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ritesofpasage Date: Thursday, 05/Nov/09, 8:03 AM | Message # 916

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On the couch the mind just screams for the slouch
Inside a mind out to lunch no doubt just punch the glass
To douse fires aroused in the house move your ass lest be consumed by the path the wrath of survival revivals no man's math of justice just us eye against eye not Augustus or empire states of mind mind me on the grind kick push for freedom let loose my lyrical lines believe him tony hawk on the rise a half pike to kiss the skies then stage dive as my demise arrives an encore rocky versus russian who want more off the ropes rope a dope quote to give the crowd a song for and it's on for another six minutes start to finish fresh to death like your morning produce exhibit ripeness and homegrown known to reflect the likeness you like this always got ripe shit for the cyphers



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Adam Date: Thursday, 05/Nov/09, 11:20 PM | Message # 917

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I know you think my rhymes, are smooth, slow, and soft/ but I can bring a dark side and send your soul up north/ undeniably underrated getting lyrically frustrated/ over the presence of a evil condoned my body hated/ nickel sprayed it hallow caps leaving your organs out dated/ respiration necessary your mind isn’t educated/ money takes it another level, leaving rappers naked/ half baking over the dotted line hands shaking/ worried decision that’s annually always mistaken/ whether or not to sell your soul and bring home the bacon/ pain staking delusion has got you running the mill/ focusing all your authority on a green dollar bill/ let it spill, the actions taken deserve a bloody kill/ to end the misconception of earning an early will/




I JUST EXPLODED INTO RAINBOWS AND LOLLIPOPS!
YANHAP1 Date: Friday, 06/Nov/09, 9:05 AM | Message # 918

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like your morning produce exhibit ripeness and homegrown known to reflect the likeness you like this always got ripe shit for the cyphers

That's what he said!..tru.

PEACE!!


who killed bambi?

EmSeeD Date: Saturday, 07/Nov/09, 7:34 PM | Message # 919

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beware of sabotage their near in camouflage steer clear its at a large

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YANHAP1 Date: Sunday, 08/Nov/09, 8:43 AM | Message # 920

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ensnare the entourage seared with saxifrage until clear and untarred
the delicate herb can break rocks hard,
try with the head, bruised battered and scarred
that that seems unseemly on sight might right wrongs on your card
lest they mentally barred, fiegning to fatness just arterial lard
clogs in the flow vascular shutdowns hearts jarred
headed off at the bypass brought round by sassafras
give the cerebral dome a blast need more graft than elastoplast
pyroclastic flows from nothing more than an average Joe
just goes to shows those who disclosed to be verbal heroes
at the most boast loads in joke mode and amount to less than zero
hail Nero! seemed the new clothes didn't fit
if they fiddle themselves as much as that don't trust them round the kids
crunch time you might catch them at lunch time
watching mutts licking butts of a slut who is passed prime
on-line mind they objectify turn people to products
if the minds filled with swine swill that in time will express as poor conduct


who killed bambi?

EmSeeD Date: Monday, 09/Nov/09, 11:56 PM | Message # 921

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wild child style maintains more grain than kellogs
re train the fell offs, make a fake crew out of werc
when i turn around on you,
in poor times we remain a clear gifted few
coz your rhymes are more plain than air pacific blue

^^ another work in progress rhyme,


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YANHAP1 Date: Tuesday, 10/Nov/09, 11:31 AM | Message # 922

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wild child style maintains more grain than kellogs
make a fake crew out of werc, re train the fell offs
when i turn around on you
in poor times we remain a clear gifted few
coz your rhymes are more plain than air pacific blue

flows better?


who killed bambi?

ritesofpasage Date: Tuesday, 10/Nov/09, 4:49 PM | Message # 923

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cosign does sound better.

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EmSeeD Date: Tuesday, 10/Nov/09, 9:40 PM | Message # 924

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Quote (YANHAP1)
wild child style maintains more grain than kellogs
make a fake crew out of werc, re train the fell offs
when i turn around on you
in poor times we remain a clear gifted few
coz your rhymes are more plain than air pacific blue

yeah but

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make a fake crew out of werc
when i turn around on you,

it was supposed to be a play on words coz it turns around the word Crew. i've edited it since, still gonna add more to it


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YANHAP1 Date: Wednesday, 11/Nov/09, 8:19 AM | Message # 925

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crew out of werc

Yeah i feel you E but it only comes off in text in a Kiwi or Ozzie accent!...Which incidently i read all your verses in.
Most of us go to work. :p

LMAO!!

I'd mabey go for something like that later on in a verse not on the 2nd bar when the flows just being established,but then thats just me...looking forward to the rest.

PEACE!


who killed bambi?

EmSeeD Date: Saturday, 14/Nov/09, 8:10 PM | Message # 926

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Yeah i feel you E but it only comes off in text in a Kiwi or Ozzie accent!...

oh shit i just realized that,


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ilikebacon3000 Date: Sunday, 15/Nov/09, 2:21 AM | Message # 927

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I never use the pencil, because it uses lead
and when it gets erased, the poetry is dead
So I flow like the ink, creating a reflection,
of what I think and how I feel, lyrical heaven.
And fuck the blue lines, and fuck puncuation
If I used the shit, then you just might see me erasin
But otherwise, you know my written shit is timeless
The feeling within, you know I can't hide this
So fuck it, I can't finish my shit
Writers block sucks, and I can't get rid of it.


Life's a bitch and I'm just along for the ride.
EmSeeD Date: Sunday, 15/Nov/09, 2:55 AM | Message # 928

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that's got a lot of potential man nice. maybe you could bring the word "inception" somewhere in:

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So I flow like the ink, creating a reflection,
of what I think and how I feel, lyrical heaven.

so it goes with "reflection" up to you though.


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Uncharted Date: Monday, 16/Nov/09, 8:02 PM | Message # 929

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old verse

i cause a phase when i cause outrage
and amaze with the lyrical taste
It goes fast pace and amplifies the bass
have the rap game make rearangements,
when i spit shotgun cases
break your parts down simplier,
i control the mic like hitler
get the picture, make snap dancer's fingers stiffer
each verse is a testimony,
rapping bars is like reading scriptures
let the rhythym hit'em, till their voices turn into helium
niggas be addictive ot this shit,
the most sober nigga fail their sobriety test
so reading my rhyme book is like having a beer fest


....

Message edited by Uncharted - Monday, 16/Nov/09, 8:14 PM
EmSeeD Date: Monday, 16/Nov/09, 8:11 PM | Message # 930

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that was dope, btw i saw the Jeru referrence/influence

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