thank you my friend. i still feel i need to touch it up in certain parts though. i'm asking everyone i can to find out what parts now. my new theme song
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
this could be good for a youtube like yo eric u can create yourself a segment like deepru is having like the cipher and u can create like a show for yourself and u can record these on your phone or something like u did whit that white man one and put it up and u can do like every time im jus givin ideas
this could be good for a youtube like yo eric u can create yourself a segment like deepru is having like the cipher and u can create like a show for yourself and u can record these on your phone or something like u did whit that white man one and put it up and u can do like every time im jus givin ideas
yeah thats me thinking by the way Meth u know why Jus Allah uses Allah in his name?? the dude is a 5 percenter in the 5 percenter religion Allah means Arm Leg Leg Arm Head = The Black Man is God
thats so.......not interesting LMAO jk nah I aint kno that is that y Rakim uses it
various islamic sects are currently growin i mean the nation of islam was a islamic cult too they taught the people that the black man is supreme and the white man is sub human well but now the NOI is more of mainstreem islamic religion
OOOOOOOHHH explains why Ras Kass made that song basically supporting that belief right?
well from what i saw Rass Kass aint a black supremacist so i dont think he was backing up the NOI or the 5 percenters but for sure he a black nationalist so he was tryin to point the fact that the white man messed the world not us blacks or minorities as some say
So... Are there any grammatical errors or anything in my poem? I found a few things that need to change already and I changed them, but I need help changing the "...throns adorned their stems" line. It seems awkward but idk where. I'd like to keep the same idea behind the line and I need to keep the worde 'stems' at the end, but it needs an adjustment to fit the meter better. Help please! my new theme song
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"