Quote (Lord_Meth)
How can I make my rhymes on paper?
thanks for bringing that up. that's a major factor that is also neglected in hip hop. i've noticed the cats with the best flows are the most organized on paper. it really comes down to knowing how to organize a bar/line on paper correctly because a lot of dudes write shit but it is out of sequence and they seem to have trouble reading what they wrote. some ways to fix this are:
-making sure the correct rhyme is at the end of each line.
-making sure there aren't too many or too little syllables in a line.
-making sure the rhyme scheme doesn't fuck up the flow.
below are some examples:
i've seen cats write in some bizarre ways. for example....
i'm fucking up the business, gonna get in this bear witness the wrath of my math, it's pure sickness. i stick this lyrical dagger through the hearts of men. arts begin to flourish and then i diminish them. emcees i displenish them and finish them like fatalities. my futility is greater cause for civility. i'm fucking with you animals like bestiality. clinically completely pleading insanity. emcees cannot manage to test my skill. yes, total vanity.
i have actually seen shit like this. it will be much easier to organize this like such:
i'm fucking up the business, gonna get in this/
bear witness the wrath of my math, it's pure sickness/
i stick this lyrical dagger through the hearts of men/
arts begin to flourish and then i diminish them/
emcees i displenish them and finish them like fatalities/
my futility is greater cause for civility/
i'm fucking with you animals like bestiality/
clinically completely pleading insanity/
emcees cannot manage to test my skill. yes, total vanity/
a rouge bastard and horror master in Amity.
that is better, but notice the second to last line. try rapping it over a beat. it's way too long. let's shorten it:
emcees cannot manage. do damage with total vanity/
now there are a few more changes that can be made:
emcees i displenish and finish them like fatalities/
my futility is greater than your style's totality/
note that we aren't necessarily making the line shorter in length, but rather less syllables, plus we added an extra rhyme in there to give us some leeway.
so now we have:
i'm fucking up the business, gonna get in this/
bear witness the wrath of my math, it's pure sickness/
i stick this lyrical dagger through the hearts of men/
arts begin to flourish and then i diminish them/
emcees i displenish and finish them like fatalities/
my futility is greater than your style's totality/
i'm fucking with you animals like bestiality/
clinically completely pleading insanity/
emcees cannot manage. do damage with total vanity/
a rouge bastard and horror master in Amity.
now, if you are having trouble with breath control, there are a few things you can do, but i will show you what i used to do:
* = small breath
____ = full breath
i'm fucking up the business, gonna get in this/
bear witness the wrath of my math, it's pure sickness/
i stick this lyrical dagger through the hearts of men/
arts begin to flourish and then i * diminish them/
_______________________________________
emcees i displenish and finish them like fatalities/
my futility is greater than your style's totality/
____________________________________
i'm fucking with you animals like bestiality/
clinically completely pleading insanity/
_________________________________
emcees cannot manage. do damage with total vanity/
a rouge bastard and horror master in Amity.
so basically now you have a layout of everything that will happen in your verse and the flow comes natural. you will have trouble getting the flow down at first but if you practice your verse until you memorize it it will come out so natural you will be shocked. it doesn't take long either. a matter of minutes for intensive purposes.