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| LLyRiC |
Date: Thursday, 29/Oct/09, 8:25 PM | Message # 1 |
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uncharted i hope u dont mind but i took one of your raps and mixed it wit my own.... spontaneous flow, dont know wat ima say next/
designin rhymes in my head, i swear its like my sixth sense/
now get tense/ fill with suspense/ az i commence/
to dispense/ immense/
heat with words, that burn wit a sweet scent/
like insense/ intense/
syllable symbolism to fuck wit ur subliminal/
spittin true shit that makes people cynical/
so they sugges/ i keep my complex/ vocab, to a minimal/
but fuck that/ ima still spit perplexed raps/
and inject needles/ into peoples cerebral/
with knowledge, to feed the minds that are feeble/
shiieettt, nigguh, the world is mine/
i murder rappers in a single file line/
one of my bars r better than all their rhymes combined/
i run throu land mines/ call me the red army/
ill break yo spine/ and send chills down yo body/
aint no stoppin me/ fold sloppy haikus into origamiz/
give em one inch of death, like bruce lee/
hit nigguhs wit the symphony/like marley n kool g/
-rap my ass off feelin like shots from shottiez b/
wordplay lure hottiez to me/
got the attention from everybody here to Nagasaki/
so i make em relive the atomic bomb moments/
n give shinto angels the omen/
put hard rok rappin niggugs in an erosion/
this aint the closin/
I jus started on the components this verse iz holdin/
words that are re-moldin/ to rhyme smooth like a flowin/
-river, sendin shivers down these nigguhz figures/
dude please/
u are so out of my league/ when it comes to the prestige/
so flee/ or ill keep rapping till my lips bleed/
drop bombs cuhz im a savage/
blasts so massive/spit radioactive/
shock waves that will melt ur glasses/
in to ur skin/ soldiers servin to win/
nuthin when there raping women/
and killin children/ war is treason/
betrayal to human beings/
sin, like an angel losing its wings/
devils juices mixed wit gin swimmin in there bloodstream/
but dont get me wrong, stare too long
and get ur eyes stabbed with tongs/
murder niggers in song/
form/ get ur face torn/ looks deform/
as i spit into clouds and cause storms/
virgin mary-lyne's pussy torn/
i came in her pussy warm, 9 months later jesus is reborn/
apacolyptic, sickness, when i spit this, sick shit/
spill clips into rappers tits, stab their clavical/
ripped out their vocal cords, im the reason they choke in a battle/
stab em in the heart and watch the blood pour, call me a radical/
muzalim, no im jus tactical/
in murderin u with clever words, better verbs/
pissin dumb nigguhs off cuz they think im spittin racial slurs/
oh shit, this verse is a blur/ got me thinkin of her/
and how she let me get on top of her/
never gonna get off of her/
cuhz hip hop let me be on top of her for ever/. wat u think??!!!!!!
L.L.y.R.i.C. L.et L.oose Y.our R.eal I.nner C.reativity spreading the word through my music
that real true hip hop that i love
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| eboyd |
Date: Thursday, 29/Oct/09, 8:43 PM | Message # 2 |
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dope shit!
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Thursday, 29/Oct/09, 8:49 PM | Message # 3 |
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that's real nice man, i couldn't read the entire thing yet though coz i've got to go somewhere right now but i read most of it. do you plan on spitting it?
http://chirbit.com/emseed
http://youtube.com/siwooot
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| LLyRiC |
Date: Thursday, 29/Oct/09, 10:29 PM | Message # 4 |
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yup i got this tite ass violin beat here check out this beat
L.L.y.R.i.C. L.et L.oose Y.our R.eal I.nner C.reativity spreading the word through my music
that real true hip hop that i love
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| eboyd |
Date: Thursday, 29/Oct/09, 10:55 PM | Message # 5 |
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Yeah, that'll be tight man! Make sure to post the finished product! Also, if you want to collab with some artists and have a free place to record during the winter break, I'll be back in LA (I'm in Mississippi now on a football scholarship) for a month and a half and I will be running the studio I record at. It's absolutely free, you just have to sign up for the youth center and there's mad talent there. Only issue is that it's in Santa Monica but if you can't catch the bus out there, we can keep in touch and I'd be willing and able to pick you up and we can carpool out there considering my house is about 15 minutes away and you are on the way to Santa Monica from where I live. Just let me know if you are interested and we will plan to meet up. I can also hook you up with Leila Steinberg (2pac's old manager). Trust me, you will love it and you will truly be missing out if you don't come. I may even be able to introduce you to my boy Percee P if he is available while I'm out there.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| YANHAP1 |
Date: Friday, 30/Oct/09, 6:23 AM | Message # 6 |
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NICE!!!!
who killed bambi? 
