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check out this rhyme!!!
LLyRiC Date: Tuesday, 03/Nov/09, 10:24 PM | Message # 16

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I really want to see you in different topic

aite heres another one i posted this in the cypher awhile ago

behold,a lil boy who was jus 8 yearz old,
bright child, but sadly his future was already foretold,
started dancin wit the devil young, n quickly lost his soul,
but it waznt bought, trust me it waznt even sold,
it was jus a cycle he waz in,created by hiz family,
from hez uncle named Sammy and aunt Sally,
who were sick of being bothered, so they created a gang,
that grew and spread through the country like a deadly plague,
the boy was seeing all this like he waz front row, starin at the stage,
but the full change occured when hiz brother handed him his first 12 guage,
told him itz kill or be killed, unleashing the beast from the cage,
the boy started gangbangin and drug slangin at such a young age,
alwayz waz trued up, blued up, and stayed tru to the left side,
alwayz waved hiz flag around, didnt have anything to hide,
called himself c-rip, g i wonder why,
alwayz waz with hiz homiez ready to ride,
he felt invincible, like he could never die,
till that one night where he got into that rival fight,
got shanked 8 timez, felt faint and swore he saw the light,
but lil c-rip was brought back to life,
after that night, he jus had a new insight,
started to bury his wrongs, and do whats right,
wanted to get out of the gang, but his brother said no,
not until u handle that kid, and i dont mean in a fight,
so c-rip got a mac-10 ready, and suddenly ran up on the kid,
blood spilled in the streets, payback for wat that bitch did,
but jus a few weeks later,when he was walkin down the street,
heard a car screech,bam bam!! dam got hit,
to shocked to scream even speak,
fell to the ground, tried to look around,
didnt see anyone tryin to help him get to hiz feet,
waznt until 10 minutez later when homeboy rolled by, much to hiz surprise,
saw lil c-rip layin there with no life in hiz eyez,
callin for help but it waz far to late, why even try,
momma was nearby,came 3 minutez later,
saw her son then started to scream and cry,
looked to the heavens in the sky, yelled oh god why,
tryed to change hiz life for the better, but why waz he denied,
from your mercy, this god shit must all be a lie,
mother had become hysterical, but it waz worse when his brother cam by,
mother started beatin brother, sayin itz ur fault hez gone,
brother looked at the body, knowing that wat hiz mother said waznt wrong,
and this is where i have to end this song,
c-rip was only 15, hez life cut short, didnt live long,
even though he tried to change, his past came along,
and decided hiz future, in an instant he waz gone,
the past alwayz catchez up to you, no matter witch way,
it can get to you in a year, a month, probably even a day,
so becarefull of your mistakes, cuhz even if you try to change,
your skeletons can cum back to life and your life can be totally deranged.


L.L.y.R.i.C.

L.et L.oose Y.our R.eal I.nner C.reativity

spreading the word through my music
that real true hip hop that i love

EmSeeD Date: Wednesday, 04/Nov/09, 3:13 AM | Message # 17

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that's pretty nice man, i like that, i agree with el matador braggadocio rhymes are good but i like songs like these more, nothing wrong with braggadocio songs as long as you have variety

http://chirbit.com/emseed
http://youtube.com/siwooot
El_Matador Date: Wednesday, 04/Nov/09, 5:10 PM | Message # 18

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Ill! Hook up with Wink-ass Eboyd and record something but WATCH OUT! Cos he could fuck your girl like Wink did to Bunny Rabbit's girl!!!

MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger



Message edited by El_Matador - Wednesday, 04/Nov/09, 5:14 PM
eboyd Date: Wednesday, 04/Nov/09, 8:30 PM | Message # 19

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lolwut?!

my new theme song



erikboyd60@hotmail.com

"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

-T.S. Eliot

battle record:

7-0-0

LLyRiC Date: Thursday, 05/Nov/09, 0:32 AM | Message # 20

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hahaha if wink aka eboyd fucked my girl
he'd get his ass whooped exactly like wink!!!
or like this
groinkick
hahaha
but for real eboyd im down az fuk to start recordin
ive been workin on my delivery now and its gettin better
so im fuckin prepared to record!!!!!

