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Uncharted-Diamonds are forever
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| Uncharted |
Date: Thursday, 11/Nov/10, 8:16 PM | Message # 1 |
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im planning on doing this track with one of my other friends in the future but i just wanted to give you guys a little preview give some feedback
http://www.mediafire.com/?blnu5gs3h2z0yv4
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| Adam |
Date: Thursday, 11/Nov/10, 8:26 PM | Message # 2 |
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your flow reminds me so much of the first guy on here or maybe not ur flow.. but ur voice idk but u just remind of him. still its good.
I JUST EXPLODED INTO RAINBOWS AND LOLLIPOPS!
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| Uncharted |
Date: Thursday, 11/Nov/10, 8:42 PM | Message # 3 |
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Emcees
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Quote (Adam) or maybe not ur flow.. but ur voice idk but u just remind of him. still its good.
oh thanks broAdded (11/Nov/10, 8:42 PM)
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MORE FEEDBACK PLEASE!!, and btw group is dope adam^^^
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Thursday, 11/Nov/10, 11:38 PM | Message # 4 |
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pretty good, but i found some words hard to understand though
http://chirbit.com/emseed
http://youtube.com/siwooot
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| eboyd |
Date: Friday, 12/Nov/10, 0:29 AM | Message # 5 |
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Quote (EmSeeD) pretty good, but i found some words hard to understand though Uncharted is one smart little first grader 
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| Uncharted |
Date: Friday, 12/Nov/10, 4:22 PM | Message # 6 |
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Emcees
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lyrics:
Niggas lookin down to hard, they too stupid to face it
Niggas should've known im too advanced to go back to the basics
well, anyway yall phony as hell, boring me as well
trying to break into my spot, shit is like, breaking into jail
i wont throw up the diamond sign, cause i've seen many hustles knocked
so please get out ya fantasy, detox the idiot box
got the most sober smoking this dopeness, high on audio pot
callin yo self the most original, half ya shit is just a mock-
writing, my rhymes in the cut, killin these cold cuts
bunch of balogna type dude for lunch willin to stop me but-
i, put they crews on the side like chip of my fucking sandwhich
cheap crap gettin eatin up viciously, damn the nigga hammin
breaking sentencesa down to words then to different letters
melting diamond plaques, showing why diamonds aint forever
try me and throw a punchline, why stand there wit ya fist closed
my big money talk piss all over ya two sense(two cents) you piss poo(poor)
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Message edited by Uncharted - Friday, 12/Nov/10, 4:23 PM
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| Treach |
Date: Friday, 12/Nov/10, 5:31 PM | Message # 7 |
OGs
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"damn the nigga hammin"
really?
"We took pride in intellect and skill
Now you gotta have some sex appeal to get a record deal"
- K-RINO
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| eboyd |
Date: Friday, 12/Nov/10, 5:39 PM | Message # 8 |
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you need to take some words out of each line. it's fucking up your flow a bit. it's also messing up your delivery because it makes it hard for you to control your breath.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| Uncharted |
Date: Friday, 12/Nov/10, 8:40 PM | Message # 9 |
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Emcees
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Quote (eboyd) you need to take some words out of each line. it's fucking up your flow a bit. it's also messing up your delivery because it makes it hard for you to control your breath.
i thought it was nice but thanks for the advice
Quote (Treach) "damn the nigga hammin"
really?
its slang...self explanatory
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| eboyd |
Date: Saturday, 13/Nov/10, 5:45 AM | Message # 10 |
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Heads
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Quote (Uncharted) i thought it was nice but thanks for the advice lol you asked for critique. trust me, listen to this a year from now when you have your flow mastered and you will hear what i mean and be like "aw shit! eboyd was right!" lol
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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