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| El_Matador |
Date: Sunday, 21/Feb/10, 6:22 PM | Message # 1 |
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Just started with writing that poem (but I think it'll turn into hip-hop lyrics). It's ummmm... an early beta version. Tell me what do u think Two eyes blind but the third one can explore
Cos my third eye is the eye of the storm
I see the war in the rawest form
Ocean of blood in the storm
I see dead talents on the shore
Wasted breaths on the microphone
Of rappers and politics, they're now the same whore
Empire falls along with people's faith
Fire in their scars, their privacy they'll desecrate
Stuck in the mire, screaming to the stars with hate
Columbus came here to discover me
Self-proclaimed civilized people wrote my history
From Boston Tea Party to KKK poverty
And now the whole world follows me solemnly
What's my name? Say it, break the mystery
MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger 
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| Menace |
Date: Sunday, 21/Feb/10, 6:25 PM | Message # 2 |
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wow simply wow i never expected such depth from a macho man like El Matador LOL  .
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| El_Matador |
Date: Sunday, 21/Feb/10, 6:29 PM | Message # 3 |
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Quote (Menace) wow simply wow i never expected such depth from a macho man like El Matador LOL I was very curious about your opinion. I knew you'll like this type of shit about your fav country
MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger
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| ilikebacon3000 |
Date: Sunday, 21/Feb/10, 6:34 PM | Message # 4 |
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dude i really like this... it's like a stream of conciseness put into words.
Life's a bitch and I'm just along for the ride.
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Sunday, 21/Feb/10, 6:55 PM | Message # 5 |
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wow thats really sick, i like it
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http://youtube.com/siwooot
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| abanks47 |
Date: Sunday, 21/Feb/10, 9:59 PM | Message # 6 |
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although it seems a bit stereotypical i no that it wasn't intended as a history listen. good shit dude. at least we aint a bunch of niggers in this poem (dont catch feelings yall, just a bad joke)
A WELL DRESSED SKELETON SLOWLY CUTS YOUR THROAT. "I Have No Fear Whatsoever of Anybody or Anything" -Malcolm X “those who consider themselves the most adamant adherents of “real” hip-hop can also be the least knowledgeable.” –Adilifu Nama; an excert from his perception of Nas’s “Genesis”
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| El_Matador |
Date: Sunday, 21/Feb/10, 10:36 PM | Message # 7 |
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Quote (abanks47) although it seems a bit stereotypical i no that it wasn't intended as a history listen. no, I only share my personal feelings about America Quote (abanks47) at least we aint a bunch of niggers in this poem (dont catch feelings yall, just a bad joke) last time I facepalmed so hard it was when infamous-like-mobb-deep 8diagrams cracked some joke... please, abanks, you're a cool dude (no homo), you don't have to crack jokes. lol
MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger
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| abanks47 |
Date: Sunday, 21/Feb/10, 10:43 PM | Message # 8 |
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haha, naw last couple of poems ive seen here have all been about niggers, niggas, etc in america. just glad to not be reminded for once
Quote (El_Matador) please, abanks, you're a cool dude (no homo)
 you too man
A WELL DRESSED SKELETON SLOWLY CUTS YOUR THROAT. "I Have No Fear Whatsoever of Anybody or Anything" -Malcolm X “those who consider themselves the most adamant adherents of “real” hip-hop can also be the least knowledgeable.” –Adilifu Nama; an excert from his perception of Nas’s “Genesis”
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| El_Matador |
Date: Sunday, 21/Feb/10, 10:49 PM | Message # 9 |
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Quote (abanks47) :'( you too man let's go drinking
MENACE 2 JOKER: Go back to Mexico you damn spic
JOKER 2 MENACE: Shut up you fake nigga your a damn sand nigger not a full nigger
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| Aristotle |
Date: Monday, 22/Feb/10, 0:11 AM | Message # 10 |
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great stuff man.
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Monday, 22/Feb/10, 4:28 PM | Message # 11 |
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TYYYYGHT!!!!!
Sick With It
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| Uncharted |
Date: Monday, 22/Feb/10, 5:28 PM | Message # 12 |
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this is great
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| Dookie |
Date: Tuesday, 23/Feb/10, 6:06 AM | Message # 13 |
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da ^^ great stuff.
Intelligence is the understanding of self - Bruce Lee
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| Montana213 |
Date: Wednesday, 24/Feb/10, 9:42 PM | Message # 14 |
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had no idea you wrote poetry, not to mention poetry this good
pretty deep bro
5/5 keep up the good shit
Can't turn back my eyes on the prize
I got nothing to lose
everybody gotta die
say good-bye to the bad guy 
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| Chinita |
Date: Friday, 26/Feb/10, 4:47 PM | Message # 15 |
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Quote (El_Matador) Two eyes blind but the third one can explore Cos my third eye is the eye of the storm I see the war in the rawest form Ocean of blood in the storm I see dead talents on the shore Wasted breaths on the microphone Of rappers and politics, they're now the same whore Empire falls along with people's faith Fire in their scars, their privacy they'll will desecrate Stuck in the mire, screaming to the stars with hate Columbus came here to discover me Self-proclaimed civilized people wrote my history From Boston Tea Party to KKK poverty And now the whole world follows me solemnly What's my name? Say it, break the mystery wow miguel that's awesome, i'm very impressed, u have improved awhole lot in ur writing.
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