't you count
Damn you sound stupid but this is a new record
I know you got no class so fall back while I skip ahead and respect it
Choose your weapon we all know you got no trigger
Why you throw punch lines like an infant to a babysitter
But this is bullshit and it's all quite obvious
The only thing this faggot should say about me on the track is marvelous
Check out my melody faithfulness is the fidelity of my soundtrack to that of the heavenlies.....
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| Uncharted |
Date: Wednesday, 01/Jul/09, 4:45 PM | Message # 8 |
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Quote (ill) i dont get this?
this is a nice battle tho
Quote (ritesofpasage) Like a virgin I'm loving the urges to hurt this pussy
he sounded like he wanted to put his dick in my pussy or some what when im a dude and he's a dude sooo...thats why i called it homo Added (30/Jun/09, 11:00 Pm)
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and dudes have dicks sooo yeah ummm.....anyway i will see if i can finish this tomorrow or tonight Added (01/Jul/09, 2:36 Pm)
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Quote (ritesofpasage) You's a bitch see uncharted wanted me to go first
Knew I'd shit on this faggot and leave behind droppings on his whole verse
But it's over so I'ma roll over a new leaf
To display the carcass of this faggot and teach him the definition of beef
I had the rite to do deeds sorry I left your moms
I know this long distance call doesn't ease your calm
But be strong don't worry dog I'ma put you down
I know the world's been confusing so I'ma let you out
And don't you pout watch your mouth
And don't you doubt I'll kill a grave robber if I ever again catch you out
So now you better tell even the maggots to rat you out
Cuz there's only one king that wear the crown can't you count
Damn you sound stupid but this is a new record
I know you got no class so fall back while I skip ahead and respect it
Choose your weapon we all know you got no trigger
Why you throw punch lines like an infant to a babysitter
But this is bullshit and it's all quite obvious
The only thing this faggot should say about me on the track is marvelous
First your lines were straight not there just confused
just like a gay dude, abused, and his gender is trans-fused
Battling me was the wrong choice, yo short reputuation is bruised
im supernatural with my juice, now watch me let loose
Nigga u dont have a clue, about what im about to do to u
Like the second verse im a about to put these bullets through u
When i spit a freestyle im eternal, when i write in my journal its inferno
He so full of him self talking this king and shit he aint go learned so
let me mix it up it call it my eternal inferno that can burn this hoe
I takeover with my ether, my verse is that shit that make yo soul burn slow
Trying too hard to do punchlines, those were nothing but coal....
that enlightened my inferno, hang his vocal cords to a tree, take a good photo
Ritesofpassage is nothin, all that complexity in his verses isnt his true wit
U said you the only one with crown but the truth he was sicking the scholars' dicks
Like when i smoked meth i am mystic and insant, So u betta listen
Im like stewie griffin, i lock babysitters in my car trunk, murderous infant
im so damn vicious, if u the king, im its guru, the muthafuckin malicouis
stomping through yo war zone like a militant, u know i just be killing it
like a phsyco, that never had sanity, "its a crazy emcee on the loose it cant be"
So next time u meet the young uncharted seed, betta go ahead and leave Added (01/Jul/09, 2:36 Pm)
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time to vote Added (01/Jul/09, 4:45 Pm)
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VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Message edited by Uncharted - Wednesday, 01/Jul/09, 4:47 PM
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| PNobleDaLyricist |
Date: Wednesday, 01/Jul/09, 5:53 PM | Message # 9 |
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ima go wit da youngest man in the battle here
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Wednesday, 01/Jul/09, 5:57 PM | Message # 10 |
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I vote Rites of Pasage He had the first and final rounds
Sick With It
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| Uncharted |
Date: Wednesday, 01/Jul/09, 6:09 PM | Message # 11 |
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Posts: 4766
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1-1 tie
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Wednesday, 01/Jul/09, 6:32 PM | Message # 12 |
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i vote RitesofPassage, Uncharted you were good but your lines were too long and i think you need to think more about the way you write your punchlines: Quote (Uncharted) i make you more repetitive than a chorus how do you make someone repetitive? you should have said he "sounds more repetitive than a chorus" or "you bore us you're too repetitive like a chorus" or something like that coz if you say "im gonna make you repetitive" it doesn't really make sense. i could see what you were trying to do and it would have been good but just work on the way you write it.
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| Uncharted |
Date: Wednesday, 01/Jul/09, 9:25 PM | Message # 13 |
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OPPS correction :u r more repetitive then a chorus.i meant to say that but i forgot to make an edit on that Added (01/Jul/09, 6:42 Pm)
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1-2 riteofpassage vote people Added (01/Jul/09, 9:25 Pm)
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| Aristotle |
Date: Thursday, 02/Jul/09, 0:19 AM | Message # 14 |
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My vote goes to RitesofPassage Good battle.
Uncharted, you gotta work on line length
your second verse is a good example. theyre dope lines, but they start off short and end up really long. gotta be consistent
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| Uncharted |
Date: Thursday, 02/Jul/09, 1:40 AM | Message # 15 |
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its hard for me to do because when i write i dont originally write like this.So its hard for me to do that and im not a punchline rapper
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