Kiba vs. Strykah

Date: Sunday, 28/Sep/08, 9:49 PM | Message # 1

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Kiba First Verse

Il be hitting strong with venom like a viper/
dont even think about stepping against this cypher, sound/
or you'll be found dead, bound to a stake with bullet holes in your head/
instead just run, this aint for fun when versing the lyrical gun/
il have you stunned, when your looking at/
my corrugated sabre, which blade is sharper than razors/
this invader of my dark chambers, heart is now in danger/
im gona throw a coat hanger down your throat, and hang you heartless/
then leave you stiff as starch is, in a state of catharisis

yes im going easy on strykah

Date: Sunday, 28/Sep/08, 9:49 PM | Message # 2

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Strykah Second Verse

Kiba the kat? who ever told u that?
you the rat that bitches my style is untouchable
hayabusa shock you with lyrical deadly electrical
bolts of lighting strike, i rock the mic and rock you
off your high stand il storm your land and kill your fam
like the taliban in pakistan,
il get a needle n over dose ya, you can jump in to a bath with a toaster
thats just a culture il have the Yakuza eatting you like a volcher

Date: Monday, 29/Sep/08, 6:02 AM | Message # 3

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Hayabusa i should be carging thee a fee, and you aready know/
no opponent will ever get the best of me/
i'm like moments of ecstasy, the word-gasm/
a phenomenon no human can fathom, the phantasm/
packed with hellfire for the grand dragon/
you just tag along, longing for a ride on my band wagon/
treating rap like its blackjack or backgammon/
its not a game tho and you lack talent/
you're like a cat candid crack addict with a smack habit/
getting hypnotised by my black magic/
mesmerized as it all adds up in a mathematical manner/
while still building bars out of bad grammar/
il hammer into you illusions of everyday routine/
that moves me to meditate, i paint dream scapes/
and spend late nights chilling to beat tapes/
in the end, im keeping this real while you just be fake/

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dont forget dude this one is 16 bars and the next is unlimited

I looked at the moon so full and so bright
And then at the fireplace with its flickering light
And realised why this world will never be right

Message edited by Kiba - Monday, 29/Sep/08, 6:01 AM

Date: Monday, 29/Sep/08, 6:03 AM | Message # 4

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The hayabusa is killing this curious kat
they call kiba i send chills on ya spine
and make you shiver you cant even deliver
a perfect rhyme im 10x over your lines
like space n time, you keep using wacky
line to make remarks but i spark light
into your gave of darkness il leave you heart less
dont try and test my intelligence
the 5th element killing you like the american president
you the onlyone at your family reunion
dont start a revolution you spit shit straight pollution
im unkillable like rasputin, im light years over you
i look down and see the sad child in you
i spit full static like an auto-matic
you a dumbass spastic my style is fantastic
metal jacket you cant hack it your style is plastic

Date: Monday, 29/Sep/08, 6:40 AM | Message # 5

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I'll be doin this until im ragged and aged with varacous veins/
live long and prosper while you amateurs fade/
with your cling-on ways, that i smash back into another age/
iv asked the lord to forgive you for those wack sins on stage/
these rhymes will end your foolish masquerade/
you'll bend the bars of this cage but you still can't escape/
your brain's trapped in the part you were cast to play/
the same plot in the same genre/
the same drama with the same blood stained paper you chase after/
iv played this game like a snake charmer/
and been more rowdy than islanders on the lager/
your probably scarper from seeing me in untouchable armour/
and if you're smart you'll tuck in your chain/
cos nothing has changed, you will get mugged on this rugged terrain/
i'm running the plains barefoot hunting some game/
Kiba and Alex, we're one but not the same/
smokescreens burn up, you can't cover this flame/
i stay first class, top of the range/
even if my topic is strange, i still spit the philosophical phrase
at your mockery of hip hop and comical ways/
and when you feel my phenomenal rage/
you'll be suffering abdominal pains/
while lost in this impossible maze/

Good battle man cool

I looked at the moon so full and so bright
And then at the fireplace with its flickering light
And realised why this world will never be right

Message edited by Kiba - Monday, 29/Sep/08, 6:46 AM

Date: Monday, 29/Sep/08, 10:04 AM | Message # 6

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You the kat who acts like his hardcore ready for war
you sound like you would rob a liquor store actting violent
you actting brawl waging war with a warriror you need an alliance
but i spit full raw n break ya bones to the core and put you in silence
dont entervien whats in between il strike ya spleen full horrified screem
leaving you where the grimreaper been sydneys murder scene
you dont even stand a chance to dance you a dead dying plant
an ant gonna be crushed with an avalanch
you better get sobber kiba the kat il treat you like a fat chick
after a hangover im lucky like the 4 leaf clover
your life is over comming at me like you could stand over
until i lyricaly drive ya in to the concrete victory is sweet
i got you beat if you was a vegetarian id feed you meat
like a paraplegic you cant walk no more
il leave you line out n chalk and inject ya 3rd neck with pork

This battle has been my best imo!

Date: Monday, 29/Sep/08, 10:37 AM | Message # 7

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Quote (ShaolinShinobi)

il treat you like a fat chick

lol how do you treat fat chicks? tongue

I looked at the moon so full and so bright
And then at the fireplace with its flickering light
And realised why this world will never be right

Date: Monday, 29/Sep/08, 10:39 AM | Message # 8

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Quote (Kiba)

how do you treat fat chicks

lmao! i mean like when u get drunk n think a fat chick is hot then u get a hangover
the next day and treat them like there nothing n dont even talk naw go near them again
treat them like an outcast so forth harsh n curl yes,, but in a battle with u i had to come hard - no homo

Date: Monday, 29/Sep/08, 10:53 AM | Message # 9

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Quote (ShaolinShinobi)

lol ok i gotcha

I looked at the moon so full and so bright
And then at the fireplace with its flickering light
And realised why this world will never be right

Date: Monday, 29/Sep/08, 11:08 AM | Message # 10

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WOW.....................................
That was a great battle
Strykah or ShaolinShinobi u have improved since wen u last battled me
Kiba u sealed it with ur last verse IMO so my vote goes to noone tho because it was too close to call
But man that was a hot ass battle

Date: Monday, 29/Sep/08, 11:12 AM | Message # 11

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Quote (Meth)

THANKS! man yeah this battle was dope i thought id have to play cheap shots
but i just focust on the battle n came thru pretty good n kiba that 2nd verse was dope
you have the same style as pegz in a way how u keep a good rhyme going

eboyd

Date: Monday, 29/Sep/08, 11:23 AM | Message # 12

Heads

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great battle! however i feel Kiba made a bit more sense and was more consistent, even down to his rhyme scheme (which doesn't matter much, but it is a note that you may want to take Nayte). it was definitely close, but i say Kiba has the slight edge.

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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

-T.S. Eliot

battle record:

7-0-0

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Date: Monday, 29/Sep/08, 8:31 PM | Message # 13

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yeah everyones improving. i can tell shinobi improved a lot here. but i vote kiba

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Date: Monday, 29/Sep/08, 8:33 PM | Message # 14

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well the vote is 4-1 that and it seems theres a clear pattern who won so Kiba u yet again win another battle (douche)

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