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Help Me Edit My New Poem
Chinita Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:19 AM | Message # 76

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 lol i think it is cat piss erik lol ur go daddy is a smart man smile
eboyd_ Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:20 AM | Message # 77

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 lol! (at both of you)
Chinita Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:20 AM | Message # 78

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lyrical gym

hahaha hey that sounds fun..
Chinita Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:21 AM | Message # 79

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lol! (at both of you)

u disrespect me and i'll swing some cat piss on u lol

eboyd_ Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:22 AM | Message # 80

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LyricalContent Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:26 AM | Message # 81

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hahaha hey that sounds fun..

it's pretty intense and frustrating if you take your lyrics seriously
For the preaching of the cross is to them that
perish foolishness; but unto us which are saved it is the power of God
1 Cor 1:18
http:
//www.youtube.com/user/thelastgreatone

The grass withers and the flowers fall,
but the Word of our God shall stand forever
is:40,8
eboyd_ Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:29 AM | Message # 82

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 truth.
Chinita Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:38 AM | Message # 83

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it's pretty intense and frustrating if you take your lyrics seriously

sounds intense, but doesnt that just usually come to you then u just write it down or u sit and concentrate on it? how was your thanksgiving lyrical? well i'll talk to u guys tomorrow.. i'm beat and going to bed smile good night guys.

eboyd_ Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:39 AM | Message # 84

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eboyd_ Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:39 AM | Message # 85

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LyricalContent Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:40 AM | Message # 86

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ounds intense, but doesnt that just usually come to you then u just write it down or u sit and concentrate on it? how was your thanksgiving lyrical? well i'll talk to u guys tomorrow.. i'm beat and going to bed smile good night guys.

it was good you have a good night
For the preaching of the cross is to them that
perish foolishness; but unto us which are saved it is the power of God
1 Cor 1:18
http:
//www.youtube.com/user/thelastgreatone

The grass withers and the flowers fall,
but the Word of our God shall stand forever
is:40,8
Chinita Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 1:50 AM | Message # 87

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btw, check your rep points

omg e lol tu eres loco, que te pasa a ti? i dios mio este muchacho me tienes loca.. mira como se treves hablarme asi. no see pero me gusta.. lol
eboyd_ Date: Saturday, 29/Nov/08, 2:09 AM | Message # 88

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 i understood about half of that. lol!
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