Help Me Edit My New Poem
|
|
Acekat00o |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 5:11 PM | Message # 31 |
Heads
Posts: 1642
|
Quote (eboyd) LMAO! Will do.
Graffiti
|
|
|
|
eboyd |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 6:16 PM | Message # 32 |
Heads
Posts: 13145
|
Hopefully Chinita gets on soon. She is a big fan of poetry like this and can probably help.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
|
|
|
|
Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 7:00 PM | Message # 33 |
Heads
Posts: 6627
|
Most likely wont happen until Monday..this site is always more active on weekdays
Sick With It
|
|
|
|
Chinita |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 7:57 PM | Message # 34 |
Heads
Posts: 5823
|
wow erik this is a fantastic poem, i read it a few times and think its like meth said, its perfection but we arent experts. i'm glad menace broke it down and took care of that part, thanks menace my dear I'm very impressed and you have improved alot. can i save it to my computer?
|
|
|
|
Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 7:58 PM | Message # 35 |
Heads
Posts: 6627
|
LMAO u asked for permission?
Sick With It
|
|
|
|
Chinita |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 8:00 PM | Message # 36 |
Heads
Posts: 5823
|
Quote (MethTheProphet) LMAO u asked for permission? LOL stop laughing at me LOL LOL Lmao yes i don't want to steal it, hahaha
|
|
|
|
Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 8:03 PM | Message # 37 |
Heads
Posts: 6627
|
fuck that its already stored into my computer LMAO jk
Sick With It
|
|
|
|
Chinita |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 8:06 PM | Message # 38 |
Heads
Posts: 5823
|
Quote (MethTheProphet) fuck that its already stored into my computer LMAO jk u thief i'm calling da police lmao lol
|
|
|
|
Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 8:11 PM | Message # 39 |
Heads
Posts: 6627
|
Thats not a reason to call the police but this is..... ![](http://dsgross.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/soulja-boy.jpg)
Sick With It
|
|
|
|
Chinita |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 8:12 PM | Message # 40 |
Heads
Posts: 5823
|
Quote (MethTheProphet) Thats not a reason to call the police but this is..... omg do u hear that?
|
|
|
|
Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 8:15 PM | Message # 41 |
Heads
Posts: 6627
|
YYYYOOOOOOOOOOUUUUU
Sick With It
|
|
|
|
Chinita |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 8:28 PM | Message # 42 |
Heads
Posts: 5823
|
Quote (MissChinita41) omg do u hear that? its the sound of da police ![smile](http://src.ucoz.net/sm/23/smile.gif)
|
|
|
|
eboyd |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 10:11 PM | Message # 43 |
Heads
Posts: 13145
|
Thank you very much Chinita yes, you may save it to your PC (or Mac. Lol!). The beauty of this type of abstract poetry is that it can mean anything. It is about what it means to you. It can apply to a lot of things. The thing about capitalism is simply the intended meaning and it is what I had in mind while writing it.
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
|
|
|
|
eboyd |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 10:15 PM | Message # 44 |
Heads
Posts: 13145
|
Btw Meth, you are now banned for a week for posting that pic
my new theme song
erikboyd60@hotmail.com
"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"
-T.S. Eliot
battle record:
7-0-0
|
|
|
|
Lord_Meth |
Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 10:16 PM | Message # 45 |
Heads
Posts: 6627
|
LMAO!!!!!!!!!!
Sick With It
|
|
|
|