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****Progress Report on my Album!!!!****
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| eboyd |
Date: Monday, 08/Mar/10, 10:26 PM | Message # 181 |
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alright, let's compare:  
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| eboyd |
Date: Monday, 08/Mar/10, 10:27 PM | Message # 182 |
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lol @ the little blue square in the lower right corner 
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| Adam |
Date: Monday, 08/Mar/10, 10:28 PM | Message # 183 |
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Theres no blue square. (Shhhh.....)
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| EmSeeD |
Date: Monday, 08/Mar/10, 10:29 PM | Message # 184 |
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thats definitely looks better it makes the words stand out more and i like the agent x in the middle of the scope too thats cool,
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| Adam |
Date: Monday, 08/Mar/10, 10:35 PM | Message # 185 |
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Yeah the little guy is supposed to be erik.
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| eboyd |
Date: Monday, 08/Mar/10, 10:37 PM | Message # 186 |
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Quote (Adam) Theres no blue square. (Shhhh.....) LOL! Quote (EmSeeD) thats definitely looks better it makes the words stand out more and i like the agent x in the middle of the scope too thats cool, lol the little guy in the scope is on both versions. Quote (Adam) Yeah the little guy is supposed to be erik. 
my new theme song
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
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| Adam |
Date: Monday, 08/Mar/10, 11:08 PM | Message # 187 |
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Bump.
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| Dookie |
Date: Monday, 08/Mar/10, 11:12 PM | Message # 188 |
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thats dope, nice work adam, though i prefer the first one, 2nd ones, a bit visually noisy :P.
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| Adam |
Date: Monday, 08/Mar/10, 11:15 PM | Message # 189 |
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I want people to look at the cover and like pass it up, and then go back like wtf is that blue square. You know?
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| Adam |
Date: Monday, 08/Mar/10, 11:40 PM | Message # 190 |
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Just the blue square 
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| Boner-Jamz-11 |
Date: Tuesday, 09/Mar/10, 0:16 AM | Message # 191 |
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The x isn't really visable
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| eboyd |
Date: Tuesday, 09/Mar/10, 0:39 AM | Message # 192 |
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Quote (EYAR15) The x isn't really visable LaPen: it's "visible"  but yeah, i agree. that is something i should have mentioned before. it still looks dope, but if you could do something, Adam, to make it more visible, that would be great.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
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| Adam |
Date: Tuesday, 09/Mar/10, 7:14 AM | Message # 193 |
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What do you mean?
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| eboyd |
Date: Tuesday, 09/Mar/10, 7:27 AM | Message # 194 |
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Idk exactly what you could do, but at a quick glance you can see all of the letters, but the "X" is kind of hard to spot. Maybe you can move it a bit further out to the spot where the bg is brighter so you can see it?
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
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| eboyd |
Date: Tuesday, 09/Mar/10, 11:09 AM | Message # 195 |
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Quote (Uncharted) that cover look tight as hell *update* i made another version of my earthtones beat, its pretty much the same thing but on certain parts after the chorus theres like this patern where just the samples play. I think its better than before. Give me some feedback when you have a chance erik http://www.zshare.net/audio/734087352938e51b/ yo, here's the thing, that's dope as hell, and i like the idea, but the structure needs to be rearranged if you can. instead of putting that break down at the beginning of verse two, can you make verse 2 start off regular and go for 16 bars, then the breakdown comes in after for 4 bars and acts as a bridge, leading into the hook? it will be perfect because my two verses are 16 and Pensmoke's is 16 as well and it would be cool to have that little breakdown after Pen's verse so we can add in a little something over that and then have our hook. maybe i'll have a short speech or recite a poem right there on the bridge or something. btw, when i showed Mnemonic this beat and then showed him my inspiration for how my delivery should be (Cunninlynguists - "The Gates") he listened to both beats and said that this beat is better, so props to you man! you have a veteran MC/producer who works with big time underground artists telling you that you produced a beat better than one of Kno's best!
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
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