EmSeeD. in reading each battler's verses, it was apparent who was more experienced, not just at battling, but writing rhymes in general. Erratic, not bad for a first real battle though. you are just as good as most of us were when we first started. just to show you what i mean, here's me and EmSeeD's first battle against each other. i was already somewhat experienced at the time (but you can still see that my style hadn't fully developed yet, and even now i would contend it still hasn't) and i think it was one of his first times ever writing rhymes, so i definitively won. either way, you can see the difference between then and now: http://bodescu.ucoz.com/forum/34-538-1
^^^ lol i didn't even try during my third verse haha! and you can see that EmSeeD (known as Muzzy back then) progressed big time throughout that battle, from his first verse to his last.
now check our most recent battle for a contrast to see how we have progressed since then:
http://realhiphop4ever.ucoz.com/forum/26-5005-1
you'll get there, just keep at it.