i got 7-8 people ready rip up a beat. it needs to go HARD. a beat that also has longevity, and can hold the weight of so many mcs. these are the people who will be on the track so far
haha, nice! have you recorded it yet? if so, post it on a file sharing site and post a link to it! maybe that way we can get an idea of where you are going with it and take the same angle with our verses.
ya, its pretty sick. id like to hear the finished product too Youtube http://www.youtube.com/user/TheHipHopSpot SPC http://southparkcoalition.webs.com/
http://www.mediafire.com/file/07nw490n1mvqdj8/PsioNic%27s%20verse.mp3 There's the verse. You have to download it from there to here it.. I have it as a WAV too but it was too big to just post here, though ill send it as a WAV file to hiphopspot so mixing is easier When I write these bars power my heart louder so I stay near the pen like guard towers or farm plowers
http://www.mediafire.com/?35qy12yfoyydy4j right there, not mixed and also theres that weird intermission and it cuts off my verse, hoping that wont be a conflict when the beat gets lengthened When I write these bars power my heart louder so I stay near the pen like guard towers or farm plowers
alright, here's a preliminary acappella recording of my verse as well as the lyrics in text. any criticism is appreciated. if you like certain lines and not others, for example, let me know and please tell me why. this will be helpful. i need to make this as dope as possible :
Enter the dragon. I'm everlasting. No rapper comes after me/ I'll deplete your seratonin making your depressed mind atrophy/ You're hearing me telepathically which proves to you my piety/ I make ancient civilizations out of contemporary societies/ Causing anxiety, never putting your mind at ease/ So ill, there's no diagnosis for my disease/ While most emcees are remedial sort of like Hooked on Phonics/ My words move worlds just like plate tectonics/ The master of the sonic universe. No man can eclipse this/ You'd better pause before competing with me like an elipsis/ Like hieroglyphics my supremacy has been known since ancient times/ But far from understood by men with paleolithic minds/ My prolific lines haunt the average psychopath/ Into a state of confusion and maniacal wrath/ So if you wish to battle your attack better not be complacent/ Or you'll be leaving with your face and the side of your waist adjacent/
Enter the dragon. I'm everlasting. No rapper comes after me/ I'll deplete your seratonin making your depressed mind atrophy/ You're hearing me telepathically which proves to you my piety/ I make ancient civilizations out of contemporary societies/ Causing anxiety, never putting your mind at ease/ So ill, there's no diagnosis for my disease/ While most emcees are remedial sort of like Hooked on Phonics/ My words move worlds just like plate tectonics/ The master of the sonic universe. No man can eclipse this/ You'd better pause before competing with me like an elipsis/ Like hieroglyphics my supremacy has been known since ancient times/ But far from understood by men with paleolithic minds/ My prolific lines haunt the average psychopath/ Into a state of confusion and maniacal wrath/ So if you wish to battle your attack better not be complacent/ Or you'll be leaving with your face and the side of your waist adjacent/
just so complex and fast, i mean wtf, why do niggas waste they time on up and coming wack cats when dudes like be coming up with shit like this^^^^^^^^^^^damn erik you went in ....
Yeah that was ill, check mine out too uncharted links up there
Added (03/Apr/11, 11:32 PM) --------------------------------------------- To fall asleep I jump off a cliff in a coma Keep the heat knockin, if the beats Gotham Nic is the joker I drop an infinite quota of talk prohibiting quotes so keep your mouth shut with the hits like the cops are sniffing for motives
I speak subliminal thoughts and draw attention to my writtens leaving listeners shocked like sonic weapons I'll beat you kids with your blocks and all your friends can run and come and see some bitches get tossed to doggy heaven
You want to battle me when you're lying using gassed mics and youll be past tense like youre driving through a camp site feed the fire dude and find abuse to add strife when I blow through words cuz my minds the fuse to match might
No ones fucking with us if we trade em dope lines we solid across the track like some railroad ties So call it an autograph, when we gave you those signs of dominance, follow that with your gazing prone eyes
Cuz this toxic group of rappers, stopped to prove we rocked the booth to ashes lots of crews get gassed and softly lose their modest tune through passion but excuse me while I throw up, grimace while I spit its not bragging when I say that ive written till im sick
When I write these bars power my heart louder so I stay near the pen like guard towers or farm plowers
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