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J-Breaks vs Pensmoke recorded battle
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| El_Matador |
Date: Tuesday, 26/Jan/10, 3:48 PM | Message # 16 |
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Quote (Pensmoke) internet explorer ugggghhh u use that shit? c'mon bro. switch to the mozilla, trust me
MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger 
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Tuesday, 26/Jan/10, 3:52 PM | Message # 17 |
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Quote (El_Matador) ugggghhh u use that shit? c'mon bro. switch to the mozilla, trust me
I think google chrome is better than firefox. Firefox pisses me off cuz if you have too many tabs it gets all slow. But firefix is a lot better than internet explorer.
livin life like some cheesy movie
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Tuesday, 26/Jan/10, 7:22 PM | Message # 18 |
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Thank you. Anyways yeah I keep on forgetting, I just sent it to you. I freakin love the beat.
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Thursday, 28/Jan/10, 8:10 PM | Message # 19 |
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Quote (Pensmoke) Please bare with me man I been sick for the past 3 days and sleeping most of the day away. Imma get it up here though asap.
it's all good
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| Adam |
Date: Thursday, 28/Jan/10, 11:00 PM | Message # 20 |
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Oh damn j breakz your voice is so fucking great. Damn thats an amazing rap voice. You should drop a couple songs, just like that verse. Cuz I like the vibe of it.
I JUST EXPLODED INTO RAINBOWS AND LOLLIPOPS!
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| El_Matador |
Date: Friday, 29/Jan/10, 8:39 AM | Message # 21 |
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Quote (Adam) Oh damn j breakz your voice is so fucking great. Damn thats an amazing rap voice. You should drop a couple songs, just like that verse. Cuz I like the vibe of it. Sounded ironic. El Fuego's voice reminds me of Scoop Lover
MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Friday, 29/Jan/10, 11:54 AM | Message # 22 |
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lol oh thank you, didn't know I was that good. I'm having a good time with this battle, but I wanna hear how pen sounds over that ayo beat. Get over that sickness already, dangit
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| eboyd |
Date: Friday, 29/Jan/10, 1:29 PM | Message # 23 |
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yeah, your voice is dope for this hip hop shit. very distinct. it would be nice if you learned to be a bit less monotonous (Pen can get away with a monotonous delivery but your voice is one which would be perfect if you put a shitload of emotion into it), but don't worry about that. i know personally that this is something that comes with experience. worry about it when you've been rapping for 4 years and you still sound monotonous lol.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Friday, 29/Jan/10, 1:39 PM | Message # 24 |
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Quote (eboyd) yeah, your voice is dope for this hip hop shit. very distinct. it would be nice if you learned to be a bit less monotonous (Pen can get away with a monotonous delivery but your voice is one which would be perfect if you put a shitload of emotion into it), but don't worry about that. i know personally that this is something that comes with experience. worry about it when you've been rapping for 4 years and you still sound monotonous lol.
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Friday, 29/Jan/10, 1:42 PM | Message # 25 |
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Quote (Pensmoke) Im feelin sick today but still sick on mics
this 'native minority' will click on types
like yourself J, your only dis is age
someone's a little old and still killin this page
killin this mic, the youth still willing to bite
feel free to bite a line dude, steal if you like
cuz really you need all the help I can give
I got a rhymebook for every year that youve lived
I dont pass like Pharcyde my Lip aint Fat
no labs in California, this aint that
what it is, is a simple shoulder brush
I paint life, you cant even hold a brush
and why you still tripping all over your tongue?
it really dont matter cuz its over and done
yo it was fun, well nah not really I lied
Id give you props but it was silly you tried
Cool cool, I'll go ahead and drop a verse monday
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| eboyd |
Date: Friday, 29/Jan/10, 1:43 PM | Message # 26 |
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Quote (J-Breakz) I need to practice reciting rhymes off paper cuz it sounded too much like I was just reading out loud in that verse. precisely. trust me, you'll only get better with experience. take me for example. go listen to my track "Opinions" (the first track i recorded) and then go and listen to that track "Melancholy Molly" that i sent you and you will see what i mean.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| Uncharted |
Date: Friday, 29/Jan/10, 5:22 PM | Message # 27 |
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Quote (J-Breakz) Is the flow improved here? ------------------------------------- I don't pack hate
just focus on the funky rythim to put yall in a relaxed state
get ur facts straight
You're the one that wanted this playdate
wait nah, why we thinkin like this, I'm not i like bacon and ur not eboyd
I destroy every joy in ur life cuz im annoyed
one man band attackin your land, as a decoy
I deploy my rhyme scheme, mic fiend, you beating me is a pipe dream
your lieing if your implying that you got the charisma to end careers
I don't need visine, but you need to wipe away your tears
and accept your fears that maybe your time is passin by like pharcyde
You grabbed the mic when run ran the show
and now you just released an album? someones a lil old
My hearts a lil cold but my hands r pretty full
so I just kill quick and painless and take care of this priority
move undetected and shit on this native minority
now thats better than that first verse, imma check out pensmoke's next verseAdded (29/Jan/10, 5:22 Pm)
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Quote (Pensmoke) Im feelin sick today but still sick on mics
this 'native minority' will click on types
like yourself J, your only dis is age
someone's a little old and still killin this page
killin this mic, the youth still willing to bite
feel free to bite a line dude, steal if you like
cuz really you need all the help I can give
I got a rhymebook for every year that youve lived
I dont pass like Pharcyde my Lip aint Fat
no labs in California, this aint that
what it is, is a simple shoulder brush
I paint life, you cant even hold a brush
and why you still tripping all over your tongue?
it really dont matter cuz its over and done
yo it was fun, well nah not really I lied
Id give you props but it was silly you tried
HAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!11 YOU KILLED IT!!!!!!!!!!
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| El_Matador |
Date: Friday, 29/Jan/10, 7:16 PM | Message # 28 |
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Quote (eboyd) precisely. trust me, you'll only get better with experience. take me for example. go listen to my track "Opinions" (the first track i recorded) and then go and listen to that track "Melancholy Molly" that i sent you and you will see what i mean. Now when you upgraded your rapping you should record Opinions one more time with a proper flow.
That beat was amazing, don't you waste it
MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Monday, 01/Feb/10, 1:19 PM | Message # 29 |
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who the one doin it best?
just for fun like PUTS
yes, no need to guess
jbreak doin no less
no matter how much u protest
so bring a bulletproof vest for ur chest and
some prozac to jazz ur no class, depressed sounding ass
cuz the way I spit on tracks and shit on wacks
will have u sit on crack while I'm headin back from a world tour
keep it gutter like a sewer, u keep in the gutter like a bum
u talkin u dope and have a rhyme book from
each year I lived, damn look how far u come!
battlin a 17 yr old make u look dumb!
dedicate this to the young best be the best mc in sd to step to me
expectin me to retreat respectfully
little do he know he's just a wreck to me
little do he know I got his girl neckin me
she'll get on me, while u get no love like rodney [dangerfield]
Im trying to make this battle exciting
cuz sadly even after the visine and ben stein,
you still sound like a mutha fuckin frankenstein
I feel inclined to note that what i say aint a joke
but even sugar hill gang flow better than pen smoke
Man i really hope you get this letter
so you learn rhymin brush wit brush aint that clever
u cant rhyme for shit, no bubble burst
u only make rebuttals, hence why I went first
So gimme ur worse, get back at this and
make a diss, play some offense
The mic loves the way I rock it
pen in the closet but he's gonna shout (I'm Comin Out)
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Monday, 01/Feb/10, 1:28 PM | Message # 30 |
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Lemme know how I did. Also, pen, I sent you the instrumental
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