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Help Me Edit My New Poem
eboyd_ Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 0:17 AM | Message # 61

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Here Chinita. Let me jog your memory.
Chinita Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 0:19 AM | Message # 62

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Here Chinita. Let me jog your memory.

hahahaha ok stop, i'm cracking up already lol


Chinita Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 0:19 AM | Message # 63

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i'm looseing it lol

eboyd_ Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 0:20 AM | Message # 64

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lol! i think we're going back and forth here. i just responded to you on the video too!
Chinita Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 0:34 AM | Message # 65

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lol! i think we're going back and forth here. i just responded to you on the video too!

hahaha yea i'm dizzy lol but i like the back and forth.. keeps me in shape n alert smile lmao


eboyd_ Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 0:34 AM | Message # 66

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lol! you've been following my training regimen i take it?
Chinita Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 0:36 AM | Message # 67

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lol! you've been following my training regimen i take it?

yes i have, i always listen to my personal trainer sir eboyd. lol just pass me the corona when ur finished with me lol


eboyd_ Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 0:38 AM | Message # 68

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LMAO! my dad calls Corona "cat piss."
LyricalContent Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 0:53 AM | Message # 69

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E we need to collaborate on something one day it's going to be hare though because we have to totally different styles, I have to start back writhing to get back in my mold too

For the preaching of the cross is to them that
perish foolishness; but unto us which are saved it is the power of God
1 Cor 1:18
http:
//www.youtube.com/user/thelastgreatone


The grass withers and the flowers fall,
but the Word of our God shall stand forever
is:40,8
eboyd_ Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 0:55 AM | Message # 70

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sounds good, but how?
LyricalContent Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 0:56 AM | Message # 71

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I don't know I haven't figured that part out yet

For the preaching of the cross is to them that
perish foolishness; but unto us which are saved it is the power of God
1 Cor 1:18
http:
//www.youtube.com/user/thelastgreatone


The grass withers and the flowers fall,
but the Word of our God shall stand forever
is:40,8
eboyd_ Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 0:58 AM | Message # 72

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lol! what, like we come up with an idea and brainstorm together then one of us writes it and the other edits?
LyricalContent Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:07 AM | Message # 73

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ether that or one of us can start and then the other come behind and feeds off what the other writes but to do that it will have to be something we both can agree on and like i said we have two totally different styles so it going to be challenging

For the preaching of the cross is to them that
perish foolishness; but unto us which are saved it is the power of God
1 Cor 1:18
http:
//www.youtube.com/user/thelastgreatone


The grass withers and the flowers fall,
but the Word of our God shall stand forever
is:40,8
eboyd_ Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:08 AM | Message # 74

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i feel you. i used to do spoken word though so i think it will be fine.
LyricalContent Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:12 AM | Message # 75

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yeah it should but first i have to go back in to my lyrical gym an do some exercising

For the preaching of the cross is to them that
perish foolishness; but unto us which are saved it is the power of God
1 Cor 1:18
http:
//www.youtube.com/user/thelastgreatone


The grass withers and the flowers fall,
but the Word of our God shall stand forever
is:40,8
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