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Forum » RHHF Artists/Battlers » Battle Archive » TheWatcher vs. Plague11 ((Text Battle))
TheWatcher vs. Plague11
Watcher Date: Thursday, 08/Jan/09, 11:35 AM | Message # 1

Watchers
 Startin off' Knockin this dude's eye out the sock,
Poke his brain with ma dick till he gets biter's block
I've never really battled Big L Before so this should be funny
Dude, have you ever considered battling for money?
Ya super-sized purple font makes ya look pretty divine,
But reading your verse from line to line I'm wonderin where the fuck are all the rhymes?
"First off fuck your bitch and the click you claim"
Naw, fuck it I don't need to bite Pac you ain't got no game
This is a Hip-Hop Group, no Pussycat Dolls slash Kanye Lyrics
You can spread your pop bullshit elsewhere, I don't wanna hear it
Let's face it, we're not really in the hood
So don't choke, bite some MC Hammer I hear that CTT joint is real good
Now stop what you're doing & put some Kanye music on
Write a verse & find some 4 year old outside to use it on

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Called ya out, hope you don't mind me starting a thread.

11thPlague Date: Thursday, 08/Jan/09, 12:20 PM | Message # 2

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 Imma tell you once stop messing with the devils poet
11th plague too big and yo momma knows it
Go ahead ill wait, go get your dog, cat and little sister audience
five minutes of fame and i feel you getting alittle tence
holy water rinse wont help your untrained noise
no audio in the voice of all the ho in you boy
dick riding the royce and still fighting the force
imma let the people capture you moist
like your pussy is when you playing with toys
dont get mad at me cause yo daddy took you to bed
i invision a transgend and pain to difficult to just mend
twenty dicks up ur hole and there all made out of lead
your five minutes are up so enough has been said.

Message edited by 11thPlague - Thursday, 08/Jan/09, 12:23 PM
Watcher Date: Thursday, 08/Jan/09, 12:54 PM | Message # 3

Watchers
 Come on now, quit yappin about dicks, pullin tricks
'Devils Poet' ya still gently bitin & still soundin moody as a pregnant chick
And please stop editing ya verse, just when ya thought it couldn't it get badder it does,
And I don't mean in a good way I mean worse, just let it die & leave here in a hearse
Lemme just cut you down in ya prime, make you stop writing just to burn through time
I don't know what ya momma told ya but you suck you should learn to rhyme
Hope you're done with the homo shit, don't worry this'll be done quick
And if you get as much as one vote I'll give away you suckin a voters dick

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Heh, didn't like this one too much myself.. Wasn't feeling too creative.

11thPlague Date: Thursday, 08/Jan/09, 1:06 PM | Message # 4

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your five minutes are up so enough has been said.

i meant what i said so im done with you.

and thats not bittin lol devils poet lol

Message edited by 11thPlague - Thursday, 08/Jan/09, 1:09 PM
Watcher Date: Thursday, 08/Jan/09, 1:15 PM | Message # 5

Watchers
 Haaa. No I'm just sayin - Unoriginal. Big L says he's devil's son and you come here with Devil's poet after having bitten one of his verses. But whateva I guess we're done.
eboyd Date: Thursday, 08/Jan/09, 3:00 PM | Message # 6

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 Usually we do 3 verses. Oh well though. Alright, voting time. It's hard to vote here but if you don't count that admittedly weak verse from the Watcher, his first verse, to me, was just a bit more focused. If you rap it in your head it kind of reads on some Immortal Technique shit. I say Watcher has the slight edge here.
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

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battle record:

7-0-0

Acekat00o Date: Thursday, 08/Jan/09, 3:22 PM | Message # 7

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 i like 11plagues verse better ,the last rhime won me over biggrin
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Watcher Date: Thursday, 08/Jan/09, 4:14 PM | Message # 8

Watchers
 Alright, thanks for the votes ya'll I believe it's 1-1. I knew I should've googled some mama jokes ^ Just playing man, you actually did write a better verse than I expected.
11thPlague Date: Thursday, 08/Jan/09, 6:37 PM | Message # 9

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 LOL yall voted for this shit and not the real thing on the actual tournament!!!!!
eboyd Date: Thursday, 08/Jan/09, 6:42 PM | Message # 10

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 LMAO! I'll vote on your battle in the other thread. I didn't realize it was finished.
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

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battle record:

7-0-0

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