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Forum moderator: El_Matador, s0dr2  
"Holy Are You Response" Response ;)
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1. DOPE!! [ 3 ] [42.86%]
2. Dope! But to make sure it's on point, there are a few corrections that need to be made [ 1 ] [14.29%]
3. Mad nice! [ 1 ] [14.29%]
4. Meh... You can do better [ 1 ] [14.29%]
5. I'm butt hurt 'cuz you'z not praizin' mah JEZUS!!!!!!! [ 1 ] [14.29%]
Answers total: 7
eboyd Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 2:39 PM | Message # 1

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You say you're Christian, sent from your one God alone/
But I can see the triple sixes burned onto your dome/
Here's my response to super fucktard aka Evangel who doesn't seem to believe in the first amendment. You can watch his video on YT. Someone post that video in here. Thx. Criticism will be appreciated and even expected:

Verse 1:

You say you're Christian, sent from your one God alone/
But I can see the triple sixes burned onto your dome/
Real Christians preach gospel of tolerance and love/
Not of a hatred for other views that's sent from above/
Your holy book says that you are to love thy enemy/
I'm not a Christian but from when I was I still remember these/
Words. You need to read them over again/
Study your bible until this finally sinks in/
The man you dissed has convictions that are equally as strong/
As those you showed in your song but apparently his are wrong?/
Who are you to command any man to repent/
While spitting lyrics that roll off the tongue of a serpent/
The hypocrisy of man is the most devilish sin/
But I'm an atheist so I guess that you win (right?)/
Not at all. I'm appalled by that which you represent/
I associate with real Christians with views that never went/
To the extreme that yours seem to consistently express/
Repent or suffer? A bitter threat of emptiness/
I'm representing my Rebels whose primary aim/
Emancipation And Liberation from tyrannical reign/
So if you're trying to take over in this game of hip hop/
Prepare yourself and crew to be forcefully stopped/
There's no room for your bigoted views/
So please ask yourself this question: how holy are you?

So sit back for a minute kid and let me educate/
Yes, I called you kid because of your childish mind state/
I don't care about your age when development's arrested/
Mentally stagnate. You need to be resurrected/
Verbally dissected with knowledge that's been erected/
Detect your ignorant jabs that are then casually deflected/
Read the supreme math and alphabet of the five percents/
Written by 13X, maybe then it'll make sense/
Arm to the Leg to Leg to Arm, Head/
Discrimination in rap shows that your brain's dead/
I'm a tolerant person but tired of bigotry/
Whether said direct or expressed subliminally/
You may disagree with one's views but you take us to middle ages/
Times when others were stoned to death for not following pages/
Written in a book, the Crusades and the Inquisition/
Why expect another man to follow in your tradition?/
How holy are you without showing respect/
For those who dissent from the ideas that you represent/
God may be heaven sent... Or maybe he is I/
Maybe I am him. Maybe all above is the sky/
And nothing more but why must we be condescending/
We should be coexisting and attempting to be amending/
The ways we view each other through our eyes in life/
So how holy are you? Before you respond you should think twice.


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Menace Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 2:53 PM | Message # 2

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wooow this is AWESOME you really need to record this

El_Matador Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 2:58 PM | Message # 3

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are u going to record it?

MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger

s0dr2 Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 3:03 PM | Message # 4

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5. I'm butt hurt 'cuz you'z not praizin' mah JEZUS!!!!!!! [ 1 ] [50.00%]

that was not me...

Quote (eboyd)
A real Christian preaches a gospel that's of tolerance and love/
==>too many syllables

and id change "that you are" or "that which"...makes it sound like an essay


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Menace Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 3:43 PM | Message # 5

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i voted the number 5 LOL :D

Uncharted Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 5:03 PM | Message # 6

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this is ill as fuck, record this NOW!!!!!!!

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El_Matador Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 5:05 PM | Message # 7

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Eboyd, you are too dope lyricyst to waste your talent on playing football :D

MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger

eboyd Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 5:06 PM | Message # 8

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LOL! Good one Menace :D I would have too rofl

And sodr, really, thanks a lot. That is quite helpful.

Oh, and yeah, I do plan to record this when I get back to LA in December.


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eboyd Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 5:10 PM | Message # 9

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Wait a minute lol! I just realized that the first verse got cut off at the beginning. Hold up, I'll fix it.

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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

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eboyd Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 7:01 PM | Message # 10

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bump kin

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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

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EmSeeD Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 10:42 PM | Message # 11

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the holy are you response response

nice, yeah definitely record it, i think where the dude went wrong the most was that he probably didn't realize Rakim called himself God MC because of his religion, he probably just thought he was trying to be God, but he should check his facts before he does that.


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eboyd Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 10:54 PM | Message # 12

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Nah, his people were commenting on other versions of that track. Apparently they've studied the 5% belief system and they know what it's about. They're just being blatantly disrespectful and arrogant. Makes me want to be more disrespectful in this track (to the guy, not to Christianity), but I'm bigger than that.

my new theme song



erikboyd60@hotmail.com

"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

-T.S. Eliot

battle record:

7-0-0

Adam Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 10:55 PM | Message # 13

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Quote (eboyd)
I'm bigger than that.

love

Well in that case he does deserve a more personal attack. He just wanted to be an ass, so give him it.





I JUST EXPLODED INTO RAINBOWS AND LOLLIPOPS!
EmSeeD Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 11:01 PM | Message # 14

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you should pretend to be a muslim and make a track saying why his religion is wrong and yours is right and that he'll perish in hell if he doesn't convert

i bet if someone did something like that christians would all be up and arms crying "religious intolerance"!!! how dare you be so disrespectful to my beliefs


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eboyd Date: Friday, 13/Nov/09, 11:11 PM | Message # 15

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Lol! Nah, that's not the point of this. I want to treat him like a child and make him feel as little as he really is so that he recognizes how much of a mistake he's making in his intolerance.

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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

-T.S. Eliot

battle record:

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