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Forum » RHHF Artists/Battlers » RHHF Artist's Music » newww sonnggg!!!!!! (yu guys mite not like it cuhz its wayy more mainstream.!!)
newww sonnggg!!!!!!
LLyRiC Date: Friday, 05/Feb/10, 11:56 PM | Message # 1

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 but still check it out xD

What I Do.mp3 - 6.43MB


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L.et L.oose Y.our R.eal I.nner C.reativity

spreading the word through my music
that real true hip hop that i love

Adam Date: Saturday, 06/Feb/10, 0:00 AM | Message # 2

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 Your hood license just been revoked son. Thank you very much goodbye. Nah, but on the other hand good delivery.



I JUST EXPLODED INTO RAINBOWS AND LOLLIPOPS!
EmSeeD Date: Saturday, 06/Feb/10, 1:27 AM | Message # 3

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 didn't work for me, i'll try downloading it again
http://chirbit.com/emseed
http://youtube.com/siwooot
J-Breakz Date: Saturday, 06/Feb/10, 5:09 AM | Message # 4

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 haha ur right I don't like it but only because it sounds like what I hear on the radio. One thing I can give u for critisiscm tho is that you need to working on making your rhyme scheme a lil more complex. Right now you sound a lil amateur, nothing wrong with that tho lol. But good job, keep at it.
livin life like some cheesy movie
LLyRiC Date: Sunday, 07/Feb/10, 4:58 PM | Message # 5

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 haha yer ritee my rhyme scheme needs workk ive notice it too.
nd yea i only did this song for funn haha cuhz most of my friends listen to mainstream
nd they were pushin me to do a song likee this so i juss did it haha
but i like it :D

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yoo i jus noticed that thing song fuken sucks!!!!
lmao hahaha

L.L.y.R.i.C.

L.et L.oose Y.our R.eal I.nner C.reativity

spreading the word through my music
that real true hip hop that i love

EmSeeD Date: Sunday, 07/Feb/10, 6:27 PM | Message # 6

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 i think you flowed over the beat well though

btw i fixed the audio player so it plays the full song now

btw what song is that beat from? i actually like it.

http://chirbit.com/emseed
http://youtube.com/siwooot
LLyRiC Date: Monday, 08/Feb/10, 2:04 AM | Message # 7

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 i actually stole the beat off youtube ahaha
sum unknowns made it and it sounded good so i used it
im makin a better song 2marow
sumthin that actually means sumthin to me
so jus wait for that.!! lol
L.L.y.R.i.C.

L.et L.oose Y.our R.eal I.nner C.reativity

spreading the word through my music
that real true hip hop that i love

Recklessrae666 Date: Sunday, 07/Mar/10, 10:50 PM | Message # 8

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 Not only do your lyrics sound mainstream but da beat is also mainstream to workharder
Newest beat

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M2gO4Yb-W9w

LLyRiC Date: Wednesday, 10/Mar/10, 2:54 AM | Message # 9

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 i personally hate this song lol
i feel like i failed epicly wit this haha
but i learned from it
L.L.y.R.i.C.

L.et L.oose Y.our R.eal I.nner C.reativity

spreading the word through my music
that real true hip hop that i love

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