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| tha-dropper |
Date: Friday, 20/Mar/09, 10:11 PM | Message # 406 |
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dont wink at me fagot... how dare you compair yourself to nas... ...
..yo..
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..do i really gotta say it, or do it enough?
i know you aim low.. you fruity as fuck..
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....this mua fucker on my dick hard core as shit
but again i keep forgettin you like tha taste of it
so blow it again trick 'an hold no descression
your flows so/so needs lessons
its so sweet its so cute you like 'a hoho impressionest
i wont go over tha limb i can tell you kinda short
'an me im kinda too big for your ass up on tha court
its simple as that tha facts trippin yo ass
it sends shivers down ya little spine 'an ripples your back
tha dropper really means his flows so cold genius
'an you tha groupy bitch who blows on my penis
so fuck you..
..you aint no emcee trick
i dont come to avendge this but you nothin pretend shit
you 'a wannabe.. like everyone of your friends is
'an fuck you 'an you 'an your slang dog fuck tha real
thats real talk mutha fucker how tha fuck it feel??
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Friday, 20/Mar/09, 11:35 PM | Message # 407 |
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Quote (tha-dropper) how dare you compair yourself to nas...
I compare myself to Nas cuz Im eithering yo punk ass
Im trimming yo head down, its simple like a robot cutting grass
Punk ass dont ask why Im murderin u, Im just spittin
My lyrical abilities is just heavenly and god-given
Im heavyweight in this duel, my punchlines r leaving Dropper defenseless
And my metaphors r breaking his jaw and leaving his mind senseless
As u fall to the ring, theres no time for repentance
Cuz I took hold of ur soul and gave u the eternal life sentence
LMAO
Battlin u is a waste of time and good rhymes
I havent battled in a minute so I thank u for waking up my mind
But still, this is a business and I must finish wat u started
Ill break all of joints and leave u walking down the street retarded
U took a bargain and got more than u wat u paid for
So Im on top of ur wife who's on the phone to u screaming, "FUCK ME SOME MORE!!"
Tha Dropper, I dont wanna continue this anymore this is like NAS versus Soulja Boy
U not even a beef anymore, just a dead corspe getting kicked around the floor
The cops come and then investigate the body
And then they see u were a rapper and say, "Just another white boy tryna be like everybody"
Please dont, this isnt the route for u AT ALL
I can see ur future.....Ur working security at a shopping mall....
He had high hopes of becoming an MC, which failed because of a beef
And his wife left his ass just to be pimped by Meth on the streets
A week later he's deceased, cause of death is still unknown
We zoom into the screen and see Meth with a bloody mic standing in Tha Dropper's home
Sick With It
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| s0dr2 |
Date: Friday, 20/Mar/09, 11:53 PM | Message # 408 |
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man how do guys come up with ziss stuff? you could be famous i bet
"Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbour. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover." - Mark Twain
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 9:44 AM | Message # 409 |
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Quote (sodr2) man how do guys come up with ziss stuff? you could be famous i bet
Idk after a while it just comes naturally, I dont really have to think about wat Im going to say anymore, it just comes with time
Sick With It
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| Deadbeat |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 2:52 PM | Message # 410 |
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sometimes i wonder if the path i chose for my life is right, sumtimes i jus dont give a fuck n go rampant with the knife, but all i know for sure is that oppurtuniy is rife, and the power lies with me to make sure that i survive. so this is what ive done, im chasin number 1, and u weak cunts better know that this shit is fucken fun, i mean im hotter than the sun and all the bitches want my cum and i wouldnt be suprised if this shit makes u say "im done". so listen as i run, this shit leaves mc's fucken stunned and if theres any left to battle ill take on every one. so this is my true place, on the top of the rappin race, yeah thats right i claimed first place n i did it all
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| eboyd |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 3:06 PM | Message # 411 |
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OK, nice. Hey, you should introduce yourself in the introduction section. Anyways, as a fellow MC myself and an actual recording artist, I felt it would be fitting to critique you a bit. It's a cool verse for sure and for someone who just write the entire thing as one big paragraph and doesn't separate your lines you have a pretty decent sense of rhythm, but like everyone who writes that way it still limits your ability to build a rhythm. It's like in math. You can get by doing it in your head for a while, but when you get into more complex math you will start making a lot of mistakes that you won't make if you start writing it down on paper and taking all the proper steps. Also, when I listen to a verse that I feel is dope I usually see either a really truthful message or a lot of wordplay and alliteration. I didn't see a whole lot of wordplay here and this wasn't a verse that was meant for storytelling, so I'd expect more punches and such. Other than that, dope shit man. Keep progressing.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
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| Deadbeat |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 3:10 PM | Message # 412 |
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Quote (eboyd) OK, nice. Hey, you should introduce yourself in the introduction section. Anyways, as a fellow MC myself and an actual recording artist, I felt it would be fitting to critique you a bit. It's a cool verse for sure and for someone who just write the entire thing as one big paragraph and doesn't separate your lines you have a pretty decent sense of rhythm, but like everyone who writes that way it still limits your ability to build a rhythm. It's like in math. You can get by doing it in your head for a while, but when you get into more complex math you will start making a lot of mistakes that you won't make if you start writing it down on paper and taking all the proper steps. Also, when I listen to a verse that I feel is dope I usually see either a really truthful message or a lot of wordplay and alliteration. I didn't see a whole lot of wordplay here and this wasn't a verse that was meant for storytelling, so I'd expect more punches and such. Other than that, dope shit man. Keep progressing.
