I like the first one, the "in it's place" is a better lead off it will give the reader/hearer a better since of direction For the preaching of the cross is to them that perish foolishness; but unto us which are saved it is the power of God 1 Cor 1:18 http: //www.youtube.com/user/thelastgreatone
The grass withers and the flowers fall, but the Word of our God shall stand forever is:40,8
"Casting Shadows" but that was off the top of the head i usually come up with my title first and then form my words around the title so i'm a lil different but I think some thing in that area would be good that was just to give you an idea you can play with it and see what you come up with hope that helped For the preaching of the cross is to them that perish foolishness; but unto us which are saved it is the power of God 1 Cor 1:18 http: //www.youtube.com/user/thelastgreatone
The grass withers and the flowers fall, but the Word of our God shall stand forever is:40,8
Message edited by LyricalContent - Friday, 26/Dec/08, 7:04 PM
Thanks. That's helpful. That is an interesting method you use btw. Keeps your style unique. I like that. That way you have a set concept. I should try that sometime.
yeah do that and see what you come up with, but the only thing is you don't have a lot of room to work with cause like you said the concept is pretty much set right from the beginning
that's nice i like that For the preaching of the cross is to them that perish foolishness; but unto us which are saved it is the power of God 1 Cor 1:18 http: //www.youtube.com/user/thelastgreatone
The grass withers and the flowers fall, but the Word of our God shall stand forever is:40,8