| Pensmoke |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 2:30 PM | Message # 1 |
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My first attempt at this kinda thing.
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| eboyd |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 2:46 PM | Message # 2 |
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AMAZING! However, idk if it is just my phone, but the poem cut off short and didn't play all the way through. Am I the only one who noticed this? I liked how you flipped some of the metaphors in here though and it really speaks for a lot of people. I know it speaks for me as well. Now I know this is another poem I don't need to write because you already did 
my new theme song
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
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| Menace |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 3:12 PM | Message # 3 |
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wonderful and it played for me till the end i used to do a lot of spoken word at the polytechnic at the capital i used to make poems in 3 different languages it was beautiful i personally miss spoken word i miss it a lot and at the end Pensmoke it seemed like a monologue/conversation then poetry the way you told it if you know what i mean
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| Acekat00o |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 3:17 PM | Message # 4 |
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Man that shit is amazing ,i really love your description of yourself in this song
Graffiti
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 3:36 PM | Message # 5 |
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nice, i've definitely felt like this at times.
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| ill |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 4:20 PM | Message # 6 |
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yo man the joint is crazy i was feeling it earlier but didnt know what to say but that first 5* was me lol, its deep man like i was thinking the other day can anyone truely understand you
The World Is Yours
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| Boner-Jamz-11 |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 5:48 PM | Message # 7 |
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amazing bro!!
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| LyricalContent |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 9:25 PM | Message # 8 |
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word smoke this is awesome! yo I see myself all in this poem you said some thing I been feeling and wanting to say recently great work smoke i know how you feel much respect for putting this out
For the preaching of the cross is to them that
perish foolishness; but unto us which are saved it is the power of God
1 Cor 1:18
http:
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The grass withers and the flowers fall,
but the Word of our God shall stand forever
is:40,8
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