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| LLyRiC |
Date: Saturday, 31/Oct/09, 7:24 PM | Message # 7 |
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oh my jesus eboyd i am soooooo down for that!!! lol
i really want to have a career in this its my fucking dream man lol.
furshure jus let me know and ill be willing to get there.
i jus need a studio that is all. thankz man ill be DEFINATELY sure to take up that offer
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bumpitybump!!! 
lol
L.L.y.R.i.C. L.et L.oose Y.our R.eal I.nner C.reativity spreading the word through my music
that real true hip hop that i love
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| Uncharted |
Date: Saturday, 31/Oct/09, 8:38 PM | Message # 8 |
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Quote (LLyRiC) uncharted i hope u dont mind but i took one of your raps and mixed it wit my own....
spontaneous flow, dont know wat ima say next/
designin rhymes in my head, i swear its like my sixth sense/
now get tense/ fill with suspense/ az i commence/
to dispense/ immense/
heat with words, that burn wit a sweet scent/
like insense/ intense/
syllable symbolism to fuck wit ur subliminal/
spittin true shit that makes people cynical/
so they sugges/ i keep my complex/ vocab, to a minimal/
but fuck that/ ima still spit perplexed raps/
and inject needles/ into peoples cerebral/
with knowledge, to feed the minds that are feeble/
shiieettt, nigguh, the world is mine/
i murder rappers in a single file line/
one of my bars r better than all their rhymes combined/
i run throu land mines/ call me the red army/
ill break yo spine/ and send chills down yo body/
aint no stoppin me/ fold sloppy haikus into origamiz/
give em one inch of death, like bruce lee/
hit nigguhs wit the symphony/like marley n kool g/
-rap my ass off feelin like shots from shottiez b/
wordplay lure hottiez to me/
got the attention from everybody here to Nagasaki/
so i make em relive the atomic bomb moments/
n give shinto angels the omen/
put hard rok rappin niggugs in an erosion/
this aint the closin/
I jus started on the components this verse iz holdin/
words that are re-moldin/ to rhyme smooth like a flowin/
-river, sendin shivers down these nigguhz figures/
dude please/
u are so out of my league/ when it comes to the prestige/
so flee/ or ill keep rapping till my lips bleed/
drop bombs cuhz im a savage/
blasts so massive/spit radioactive/
shock waves that will melt ur glasses/
in to ur skin/ soldiers servin to win/
nuthin when there raping women/
and killin children/ war is treason/
betrayal to human beings/
sin, like an angel losing its wings/
devils juices mixed wit gin swimmin in there bloodstream/
but dont get me wrong, stare too long
and get ur eyes stabbed with tongs/
murder niggers in song/
form/ get ur face torn/ looks deform/
as i spit into clouds and cause storms/
virgin mary-lyne's pussy torn/
i came in her pussy warm, 9 months later jesus is reborn/
apacolyptic, sickness, when i spit this, sick shit/
spill clips into rappers tits, stab their clavical/
ripped out their vocal cords, im the reason they choke in a battle/
stab em in the heart and watch the blood pour, call me a radical/
muzalim, no im jus tactical/
in murderin u with clever words, better verbs/
pissin dumb nigguhs off cuz they think im spittin racial slurs/
oh shit, this verse is a blur/ got me thinkin of her/
and how she let me get on top of her/
never gonna get off of her/
cuhz hip hop let me be on top of her for ever/.
wat u think??!!!!!!
 i didnt see this???? but its a good edit of my verse i dont really mind those lyrics it was from one of my very old raps i wroteAdded (31/Oct/09, 8:38 Pm)
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credit me though
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| El_Matador |
Date: Saturday, 31/Oct/09, 8:40 PM | Message # 9 |
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Quote (eboyd) Also, if you want to collab with some artists and have a free place to record during the winter break, I'll be back in LA (I'm in Mississippi now on a football scholarship) for a month and a half and I will be running the studio I record at. It's absolutely free, you just have to sign up for the youth center and there's mad talent there. Only issue is that it's in Santa Monica but if you can't catch the bus out there, we can keep in touch and I'd be willing and able to pick you up and we can carpool out there considering my house is about 15 minutes away and you are on the way to Santa Monica from where I live. Just let me know if you are interested and we will plan to meet up. I can also hook you up with Leila Steinberg (2pac's old manager). Trust me, you will love it and you will truly be missing out if you don't come. I may even be able to introduce you to my boy Percee P if he is available while I'm out there. Eboyd is like Wink from '8 Mile' Helping with the careers and shit. LOL
Your cousin works for Dr Dre too?
MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger 
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| Uncharted |
Date: Saturday, 31/Oct/09, 8:57 PM | Message # 10 |
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Quote (El_Matador) Eboyd is like Wink from '8 Mile' Helping with the careers and shit. LOL
Your cousin works for Dr Dre too?
