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Help Me Edit My New Poem
Chinita Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 10:45 PM | Message # 46

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Thank you very much Chinita yes, you may save it to your PC (or Mac. Lol!). The beauty of this type of abstract poetry is that it can mean anything. It is about what it means to you. It can apply to a lot of things. The thing about capitalism is simply the intended meaning and it is what I had in mind while writing it.

Well ur welcome erik, my daughter loved it. she loves poetry also...

eboyd Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 11:33 PM | Message # 47

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 Cool. And like I said before, when she turns 18 you need to send her over here wink
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eboyd Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 11:34 PM | Message # 48

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 Jp. Make sure you let her know I said thank you though.
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Kiba Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 11:45 PM | Message # 49

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Cool. And like I said before, when she turns 18 you need to send her over here

lol

I looked at the moon so full and so bright
And then at the fireplace with its flickering light
And realised why this world will never be right

Chinita Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 11:46 PM | Message # 50

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Cool. And like I said before, when she turns 18 you need to send her over here

lol i'mma kick ur butt...my daughter will not date no backstreat boy... she likes nsync

Chinita Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 11:49 PM | Message # 51

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Jp. Make sure you let her know I said thank you though.

np i'll tell her you said so..
LyricalContent Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 11:54 PM | Message # 52

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 I love the your work E there's nothing to change or edit but then you know it's like I told you before each time you go to look at it again you'll see something different that's how i do my work but you have a different style of writing then I do
For the preaching of the cross is to them that
perish foolishness; but unto us which are saved it is the power of God
1 Cor 1:18
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The grass withers and the flowers fall,
but the Word of our God shall stand forever
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eboyd Date: Saturday, 15/Nov/08, 11:57 PM | Message # 53

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 Thank you and yes, I agree. I do the same. Why have I not seen any of your writing?
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LyricalContent Date: Sunday, 16/Nov/08, 0:06 AM | Message # 54

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Thank you and yes, I agree. I do the same. Why have I not seen any of your writing?

well I don't have anything new at the moment I've been slacking off (i know it not a good thing to do for a writer) if you want to see some old work i have then i'll put some up I just thought if i put some up it should be some new stuff you know?
For the preaching of the cross is to them that
perish foolishness; but unto us which are saved it is the power of God
1 Cor 1:18
http:
//www.youtube.com/user/thelastgreatone

The grass withers and the flowers fall,
but the Word of our God shall stand forever
is:40,8
eboyd Date: Sunday, 16/Nov/08, 4:26 AM | Message # 55

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 Understandable. I still wouldn't mind reading/hearing some old stuff.
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Acekat00o Date: Sunday, 16/Nov/08, 4:48 AM | Message # 56

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 Can i have a cookye ?
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eboyd Date: Sunday, 16/Nov/08, 5:12 AM | Message # 57

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 Yes, but not a cookie.
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Acekat00o Date: Sunday, 16/Nov/08, 5:26 AM | Message # 58

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 then can i have an apple ?
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Lord_Meth Date: Sunday, 16/Nov/08, 10:20 AM | Message # 59

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 You can have a homie..........over a ho..............
Let me go get Kiba for u Im sure he'll be more than happy to be ur homie
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eboyd Date: Sunday, 16/Nov/08, 1:01 PM | Message # 60

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 OK, back on topic... My poem... That is the topic at hand. Any other advice? If not, people who want to save it to their computer, do so now, everyone else, let it slip into oblivion.
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"True poetry can communicate before it is understood"

-T.S. Eliot

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