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Help Me Edit My New Poem
Acekat00o Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 5:11 PM | Message # 31

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LMAO! Will do.

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eboyd Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 6:16 PM | Message # 32

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 Hopefully Chinita gets on soon. She is a big fan of poetry like this and can probably help.
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

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Lord_Meth Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 7:00 PM | Message # 33

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 Most likely wont happen until Monday..this site is always more active on weekdays
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Chinita Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 7:57 PM | Message # 34

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 wow erik this is a fantastic poem, i read it a few times and think its like meth said, its perfection but we arent experts. i'm glad menace broke it down and took care of that part, thanks menace my dear smile I'm very impressed and you have improved alot. can i save it to my computer? smile
Lord_Meth Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 7:58 PM | Message # 35

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 LMAO u asked for permission?
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Chinita Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 8:00 PM | Message # 36

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LMAO u asked for permission?

LOL stop laughing at me LOL LOL Lmao yes i don't want to steal it, hahaha biggrin
Lord_Meth Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 8:03 PM | Message # 37

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 fuck that its already stored into my computer LMAO jk
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Chinita Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 8:06 PM | Message # 38

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fuck that its already stored into my computer LMAO jk

u thief i'm calling da police lmao lol smile
Lord_Meth Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 8:11 PM | Message # 39

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 Thats not a reason to call the police but this is.....


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Chinita Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 8:12 PM | Message # 40

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Thats not a reason to call the police but this is.....

omg do u hear that?
Lord_Meth Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 8:15 PM | Message # 41

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 YYYYOOOOOOOOOOUUUUU
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Chinita Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 8:28 PM | Message # 42

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omg do u hear that?

its the sound of da police smile

eboyd Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 10:11 PM | Message # 43

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 Thank you very much Chinita smile yes, you may save it to your PC (or Mac. Lol!). The beauty of this type of abstract poetry is that it can mean anything. It is about what it means to you. It can apply to a lot of things. The thing about capitalism is simply the intended meaning and it is what I had in mind while writing it.
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

-T.S. Eliot

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eboyd Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 10:15 PM | Message # 44

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 Btw Meth, you are now banned for a week for posting that pic biggrin
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

-T.S. Eliot

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Lord_Meth Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 10:16 PM | Message # 45

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 LMAO!!!!!!!!!!
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