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Holiday Tournament Battle 2: RitesofPassage vs Uncharted
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Tuesday, 01/Dec/09, 8:01 PM | Message # 1 |
Heads
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Round 1: 8 bars
Round 2: 10 bars
Round 3: 16 bars *a bar is a count of the beat not two lines* if you don't post after a week you will lose by default (unless you have a really good reason), which will count as a loss on your Record Uncharted has the better ranking so RitesofPassage has to go first.
http://chirbit.com/emseed
http://youtube.com/siwooot
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| ritesofpasage |
Date: Thursday, 03/Dec/09, 0:11 AM | Message # 2 |
DJs
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If this were even a battle u wouldn't even have
an axe to grind/
Must of lost your mind forgot your way around foster child/
I got your fathers files and we about to read the
Verdict/
Soning cats just a past time because every pussy I murdered/
You ever heard of a rapper who never got acclaim/
What's his name that lost to rites who gives a fuck his shit was a shame/
Get with the game the first half already met with the rain/
Met with the reign stand up and get knocked down simple and plain
Check out my melody faithfulness is the fidelity of my soundtrack to that of the heavenlies.....
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| Uncharted |
Date: Friday, 04/Dec/09, 8:31 PM | Message # 3 |
Emcees
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yo verse makes me yawn, so yo talent is no longer needed
I dont need yo rap verses now, more like a tempurpedic
i've been rapping since i been chlling in my momma's fetus
After this, the x rays will be no longer needed
cause the fibia will be ripped from yo tibia
this faggot knows that he's inferior when i come from the interior
me never being acclaimed is straight insane
you yourself dont have enough game let alone gain
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Message edited by Uncharted - Friday, 04/Dec/09, 8:52 PM
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| Uncharted |
Date: Friday, 04/Dec/09, 8:57 PM | Message # 4 |
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Emcees
Posts: 4766
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Quote (8Diagrams) LOL Uncharted you should have wrote that Dylan style
wow....r u saying my verse sucked???Added (04/Dec/09, 8:57 Pm)
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nah nevermind lol!!!
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| Uncharted |
Date: Saturday, 05/Dec/09, 12:31 PM | Message # 5 |
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waiting for ritesofpassage..
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| Uncharted |
Date: Saturday, 05/Dec/09, 8:03 PM | Message # 6 |
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Emcees
Posts: 4766
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any day now...
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| ritesofpasage |
Date: Saturday, 05/Dec/09, 8:11 PM | Message # 7 |
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DJs
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You se a bitch and you come with your fan club can't stand man-au-man because you can't stand up/ Matter a fact you bent over back dropping bars man up/Lets the facts speak fuck your fucking stammers/Bullshit uncharted your man says how you trace your stanzas copy your answers uncharted because you not sick enough to fucking spit the cancers/Bombarded like Philly you can feel me when I hit you in the face with the hammers/Trying to be a bad boy just getting on that shit list of Santa/And that hit list will hand ya spiritual shrapnel lyrical come at you like the spirits that fucking snatched you/Just to cast you off the blessing and leave you with the curse guessing at transgressions as I leave you in the dirt/There's nothing new under sun but something under the earth/It's time you found out how the underground works/
Check out my melody faithfulness is the fidelity of my soundtrack to that of the heavenlies.....
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| Uncharted |
Date: Saturday, 05/Dec/09, 8:49 PM | Message # 8 |
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Emcees
Posts: 4766
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ritesofpassage shit still dont impress me
i kill this emcee in front of a crowd without pleading guilty
i can prove he's a pussy easily, spiritually and physically
nigga your useless, your already scratched from my hitlist
And shout outs to yo girl, im officailly #1 on her playlist
How the hell can i be on santa's bad list when he dont exist?
and your just as fake, wit yo fairy tale lyrics,your like a weak myth
My raps are so mean, haters know they cant even hate on this
you can burn my rhymes up, it still comes back stronger than the pheniox
Theres a story that talks about heros to zeros, you know how that goes
also, the reason i cant "spit cancer" is b/c im known to spit it chemo
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Message edited by Uncharted - Saturday, 05/Dec/09, 8:50 PM
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| ritesofpasage |
Date: Saturday, 05/Dec/09, 9:37 PM | Message # 9 |
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DJs
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A hundred hounds on the scent will never unearth what I done birth/Though I got the certificate for when the gun burst/Just to get more horrific kid I then put that nameless gum's to the curb..... blameless/Like no thumbs on guns or when heads turn from one that just dumps on perps/Hip hop's my work you crossed on turf just to get lost and served/Should of count the cost when you determined to wonder lost unnerved/Amber alert we got a corpse on first need the morgue to fit a toe tag on sir/Radio special tombstone requirements preferred the funeral's yours/Of course it's valiant work to keep you the best kept secret I let the silencer murk/And after this verse you should balance your skirt gonna need a new name/After a thousand trains found your worth now it's assured you going places like back alleys and more stations to slurp and burp/so just nod your head as I en-ter on your search you will be the mistress and nurse to every emcee since the days of kool herc so let's rehearse/Go ahead and spit then after that shit don't fight me again I insert/Not called rites for pretend sir
Check out my melody faithfulness is the fidelity of my soundtrack to that of the heavenlies.....
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| Uncharted |
Date: Saturday, 05/Dec/09, 11:00 PM | Message # 10 |
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Emcees
Posts: 4766
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Quote (8Diagrams) Uncharted had some WTF lines like that momma's pussy one.
i knew somebody was going to say that LMAO!!!
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Saturday, 05/Dec/09, 11:20 PM | Message # 11 |
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Heads
Posts: 11464
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round 1: Uncharted
round 2: close but ROP
round 3: i gave to ROP coz i liked his style more, also that line from uncharted about coming out of your mothers pussy, you should have just said womb, or when you were "concieved" instead. so overall vote is for RitesofPassage
http://chirbit.com/emseed
http://youtube.com/siwooot
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| thessad |
Date: Saturday, 05/Dec/09, 11:22 PM | Message # 12 |
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ritesofpassage 1st verse: Just came and went, nothing notable really
2nd verse: Goddamn, did your enter key break sometime between the first and second verse? This is annoying to read. Anyway, some nice lines in there. The flow seems a little off, but maybe that's just because it's in paragraph format
3rd verse: Nice throughout, the "slurp and burp" rhyme came off kinda weird though Uncharted 1st verse: A little basic, some nice ideas but they're not executed all that well
2nd verse: Started out pretty strong. "haters know they cant even hate on this" pretty much falls flat.
3rd verse: Not much going on here Vote goes to ritesofpassage.
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| Uncharted |
Date: Saturday, 05/Dec/09, 11:28 PM | Message # 13 |
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Emcees
Posts: 4766
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1-2 ros BUMP
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| Lord Meth |
Date: Saturday, 05/Dec/09, 11:33 PM | Message # 14 |
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Rites of Passage gets my vote......some pretty dope lines he was dropping...tho his verses were written like egyptian text in brail
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| Uncharted |
Date: Saturday, 05/Dec/09, 11:37 PM | Message # 15 |
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Emcees
Posts: 4766
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Quote (Lord Meth) es of Passage gets my vote......some pretty dope lines he was dropping...tho his verses were written like egyptian text in brail
1-3Added (05/Dec/09, 11:37 Pm)
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Quote (thessad) 3rd verse: Not much going on here
wow wtf??
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