Check bruv no problem at all i do not really write verses
i freestyle had my own stuido and all bruv but was locked up
and had to sell the studio for bail money/
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| eboyd |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 3:19 PM | Message # 413 |
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Oh shit man, yeah, I understand. Just thought I'd help you master the craft. Some studios you go to they will get pissed if you only freestyle. I know from experience. They may even ask you for a specific amount of bars and if you are unable to they won't look to you for work. Freestyling is an amazing craft, but if you can't write too you will struggle in the hip hop world unless your name is Supernatural.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| Deadbeat |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 3:41 PM | Message # 414 |
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Quote (eboyd) Oh shit man, yeah, I understand. Just thought I'd help you master the craft. Some studios you go to they will get pissed if you only freestyle. I know from experience. They may even ask you for a specific amount of bars and if you are unable to they won't look to you for work. Freestyling is an amazing craft, but if you can't write too you will struggle in the hip hop world unless your name is Supernatural
check bruv been in many studios n heard that shit aswel
it is mad crazy how cunts be wantin $600 jus for 1 demo mixtape
even when i am the cunt whos workin hard for to be on that mixtape
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| eboyd |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 3:58 PM | Message # 415 |
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Yeah, it's a bitch sometimes. I'm fortunate enough that I work at a free studio and I'm working with a REALLY good producer who actually works with my favorite MC and many other famous underground artists. It's not hard to write lines and fit them into bars though. Trust me, learning to count bars is so beneficial to any recording artist. Dre had to teach Snoop how to count bars and look where that took him. It just helps you out in so many ways and will help you master your craft and get your cadence down.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| Deadbeat |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 4:27 PM | Message # 416 |
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certified-try to get me/ suburbanized emcee/ with bourbon, herbs-a-plenty/ and thirty five deadbeat/ word to the wise im dirty like MT/ high thirsty verbalise my memories/ and murder my enemies/ your stranded/looks like you wanna be pampered/but ive advanced kid/if you want TLC its gunna be rancid.all these events cause espersions/time to make the conversion/ i hold my hand high like the germans/not wearing no fuckin turban/scullin a flaggy of woody bourbon.cause when i spit my lyrics will make you cringe inject you with a filthy aids infested syringe while im on a ice binge/ so absorb it now your cores split forfit come for your house gunna kick your door in the n.o.b/ l.e/ s.a.v/ a.g/ e/
spell it correctly/ respect me/ or it'll get messy/ like methamphetamines/ at a spelling bee/ d.e.a.d/ b.e.a.t/ deadbeats/ twenty deep/ fuck e.b.k/ d.b.c beat your face/ n.b 18th a.v.e/ d.js/ get wrecked re arranged
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| Boner-Jamz-11 |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 4:31 PM | Message # 417 |
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LAME!
#TeamHipster
#SWAGSWAG
TUMBLR CLICK CLICK CLICK!
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| tha-dropper |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 7:32 PM | Message # 418 |
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..you talkin shit like when you spit it at me dog your mind wakes
im jus' insperational at least you got some fine taste
but your wack ass fagot raps leave you lookin pretty dumb
dog your set ups fuckin horrible leave'n readers like hmm...
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..so fuck this football fantasy type.. butter fingers tryna fight my name
you lightly wieghed.. tha type ta' suck dick for tickets to 'a vikings game
'an scream yellin 'dropper please dont light tha flame!!'.. but im right in range
'an i might explain.. that 'a black gangsta stomped by 'a white boy is quite tha lame..
...so touch ya' chest, gasp for breath.. i dont repsond to 'a fag in stress
thats why i dont mess wit you im fuckin blessed plus only losers fuck wit meth CHAU..
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...is ya' gettin it my boy
is ya' feelin what im sway'n
talk'n bout how you so lyricle im laughin quit playin..
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| tha-dropper |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 8:13 PM | Message # 419 |
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tha dropper will now speak in third person on this site, dropper feels very disrespected by a few cats on this site, one in particular, but about three on tha side... but yes, tha dropper has his moments of recording when very inspired and moved by a beat, but tha droppers mic is eight dollars, and his quality is horrible, and he doesnt know how to convert anything because his cool edit pro version 2 seems incapable of doing it... tha dropper is open for suggestions on how to covert...
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| eboyd |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 8:24 PM | Message # 420 |
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convert? can you be more specific? convert what kind of files into what kind of files? usually you can DL something free and easy the will convert anything. please explain better because i'm not sure i understand.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
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