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| LLyRiC |
Date: Monday, 02/Nov/09, 10:39 PM | Message # 11 |
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Quote (El_Matador) Eboyd is like Wink from '8 Mile' Helping with the careers and shit. LOL Your cousin works for Dr Dre too? hahaha Added (02/Nov/09, 10:39 Pm)
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wat do you think about this rhyme...
itz sort of mainstream but i still like it...
yes i bit sum lines but it waz a freestyle lol so high up in the sky, i can shit on birds/
stick my dick in ur ear and fuck wat ya heard/
flows too obsurd, now observe/
how i conserve words to not confuse u stupid turds/
spittin verses and reversin curses/
of clown rappers on top by stickin em in a circus/
shiieett, i look at chicks alot/
like booty az much as sir mix alot/
i smoke alot pot/
of green gold/ at the end of the rainbow/
but sniffin white stuff is a major no no/
oh no/ u dont like my flow, fashow/
ur body found near the l.a. river, full of holes/
got a gat of raps, filled wit verbal bullets/
got my finger on the trigger nigger/ should i pull it/
pulled it/ poisonous verses killin worthless mcs on purpose/
my purpose, for bein here/
is to enter ya ear/
wit soundwaves so u can here/
and feel my emotions/
emotions part of the potion of my lyricism/
eatin pussy, cannibalism/
enter ya minds prisms/
movin bodies wit my rhythm/
kill em/ spill sum/ blood, ima thug/
so show me sum thug luv/
hoe, ima burst this flow/
like i nuted and made u slurp it slow/
OHH shit, im so sick/
tellin stories like slick rick/
talkin shit?/
ill kiss ur lips wit my fists/
of fury, pound on ur face till ur visions blurry/
kill u, dumb ur remains cuhz u smell like dirty curry/
bitch, im LLyRiC/
the illest lyricist/
words so explosive, they call me the verbal terrorist/
treasure this/ clever shit/ freestyle spit/
shit, i spit lugies/ into m.i.cs/ filled wit "old-timers" disease/
make u forget these fakes and only remember me/
mc/ L.L.y.R.i.C./ i c/ u c/ we all c me/
clean stature, better than ur favorite rapper/
-s favorite rapper/
style last forever, cuhz its MEE bitches/
chicks be rubbin on my dick like they want three wishes/. too smart, cant compare to my intellect/
so show respect or ill snap ur neck/
rip out ur lungs from ur fukn throught/
watch u choke/
die like u havin a stroke/
blindin eyes wit the cleanest rhymes, this aint a joke/
die wit no marks around ur apple/
no evidence leads to me, the killer of rappers/
weak mcs/ knees bleed/ red like pussy/
cuhz my verbal bullets penetrate, as i demonstrate/
how i take the hate/ fueled by the faggot fake/
mcs/ then straight blast my n.i.n.e/
infected bullets in lyrical form/
hittin like syllable storms/
as i spit in my metaphysical form/
spread through veins, leavin hearts torn/
newbies filled wit scorn/
watchin hip hop bein reborn/
realizin the same thing after climaxin to porn/
that they cant fuck wit how many pussies ive torn/
jamin infected microphones in em, spreadin disease/
s.t.ds/ herpes/ dont u EVER ask me for a slurpee/
or same shit will continue in u/
kill u/ records spin smooth/
dude/ im to godly/
smokin fat joints wit the prohets and bob marley/
rolled by the honorary/
B.I.G./ as fat as an M.I.C./
in the back hearin Pac and O.D.B./
kickin stories to the angels g/
jus kick back and chill wit to this lesson/
how my flows be spreadin blessins/
till u start feelin my essense/
the real-ness is wat im guessin/
spittin and splittin heads, till their open minded/
done reached the heights kid/
farther than the sun where u cant see, itll leave u blinded/
now dont steal my rhymes kid/
like cheap gas thats siphoned/
tooo cold to be sand man now, call me icemen!!!/
L.L.y.R.i.C. L.et L.oose Y.our R.eal I.nner C.reativity spreading the word through my music
that real true hip hop that i love
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Monday, 02/Nov/09, 11:15 PM | Message # 12 |
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i moved it here hope you don't mind, btw let us know when you record this coz we want to put together an RHHF Mixtape http://realhiphop4ever.ucoz.com/forum/16-3385-1 Quote (LLyRiC) stick my dick in ur ear and fuck wat ya heard/ lol rakim biter
http://chirbit.com/emseed
http://youtube.com/siwooot
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| El_Matador |
Date: Tuesday, 03/Nov/09, 4:40 PM | Message # 13 |
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Beautiful. Now switch the topics, enuff of braggadocio
MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger
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| LLyRiC |
Date: Tuesday, 03/Nov/09, 5:16 PM | Message # 14 |
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Quote (EmSeeD) lol rakim biter
haha thatz why i said Quote (LLyRiC) yes i bit sum lines but it waz a freestyle lol Quote (El_Matador) Now switch the topics, enuff of braggadocio lol. true but i have alot of raps ive written wit different topics
these are the most recent and sickest ive ever wrote lol
L.L.y.R.i.C. L.et L.oose Y.our R.eal I.nner C.reativity spreading the word through my music
that real true hip hop that i love
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| El_Matador |
Date: Tuesday, 03/Nov/09, 6:54 PM | Message # 15 |
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Quote (LLyRiC) lol. true but i have alot of raps ive written wit different topics
these are the most recent and sickest ive ever wrote lol Well, braggadocio is the easiest topic to write something dope but I really want to see you in different topic
MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger
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