Added (05/Nov/09, 0:32 Am)
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oh and thankz emseed


L.L.y.R.i.C.

L.et L.oose Y.our R.eal I.nner C.reativity

spreading the word through my music
that real true hip hop that i love

El_Matador Date: Thursday, 05/Nov/09, 9:47 AM | Message # 21

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but for real eboyd im down az fuk to start recordin
ive been workin on my delivery now and its gettin better
so im fuckin prepared to record!!!!!

what about flowing?


MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger

LLyRiC Date: Thursday, 05/Nov/09, 7:04 PM | Message # 22

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wat do u mean flowing??
isnt that wat u do when u rap, u flow.


L.L.y.R.i.C.

L.et L.oose Y.our R.eal I.nner C.reativity

spreading the word through my music
that real true hip hop that i love

El_Matador Date: Thursday, 05/Nov/09, 7:41 PM | Message # 23

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wat do u mean flowing??
isnt that wat u do when u rap, u flow.

this is very important. I meant fitting with the beat and writing to the beat and eventually some arrangement like playing with the flow (like Tech N9ne does) to don't make listener bored with the spit.


MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger

LLyRiC Date: Thursday, 05/Nov/09, 8:18 PM | Message # 24

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yea thatz wat i meant wit delivery
i thought it would be easy to go wit a beat wit lyrics
but its fukn not
and ive been practicin alot so its improved alot too
i recorded a song on my cell phone but i dont know how to post it here
lol


L.L.y.R.i.C.

L.et L.oose Y.our R.eal I.nner C.reativity

spreading the word through my music
that real true hip hop that i love

eboyd Date: Thursday, 05/Nov/09, 9:01 PM | Message # 25

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hahaha if wink aka eboyd fucked my girl
he'd get his ass whooped exactly like wink!!!
or like this

LOL

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but for real eboyd im down az fuk to start recordin
ive been workin on my delivery now and its gettin better
so im fuckin prepared to record!!!!!

alright, well, i'll be in LA for Thxgiving but idk if i'm going down to the studio then. i'll be down there in Dec. though for sure. just hit me up. email is on here or you can PM me. also, and this is hidden so only members can see it, Available for users only peace!


my new theme song



erikboyd60@hotmail.com

"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

-T.S. Eliot

battle record:

7-0-0

LLyRiC Date: Friday, 06/Nov/09, 2:15 AM | Message # 26

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alright, well, i'll be in LA for Thxgiving but idk if i'm going down to the studio then. i'll be down there in Dec. though for sure. just hit me up. email is on here or you can PM me. also, and this is hidden so only members can see it, Available for users onlymy cell phone number is 818-399-3564. hit me up anytime. i may not answer because of football, but i will return your call when i can. peace!

yea furshure man i will hit u up
good looking out!!!
:)


L.L.y.R.i.C.

L.et L.oose Y.our R.eal I.nner C.reativity

spreading the word through my music
that real true hip hop that i love

El_Matador Date: Friday, 06/Nov/09, 9:42 AM | Message # 27

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delivery is something different but fuck it. hope you gonna drop a heavy track.... and keep your girl away from Winky Wink aka Erik haha

MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger

Uncharted Date: Friday, 06/Nov/09, 8:07 PM | Message # 28

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818-399-3564

lmao i wouldnt do all that if i were you...dont be surprised if somebody from here give you a prank call


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LLyRiC Date: Friday, 06/Nov/09, 9:19 PM | Message # 29

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hope you gonna drop a heavy track.... and keep your girl away from Winky Wink aka Erik haha

hopefully man i cant wait to get in a studio
i once went into my friends studio but he waz too into mainstream
and that waznt my style and we jus butted heads in his studio lol

El_Matador Date: Friday, 06/Nov/09, 9:33 PM | Message # 30

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hopefully man i cant wait to get in a studio
i once went into my friends studio but he waz too into mainstream
and that waznt my style and we jus butted heads in his studio lol

but if you pay for the studio then its all up to you what are you going to record. lol
Eboyd is 100% underground but I think that singin' in the hook would be a pleasure for him


MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger

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