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J-Breaks vs Pensmoke recorded battle
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Tuesday, 19/Jan/10, 5:56 PM | Message # 1 |
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32 I hate goin first lol but here's goes nothin:
http://files.uploadffs.com/d/f/4555fb33/verse_1.mp3 I rip it harder than a farter abusin his ass cheeks
I'ma get u runnin faster than them kids at all them track meets
Your steez flimsy like styrophone
your a disgrace to this microphone
Dis fools tlkn bout how he's proud to sound monotone
when I'm thru he'll be all alone wit no one to hear his rhyme
I can't compare him with any greats but he is a young ben stein (the most monotone dude i can think of lol), check it,
u should be stoke to choke on my pen smoke
so dope it'd probly be the best shit ud ever toke, I joke but hey
u can call me god cuz im controllin ur fate
you found christ cuz you culdn't find a date
i guess im blessed, yes, i mac on every one of his girls cuz he cant do premarital sex
I like the think of myself as a question asker with an intelligent head
so howr u gonna follow jesus and claim that ur red
when it was all the christians that made all the natives dead?
livin life like some cheesy movie
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| Uncharted |
Date: Tuesday, 19/Jan/10, 6:08 PM | Message # 2 |
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Added (19/Jan/10, 6:08 Pm)
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good lyrics, but the flow, i wasnt really feeling it. not just b/c of your voice just how it went with the beat
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Tuesday, 19/Jan/10, 6:10 PM | Message # 3 |
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Quote (Uncharted)
good lyrics, but the flow, i wasnt really feeling it. not just b/c of your voice just how it went with the beat
i had good lyrics? lol oh thx. but yeah i did this real quick
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| eboyd |
Date: Tuesday, 19/Jan/10, 6:57 PM | Message # 4 |
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you need to enunciate better. you are mumbling BIG TIME and it makes you sound as though you are speaking Arabic or something lol
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Tuesday, 19/Jan/10, 7:28 PM | Message # 5 |
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Heads
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Quote (eboyd) you need to enunciate better. you are mumbling BIG TIME
fa sure, i'll try to enunciate my words better
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| BobO |
Date: Wednesday, 20/Jan/10, 11:38 AM | Message # 6 |
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man...articulate those words man so I can HEAR them!!!
Don't miss the chainchancetrain cuz' your brain might regret his traces
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Wednesday, 20/Jan/10, 10:48 PM | Message # 7 |
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Heads
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Sent it. Can't wait to hear your stuff bro!
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Wednesday, 20/Jan/10, 11:56 PM | Message # 8 |
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Heads
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Oh, I sent it again, what about now?
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Friday, 22/Jan/10, 2:40 PM | Message # 9 |
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Heads
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Quote (Pensmoke) Jbreakz displays hate, I stay straight/'cuz the subjects you touched on are way late
You're amatuer, I'll arrange a playdate/ go play with Clay Aiken, Im not your gay mate
you dissed my faith, whoa never saw that coming
you threw in the genocide done by those that were frontin'
its a dead horse, tired, and Im not inspired
I got the fire to make your whole block retire
and dude, why you rapping with marbles in your mouth?
half the verse sound like youre gargling a couch
harboring a stout chicken leg in your neckpiece
you dont respect God but youre gonna respect me
you cant even approach the monotony
open with a fart line? you kidding? you gotta be
yeah I'll play Ben Stein, let me help you out
your flow's dry, I'll pour some Visine in your mouth
and my people aint dead, but your flow is though
if you left your moms' basement you would know this though
you kinda flow like a toothless Fu-Schnicken
put the mic down, its useless dude listen
right now Im your voice of reason
after this, your best choice is leavin'
I snatch props like a Rolls Royce in Cleveland
I heard your verse and I laughed all evenin'
oooo damn!
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Friday, 22/Jan/10, 6:34 PM | Message # 10 |
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you have to upload the audio to this site, and then link it and it will work http://www.uploadffs.com/
http://chirbit.com/emseed
http://youtube.com/siwooot
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| El_Matador |
Date: Friday, 22/Jan/10, 7:53 PM | Message # 11 |
Heads
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Damn it Pensmoke.... Wow! All I got to say is that Chino XL's line perfectly describes your attitude in that battle: You nervous at my foul ability to smile while
Killin off ya family child by child
MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger 
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Sunday, 24/Jan/10, 9:00 PM | Message # 12 |
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Heads
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i think J-Breakz needs to write his verse more on beat with more of a rhythm, and use less words and it will be easier to hear
http://chirbit.com/emseed
http://youtube.com/siwooot
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Monday, 25/Jan/10, 0:40 AM | Message # 13 |
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I'm putting my next verse up tomorrow. Sorry for having you wait so long
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| BobO |
Date: Tuesday, 26/Jan/10, 10:17 AM | Message # 14 |
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Quote (Pensmoke) I snatch props like a Rolls Royce in Cleveland
I heard your verse and I laughed all evenin' haha really funny 
Don't miss the chainchancetrain cuz' your brain might regret his traces
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| J-Breakz |
Date: Tuesday, 26/Jan/10, 3:34 PM | Message # 15 |
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Heads
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Is the flow improved here?
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I don't pack hate
just focus on the funky rythim to put yall in a relaxed state
get ur facts straight
You're the one that wanted this playdate
wait nah, why we thinkin like this, I'm not i like bacon and ur not eboyd
I destroy every joy in ur life cuz im annoyed
one man band attackin your land, as a decoy
I deploy my rhyme scheme, mic fiend, you beating me is a pipe dream
your lieing if your implying that you got the charisma to end careers
I don't need visine, but you need to wipe away your tears
and accept your fears that maybe your time is passin by like pharcyde
You grabbed the mic when run ran the show
and now you just released an album? someones a lil old
My hearts a lil cold but my hands r pretty full
so I just kill quick and painless and take care of this priority
move undetected and shit on this native minority
livin life like some cheesy movie
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