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How To Transition From Chorus To Verse
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 12:10 PM | Message # 1 |
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Okay Im making my first official beat right, and Im having trouble making a transition from the chorus into the verse were somebody will be rapping over...and I dont kno how to do it...so any help?
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| Meth |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 9:09 PM | Message # 2 |
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bump cmon NtG I need ur feedback!!!!
Help me out!!!
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| NtG |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 10:07 PM | Message # 3 |
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idk lol i have some trouble with this as well, but i usually cut out some drums (usually hi-hats) right before i go into the chorus
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 10:21 PM | Message # 4 |
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I think I found a good solution..Ill post it in a lil bit..one sec
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 10:33 PM | Message # 5 |
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Ok heres my beat, I think its done as is, but if any of yall think I need to do something else just tell me
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 10:58 PM | Message # 6 |
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bump u ass holes!!!!!
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| NtG |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 10:58 PM | Message # 7 |
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nobody cares!!
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 10:59 PM | Message # 8 |
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JUST LISTEN TO MY FUCKING BEAT PLEASE!!!!!!
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| NtG |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 11:01 PM | Message # 9 |
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lol i did. and i dont like how in all of your beats you have just bare drums playing that lead into the beat. you need to work on your intros more. i couldnt even tell where the chorus was so i cant comment on your transition. other than that, its alright.
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 11:02 PM | Message # 10 |
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Quote (NtG) lol i did. and i dont like how in all of your beats you have just bare drums playing that lead into the beat. you need to work on your intros more. i couldnt even tell where the chorus was so i cant comment on your transition. other than that, its alright
Bare beats?
wat does that mean?
I took it into the mixer and changed some things to give it more thump I even blended 2 kicks to make a louder kick
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| NtG |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 11:04 PM | Message # 11 |
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i mean that i dont like how you just have the drums playing without a melody, and then the melody comes in. it sounds bad.
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 11:05 PM | Message # 12 |
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Quote (NtG) i mean that i dont like how you just have the drums playing without a melody, and then the melody comes in. it sounds bad.
So when I have my snare and hi hat going I should add a melody into it so it wont sound bare?
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| NtG |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 11:07 PM | Message # 13 |
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or maybe do the melody first w/o the drums, and then bring the drums in somehow.
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| Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 11:08 PM | Message # 14 |
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Quote (NtG) or maybe do the melody first w/o the drums, and then bring the drums in somehow.
Hmph.....okay Ill see wat I can whip up, so Ill try doing the melody first and adding the drums in after that okay
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| eboyd |
Date: Saturday, 21/Mar/09, 11:10 PM | Message # 15 |
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is the hook where you have the higher pitched electronic piano sound come in? if so, you need to make your verses longer and usually you actually put the fuller sounds in the hook and drop some sound in the verses, not the other way around. the acoustic, lower pitched piano sound is fuller than the other one, but it does work for your hook. i like what you did with that last hook where you had both pianos playing at the same time. you should do that for all your hooks on this beat. other than that you should lengthen your verses to 16 bars (just the standard. you can have as many as you like, but 8 is way too short especially if your hook is going to be the standard 8 bars too) and, like NtG said, change up the fugly intro  btw, you know how to count bars, right? anyways, that aside, this is by far your best beat i've heard yet. keep up the good work and maybe i'll bless you with a verse 
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