I was wondering what did you guys think of this piece I wrote. I am going 2 take it to like an open mic poetry thing and just really explore all different types of writing. haha i been writing plays 2 lmao its all i been doing 
so just want some feed back on what u guys think about this 
Try to cover my basis
And make my music ageless
Set the beat and kiss it as it remains faceless
Lips not moving even if my words are waist less
So it can’t fit the dress and Saint Jon’s is stressed
He can’t make the sell so his rent he can’t afford the rest
And he can’t afford to rest
So the stress keeps pilling up even if it’s right he still wants the left
Left searching for answers
Developing cures for others but can’t fix his own cancers
Where’s his rehabilitation
Moving across the nation kicked out for late payments
His wheels were impounded soul was hounded
He was bounded by the struggles and the time was never founded
Even if he founded in his heart to help others
So in the room full of arrogant fascists that wait to judge us
Love to see us fall deep in struggles
Our rebuttals is digging deep holes and covering ourselves with rubble
Crabs in the bucket our knees our under cutted
Slashed at the state of Action Cementing Leverage that I will always be stuck with
Good luck with leaving cause we stuck in the barrel
That’s your home similar to an inner city borough
Keep me trapped and intoxicated
Sell stories of me that’s fabricated
So that my movement will never make it
And have the nerve to say I’m aimless
Reverse play on words to make me seem racist
And still put on alligator tears to cover your faces
Places me and my interests into trying to rebuild again
Forced my hand to change when killing my brother and
Saying I wasn’t Abel to achieve success
But he’s the Cain to make sure I walk straight even if I’m depressed
And that is everyday it never sways
Never goes away
Here to stay saturates me Sunday to Saturday
Bred to fold my hands even if prayer wasn’t my immediate right away
Full house of sin Lord gave me a royal flush
Labels ask me stupid questions I’m just tryna shut em up
People say that I fell off I tell them I’m strong enough
I just need to proceed cause you continue to support my stuff
Even if you hate it you still played it
My views get elated every time my pages
Is dissed and my content is claimed hit and miss
The fact is that I’m pissed but I keep it caged in
Tell me that I’m arrogant I make music for these kids
Try to prove a point that you don’t need to get a bid
Just to have credibility the government just wants to see you lost
Black balled until your suicidal and they just say you lost
Passion here my speeches this isn’t rapping
This is motivation read my lyrics see a metamorphosis feel me changing
My foes know this and they claim I’m tainted
But I just like to say I’m anxious just to see surprised faces
I was bred for the plan understand
I’m never leaving want to shut me up come and get me above the clouds here I am
my girl friend I am probably RHH4 asshole of the site lmao THE PUREST MC=ME ARU NAVI My brother=Menace Uncharted
My wife=Chinita the Beautiful
My rival=LaPen
My niggas=Eboyd Kiba Pen LaPen Lord Meth P Noble NtG Render 11thPlauge i woulda done rubber matches if i new u was gone bite Aru Navi/ AHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH i love this line how did i bite aru navi? just curious...
uz every verse he did in dat battle, he tried flipping my verse every single time...it was work n until i won lol but yea u basically tried 2 flip da 1st verse like him
Aru Navi says-"Cause I beez da shitz." West Coast King Style
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